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Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from DieselDriver
Review:
Ah sad... It's like the doctor tries to tell his companions. There are certain points in time that simply cannot be changed. If God wills it, then it's going to happen.
Comments from author:
Again, not sure what your commenting on but I expect it all turns out for the best.

As I say I wrote this ages ago.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from DieselDriver
Review:
I sure hope she doesn't die.
Comments from author:
I expect she didn't.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from DieselDriver
Review:
Sheesh! She never learns.

There had to be something she could do, after all wasn’t she a way powerful witch?
Comments from author:
Not sure what you mean coz I've not looked at this story in a long time...I'm guessing Willow just did something silly.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from DieselDriver
Review:
Oh well, at least we know where the sound of bagpipes originated.
Comments from author:
You know bagpipes used to be popular in Northern England...but they grew out of them and started Brass Bands instead..

Cheers,
D.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from DieselDriver
Review:
Ok, I was wrong, it wasn't either the two movies I thought of. But here is a cool (no pun intended) temperature chart I found.

THE QUEEN CITY TEMPERATURE CONVERSION CHART

60° F: Arizonans shiver uncontrollably; people in Buffalo are still sunbathing.

50° F: Californians try to turn on the heat; people in Buffalo plant gardens.

40° F: Italian sports cars won’t start; people in Buffalo drive with the windows down.

32° F: Distilled water freezes; Lake Erie water gets thicker.

20° F: Floridians don coats, thermal underwear, gloves and wool hats; people in Buffalo throw on a light jacket.

15° F: People in Buffalo have the last cookout before it gets cold.

0° F: All the people in Phoenix die. Buffalonians close the windows.

10° below zero: Californians fly away to Mexico. The Girl Scouts in Buffalo are selling cookies door to door.

25° below zero: Hollywood disintegrates; people in Buffalo get out their winter coats.

40° below zero: Washington, DC runs out of hot air; people in Buffalo let the dogs sleep indoors.

100° below zero: Santa Claus abandons the North Pole. Buffalonians get frustrated because they can’t start the car.

460° below zero: All atomic motion stops (absolute zero on the Kelvin scale); people in Buffalo start saying, “Cold enough for ya?”

500° below zero: Hell freezes over. The Bills win the Super Bowl.

Whoever the "Bills" are...
Comments from author:
Washington DC runs out of hot air? No, never tell me it isn't so!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from DieselDriver
Review:
Ok, tatties and neeps answered. There are some really hilarious pictures of "wild haggisis" on the internet.

Well, POO! it won't let me paste a picture here. http://www.patchtogether.com/media/designs/ANIMALS_4912_DEFAULT_4f7af671c2893.jpg
Comments from author:
Yes there are and I tried to add a picture for the story but it didn't work...a bit like the link you sent me!

Oh well, never mind.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from DieselDriver
Review:
Umm, "Tatties and Neeps"???
Comments from author:
Tatties = potatoes.
Neeps = parsnips.

Traditional Scottish food.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from DieselDriver
Review:
Sorry not up on all the nuances of "English", English. What is "Cliff the SoCO" an SoCO?

At this point I'm not sure if this is the movie about the giant ants or the one about the giant tarantulas. I decided not to look it up, I'll find out soon enough.'

Sounds like the same sort of stupid meddling that Willow did in the "Faith in the army" series. Once again, Road to hell... And in this case even her intentions weren't good. She deserves to have her brain scrubbed. Oh wait, that's what she did to Kennedy. Well, maybe not then. But she needs to get over this urge to meddle. I know it's fiction, not serious.
Comments from author:
Scenes of Crime Officer, that's like a CSI.

I think this story was the last time Willow tried anything like that in the GUN-verse.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from ShyBob
Review:
I enjoyed your usual balance of action and humor, now with Seasonal Affective Disorder! You had me really worried about our heroines. The shameless Deus ex machina was awesome and surprisingly appropriate.
Comments from author:
Thank-you. It's been awhile since I wrote this fic, but I do sorta remember having to write a away out of the hole I'd dug for myself. This is what happens when you have the start of a fic but not the end!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [4 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from etienneofthewestwind
Review:
Your story description had me thinking of the Monty Python sketch about man-eating Blancmange. I'd never heard the Haggis-animal folklore before. Now you have me thinking about possible jackalope attacks...
Comments from author:
The Scots have been claiming that the Haggis is a real animal for ages! I just took it to its logical extreme!

Thanks,
Dave.
Review By [etienneofthewestwind] • Date [23 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from Gideon
Review:
What a lovely terrible story! At least that poor town will have plenty to eat for the next year or so, what with all the wild haggis remains. Well done to Kennedy in laying her life on the line and well done to Willow in saving her at the last minute. It is kinda ironic that Willow's problem with mind control was solved by someone messing with her mind!
I can't wait to see what you have planned for the rest of this series. Buffy the alcoholic should be good for a fair few embarrassing stories and a little general humiliation at least. How long before she tries to drag Xander off to a nearby closet as the only available man in sight?
Comments from author:
Thank-you, another story in this series is coming up soon. Xander and much embarrassment is on the horizon!

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [16 Feb 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from Hecatonchires
Review:
Suitably absurd, even it it was a Willow angst story ^_-
Comments from author:
Cheers....I think!

Dave.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [14 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! Great ending, if you're not a haggis or a small kid who saw his or her father eaten by wild haggissisisisi. But could you have given us more ominous foreshadowing? I don't know if I'll ever have the strength of will to read another story in this series. Just kidding! Now go and write the next story in your series so we find out what horrors Our Heroes face next. I liked the goddess, by the way. Is she "real"? Or did you make her up?
Comments from author:
A lot of these stories are already written (too much time on my hands) except for the next one! So I better start thinking up something good.

If you check the series info on this one I think there's 18 stories to go and every now and again they'll be something pointing to the horrific climax of this series.

Its fun (and a lot of hard work) doing a series before you post them, you can have 'story arcs' and go back and change things so as you think up new plot twists (very 1984), like Buffy's alcoholism!

Going to my friend's pub tonight, I shall quaff ale, make merry sport with the serving wenches and bounce a few ideas off my friends.

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [11 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from ScorpioP
Review:
End of the world, huh?
Just what do you think you're doing, Dave?
I'm sorry, Dave. I'm afraid I can't let you do that.
I think you know what the problem is just as well as I do.
The Slayers' mission is too important for me to allow you to jeopardize it.
. . . That's something I cannot allow to happen.
Comments from author:
Your review made me laugh!

I keep forgetting that speech, but every time I hear it again I want to put it in a fic.

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [ScorpioP] • Date [11 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from PATM
Review:
Wow awesome conclusion but you had to prep us for more depressing events. lol. Very cool story all around.
Comments from author:
Thank-you, I hope I can live up to the ominousness of the future...don't worry I won't kill 'everybody'!

Evil laughter,
Dave.
Review By [PATM] • Date [10 Jan 11] • Not Rated
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