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Review of chapter "3" from Netchka
Review:
More please, more please! I really really wanna read more please! Thank you! :)
Review By [Netchka] • Date [14 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [3 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from serenityselena
Review:
oh my... what twists...
things are getting more interesting for the Scoobies ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [16 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from purrfus
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Something tells me the First is really really gonna regret that.

Cole and Xander. Is fun. So is the relationship through the Charmed ones or Cole's human half?
Review By [purrfus] • Date [16 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from Dhampyr
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Did Cole just make the First corporeal? Because I sense an EPIC beatdown if he did.

Also we need Xander making comments about where his "Aunt Phoebe" is at some point just to bust Cole's chops a bit.
Review By [Dhampyr] • Date [16 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from brokenangel
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Well this was short. I applaud the idea. I'm also kind of insulted by the reviewers. None of them are making the obvious connection to Cole being his uncle by marriage of a Charmed One. Time travel anyone?
Review By [brokenangel] • Date [16 Sep 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from aeraveil
Review:
OMG!! You have Xander "I hate demons" Harris related to Belthazor?!! I am definitely looking forward to seeing where you will go with this story!!
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Well there is a perfectly logical reason why he hates demons. This is Cole we're talking about and the human side of his family are no saints, can you imagine what the demon side is like? Yeesh. Talk about disfunction.

Lol.
Review By [aeraveil] • Date [15 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from MagnusXXN
Review:
Interesting. I wasn't expecting to see this updated. Kinda wonder how Cole is Xander's uncle. Cole's father died in the 1880's, so I suppose he could be a great, great, great uncle. Or if we mean Cole's demon mom and one of Xander's parents are related, well that opens up a whole new can of worms.

Cole's still The Source? Is Phoebe hanging around somewhere? Is she pregnant and Queen of the under world yet?

I could very well see Buffy trying to attack someone because they hurt Spike, even if Spike started it. Season 6 and 7 bring out my frustrations when it comes to come characters.

At any rate, if I haven't said so before I'm glad to see an update. And I can't wait to see what happens next. Does the First turn into that big Bull headed demon? Is it more bark then bite in person?



): )
Review By [MagnusXXN] • Date [15 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from BlueEyedJedi
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Cole may be 'THE SOURCE OF OF ALL EVIL', unlike the First he's not a Jerk/Bitch. (Take your pick.)

Being Corporal won't make the First happy, Being Corporal means you can be beat to a pulp, and the list of volunteers for that is legion.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [15 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from JasonBarnett
Review:
“Who do you trust, Buffy?”

"People who come into my home and don't taunt my allies and make asses of themselves Xander."
Comments from author:
If that were true, she wouldn't trust Spike either.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [15 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2" from Morgomir
Review:
Interesting start.Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [15 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from sandman
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roflmao
Review By [sandman] • Date [17 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from twlight
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I love it. I am looking forward to reading more.
Review By [twlight] • Date [27 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from ajw
Review:
Interesting.

So if Cole is Xander's uncle then does that mean that Xander is also part-demon? If he is then what kind of powers does he have? The common demon ones like energy balls and shimmering or some of the higher demonic powers. It will be interesting to find out. Course if he is part demon Buffy will assume he's evil and refuse to listen to what anyone else says otherwise, Willow will be convinced she can make him fully human with magic when such magic is far beyond her and is even beyond the Charmed Ones. Course Willow won't listen considering even post Darth Willow she still seemed to believe that magic could solve everything.
Review By [ajw] • Date [22 Jul 13] • Rating [6 out of 10]
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