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Review of chapter "Memories" from Harry
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So, Dawn told Yami Bakura the truth about her origins. I'm not totally surprised that he took it so well. Having lived as long as he has, he's run into a few odds and ends over the years. But, I will say this: If ANYONE tries to harm either Buffy and/or Dawn, be prepared for a Tag Team SHADOW GAME! I say this because I feel that BOTH Yami's will want to get in on this. One cares for Buffy, the other for Dawn. Cause either one of them trouble, your in for headache city. Threaten BOTH, ITS SHADOW GAME TIME!
Comments from author:
Brilliant! :) And I agree with you there. I somehow sensed that Yami Bakura would listen to Dawn's story about her origins, and also take it pretty well, too.

Thanks for the nice feedback. It really means a lot to me, and encourages me to write more as well. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thoughts" from Harry
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EASY Yami Bakura! I know you want Dawn, but you need to take it SLOW! Get to know the lady, and maybe find out the fact that she IS The Key! That may or may not change his desire for her. He may need to talk to his light counterpart on this matter.
Comments from author:
Good idea. :) However, I've done some research using buffy.wikia.com, and here's what I've found out:

"It's never made entirely clear if Dawn is actually human or still the transfigured Key, though many characters repeatedly state that Dawn *was* the Key after Season Five, and Dawn herself stated that she is no longer the Key, and even if she still is, she no longer opens anything."

I myself think that Dawn is the former Key, because after Buffy, in an act of nobility, sacrificed herself by jumping into the portal that Dawn's blood had opened thanks to the cuts that Doc (a worshiper of Glorificus) had made on her stomach, the portal closed, and stayed that way for good.
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Confessions" from Harry
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I think that Joyce would have liked Yami Bakura. Anyone who treated her daughters with respect and earned their respect is someone you like having around. And, heaven forbid, if anyTHINK had broken into the house, it would have been time for a SHADOW GAME to protect this family!
Comments from author:
I agree that Joyce would have liked Yami Bakura, too. If she had seen how Yami Bakura treated Dawn with respect and vice-versa, she would have seen him as part of the family, and would have been proud to see him fight for Dawn like the knights of old would fight for their ladies.
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "At the Bronze Part 2" from Harry
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Yami Bakura is being NICE for change! And why not. No Shadow Games going on, no threats, nothing he need worry about. Now, its time to enjoy the evening, and maybe meet the family.
Comments from author:
I cannot agree more. I think he needed to enjoy an evening at the Bronze, and meet Dawn's family, of course. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "At the Park and then the Bronze" from Harry
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Easy Dawn! Just because you have something of a crush on this person, does not mean that you should forget your manners and get to know him! FIRST, get to know him! THEN, let things take their course! And do NOT forget to have him meet Buffy and the gang! That is MANDATORY!!!!
Comments from author:
I agree. :) I also think that girls should court guys, and not just vice-versa.
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Plans" from Harry
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Just because the Vamps and most of the creatures of the night have the night off does NOT mean that everything that goes BUMP in the night is off! Dawn and her friend are about to meet one of them, although this one might have romance on his mind.
Comments from author:
I agree with you there. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Beginning" from Harry
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A very nice beginning. Time for Dawn and Yami Bakura to meet up!
Comments from author:
I agree... :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "At the Bronze Part 2" from Harry
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Sounds like some romance here. Question is, what will B have to say about this!
Comments from author:
I agree.
Review By [Harry] • Date [28 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "At the Park and then the Bronze" from Harry
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So, Janice finally met up with Yami Bakura. Now, let the REAL games begin!!!
Comments from author:
Indeed, indeed.
Review By [Harry] • Date [28 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Plans" from Harry
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Sounds like things are about to get very interesting. I look foward to the meeting.
Comments from author:
I agree.
Review By [Harry] • Date [28 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Beginning" from Harry
Review:
Sounds like things are about to get interesting here. I look forward to seeing if and when Dawn and Bakura finally tell everyone.
Comments from author:
Thanks! :) Glad you like it so far.
Review By [Harry] • Date [28 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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