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Review of chapter "The First Trial" from CRose
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I'm sad to see you have moved on from this, it was starting to get original and very good.
Review By [CRose] • Date [30 Nov 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Trial" from kleach
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Interesting story so far. waiting for more
Review By [kleach] • Date [20 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Trial" from fran
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I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!
Review By [fran] • Date [7 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Trial" from removedauthor
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Awesome story so far I look forward to the next chapter.
Review By [removedauthor] • Date [7 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Trial" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [5 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Trial" from Darkstrider
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Love this! Nicely written with no obvious ooc characters. Love it.
Review By [Darkstrider] • Date [5 Jan 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Trial" from Raider
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well done, I like the inclusion of the katana fleet.
Review By [Raider] • Date [4 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Trial" from misterwhy
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Interesting story so far.
I'm guessing you're either a yank or unfamiliar with modern english.
Get a beta reader.
Keep writing. It can only get better with time.
Review By [misterwhy] • Date [4 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Kessel Run" from DarthTenebrus
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Correct your spelling and your punctuation, and you might just make this your masterpiece.

So John is the soldier spirit. Wouldn't happen to be John Connor, would it?
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [4 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Trial" from Bobboky
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Nice work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [4 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Trial" from JediKnight
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Great job on the new chapter, I look forward to more.

-Any chance of Xander meeting Asajj Ventress and/or Ahsoka Tano?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [4 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Trial" from tavinseven
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This is a really great story. I almost cried when Bultar died but I could see why it was necessary. The story itself seems to be moving pretty fast so you might want to think about slowing some of the interactions between characters down such as Faith and Xander's relationship. This is a great story and I hope you keep it updating and soon.
Review By [tavinseven] • Date [3 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Trial" from evilreader
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excellent and well-written could use a bit more spell check other than that no problems please write more
Review By [evilreader] • Date [3 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Trial" from cyberfish
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I am enjoying this one a lot.I hope you can post more chapters soon,buy I`m willing to wain until you can
Review By [cyberfish] • Date [3 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Trial" from Compston
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Interesting story so far
Review By [Compston] • Date [3 Jan 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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