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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kaerie
Interestingly dark..and a good start to something that could be a good adventure. All of the jumping between past and present tenses was rather distracting, though.
Comments from author:
Sorry Kaerie, I should have been more aware when I did my final proof read. :D That's what I get for writting a story at 1 am. Glad you liked it though, messed up tenses aside.
Review By [Kaerie] • Date [30 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Nice little story, even if it is not fluffy in any way :( I choose to believe that SG1 can help her, maybe with a bit of help from her old friends - any chance you will write that?
Comments from author:
Thanks, it is a little darker then I normally write. I especially thought that my first re-entry into fanfic would be much lighter, but this is what came.

If I do continue on, and I'm not sure if I will at this point, things would not stay so bleek for Tara. That I can promise.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [30 Mar 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Oooooo! You were so nasty to poor Tara! Will there be more to this story where Tara gets to kick some Snake butts? Lol!
Comments from author:
I'm not sure if the story will continue, at least not at this point. But if it did, definately she would kick snake butt.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [30 Mar 11] • Not Rated
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