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Papa Xander: A Harry Situation

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SSanchez
Review:
That's something I haven't seen yet. Xander raising Harry and Dudley in Africa could be awesome!
Comments from author:
*g* Here's hoping I don't screw it up too bad.
Review By [SSanchez] • Date [10 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Okay, you answered my question in this one. Perhaps Willow making with the earth-magic would be best on this one, if they can't figure out how to get the "possession" out, at least she could heal the physical part.
Comments from author:
Um, what are you talking about? The "possession" is already dealt with and vanquished.

Thanks for reviewing though. :)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Comments from author:
Thanks. *g*
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [4 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from calileane
Review:
this serie is so sweet to read. It kind of appeased me. It really did make some of the day's stress go out the window.

Plus, I love seeing Xander as a father and surprising people at every turn. Minerva being seen like that as soon and made to take tea and discuss with him... ^^ it made me smile.

Dumbledore being lead to Willow and Phoebe was the most fun.

I adore this story.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've been getting a kick out of writing it too. Thanks so much for the review! :)
Review By [calileane] • Date [27 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ShadowKage
Review:
Good story so far. This has excellent potential to become a multi-chapter story/novel. Are you going to do one?
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it, but no, not gonna turn it into a multi-chapter fic. The reason for that is, the muse loves to desert me when I go that route and other bad things happen too. If I keep this one as a series of short ficlets, I'm hoping it will go better and then if/when the muse deserts me, they're all stand alones.

I have snippets in my head all the way up to Goblet of fire already and more keep popping up between there and where we are now. I just wrote another one last night, gonna fiddle with it a little before posting, but it's mostly done. *g*

Oh and thanks for the review! :)
Review By [ShadowKage] • Date [26 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WolfWriter
Review:
How did Xander end up with the Charmed Ones as sisters? Is he Victor's kid or Patty's?

I like this series, it's got great potential.

Of course, Xander is going to open up a can of whoop ass on Dumbledore for not telling him that the kid has a soul sliver in his head. And if Albus is counting on it staying there, then senility has finally set in, and his sanity has left the building.
Comments from author:
I had THAT particular story on the computer that died and ate it, and MANY others when it crashed the final death. I may try to recreate it one day, but no time soon. He is... You know, if you read the first story in this series, A Watcher's Nightmare, you'd know the answer to that question. LOL

Thank you. I hope I don't disappoint everybody. Already working on the next part, bouncing ideas back and forth with my best friend. *g*

Maybe not a can of that, but he is DEFINITELY gonna be throwing monkey wrenches into the old man's plans, that's for sure.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [25 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great fun writing with a real sense of family and community. Well done.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much, that's what I was aiming for. :)
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [25 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from silvergaurd
Review:
Cute!
Comments from author:
Thanks! :)
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [25 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JediKnight
Review:
Very good job on this, I hope you'll post another sequel soon.

-Will you be going through Harry's years at Hogwarts?

-Ever consider turning these one-shots into a multi-chaptered story?
Comments from author:
Thank you and I will as soon as I've got it typed up.

I do plan on doing snippets here and there during at least a couple of Harry's Hogwarts years.

Noooooo. I have problems with multi-chaptered stories. The muse deserts me and they're left unfinished or the computer crashes and EATS what I had. I'll stick with one shot fliclets for this series and maybe I'll get through Harry and Dudley's lives at least through their teenage years. *rueful chuckle*
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [25 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kaleecat
Review:
I really like this series, and find it especially sweet that you rescued Dudley from a life as Diddums Dear (or whatever it was). I have a feeling that Xander is going to do a Dumbledore smackdown. And I love that he asked Hagrid where Harry's belongings were--of course he would have a favorite toy, or blankie and want photos of his family. (wizarding morons). Oh--and I also loved when Xander confronted Minerva. I hope you'll follow up this chapter directly so we can see how it continues to unravel.
Comments from author:
Diddums, Duddykins, etc. and pardon me while I barf! *shudder* Petunia and Vernon were horrible parents and even worse guardians. I figure Xander is a big leap upward in the parenting department and he's got Laibah, who is around 7 at this point, being an officious little Mama to both boys now. Neither baby will lack for love with those two AND all the slayers and Watchers around. *chuckle*

It will continue and big changes will occur to canon, but I don't plan on going into a whole of detail on how those changes switch things around. I'm trying to keep this as a short ficlet series.
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [25 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ebony
Review:
That was just mean ending it there, I mean seeiously.
Comments from author:
LOL A minor cliffie, one that will have it's conclusion "offscreen" if you will because Xander's family will deal with it. I just don't like to go into detail on spells and stuff. There will be more though, so I hope you keep reading.

Thanks for the review. :)
Review By [ebony] • Date [25 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LMiC
Review:
I still love it. Looking forward to the next part. ***SPOILERS*** as River Song is so fond of saying.
Comments from author:
LOL Gosh I love/hate that character. She is totally maddening! *giggle*

Thanks bunches for the review and you KNOW you'll get the spoilers. *snicker*
Review By [LMiC] • Date [24 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Greywizard
Review:
LOVE IT, Duchess!! ;-)

I'm thinking that Albus is going to eventually be regretting leaving Xander with his family when he realizes just exactly what sort of attitude and skills Harry and Jesse are going to be learning from Xander and the assorted Slayers who are going to be living there. Somehow, I don't see any of the Council tut-tutting and admonishing whichever bad guys they'll be confronting to stop being naughty and then expect them to automatically turn themselves to the Light. ;-)

This series is a lot of fun. ;-)
Comments from author:
*giggle* Yeah, I hope I don't disappoint you when it comes to those parts. *crossing my fingers now*

Thanks bunches for the review! :)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [24 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Allyssiandra
Review:
Love this... can't wait to see what happens next.
Comments from author:
I'm thinking... Xander being less than pleased at being ignored by Dumbledore maybe? Not sure yet, but more is definitely coming.

Thanks for the review. :)
Review By [Allyssiandra] • Date [24 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PsychoWing
Review:
Looks like I got my last review in just in time.

Anyway, glad to see this installment. The ending definitely lends itself well to continuing so I hope to see more in this 'verse (and I can't help but wonder if Harry is the last...).
Comments from author:
Oh yeah, definitely continuing because my muse is actually cooperating. *vbg* It's been so long since that has happened I'm running with it while it lasts. LOL

Thanks for the review. :)
Review By [PsychoWing] • Date [24 Apr 11] • Not Rated
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