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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Scorpio
Review:
Okay this is a really fun series. *grin* I'd really love for you to keep adding to it.

Some things I'd like to see: Xander's slayer daughter, Jessie(Dud) & Harry playing, Xander's 'chat' with Dumbledore & Dumbly's reaction to the scar & possession being gone, Dumbledore's thoughts on the prophecy & what the Charmed Ones & The Slayer's Council could mean for it, any kind of training for Jessie & Harry (would they be thinking of being a Watcher/Witch team with thier Slayer sister?), Death Eaters tracking Harry down, Hagrid visiting the compound...perhaps trying to adopt a pet demon as a poor misunderstood beastie.

Well, the list is endless. Lots of potential here. *wink* Can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
HALF the fun of this series is doing the brainstorming for what could possibly happen in the future. We have SO much for the first year at Hogwarts alone I don't think I'll be able to get it all in, but honestly, I CAN see trying to do that last one with Hagrid.

Tjin is reading over my shoulder and said, "How about the Slayers take out a clan of Fyarl, with Hagrid's help and he's attacked by a "tiny" young one trying to stab him in the calf and him picking it up, 'Oh aren't you a cute 'un. I'll take you home and fatten you up a bit. You're just a misunderstood little tyke, aren't you?'"

LOL
Review By [Scorpio] • Date [4 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from calileane
Review:
this was needed to finish the last story. Thank you for not letting us with the cliffhanger.

Harry was cute, and I love knowing he won't have the scar.

But will he be able to speak parcel-tongue or not? was it really given to him by Voldemort or will they all be surprised to learn Harry is one of Slytherin true heir. I could even see Xander being an heir too ^^ imagine the chaos of a muggle American Xander being of Slytherin line. Maybe his being 'the one who sees' could be a well known gift of the line....

I think the plot bunny bit me.... you can play with it if you want. and please keep your plot bunnies to yourself? pretty please? they bit real hard. lol
Comments from author:
ACK! Keep the plot bunnies to YOURself, you thought of them! LOL On dear, seriously, you started me and Tjin discussing yet ANOTHER part, to be added way down the line.

But no, Xander won't be heir to Slytherin or of any relation to 'em and neither will Harry. I WILL, however, let Harry keep Parseltongue though, simply because I think it's neat and I can think of sooooo much trouble the boy will get into over it. *giggle*
Review By [calileane] • Date [27 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from xman
Review:
Okay you got me, I love the story and think you should keep going. Harry walks into Hogwarts with slayer escort. Albus glancing at Harry wondering where the scar is. Snape dealing with a Harry who does not take his actions well or submissivly. So many thing you could do. Jessie learning to be a watcher or Xander finding out he is a differnt kind of magical. Stop me my brain is going in over loading
Comments from author:
*having a bit of a giggle fit now* You are exactly whre I was at when I thought up this little series in the first place and it's only gotten WORSE! LOL To top THAT, Tjin just gave me yet another one to do, or part of it at least. *snicker* So I'm working on two at once right now, but have to stop because it's time to get to my second job for the day. *sigh* Hope to be back online later, but can't promise anything as Tjin IS home and we have to share his online computer. :(
Review By [xman] • Date [27 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from deamon
Review:
what about amelia bones? cuz she is raising susan bones so that also goes along with pap xander. or change the story some and have alice longbottom survive and they meet or have lucius malfoy die and him and narcissa meet
Comments from author:
Probably not, I don't think so and definitely not. *shuddering at the last one*

No, probably no women from the Harry Potter universe will appeal to me as a match for Xander. I may go with someone in the Charmed universe instead, but we'll just have to wait and see. It won't be for some time yet anyway.
Review By [deamon] • Date [27 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great fun build-up to childproofing, the extreme edition.
Comments from author:
LOL The extreme edition of childproofing, I like it. Mind if I use that? *chuckle*

Thanks for the review.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [27 Apr 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WolfWriter
Review:
Ooooohhh, baby mischief ahead!

BTW, is Dudley magical too, or is the talent merely latent?
Comments from author:
*giggle* You know it! I'm thinking up more ideas for how that will work out too.

Aw, now THAT would be telling, wouldn't it? *snicker*
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [27 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from deamon
Review:
I love your papa xander series but I think xander should also have some lovin...preferably het lovin and not slash
Comments from author:
*vbg* Yeah, I agree. I don't do slash, so anyone hoping for that kind of a pairing is going to be disappointed and I'm sorry. *shrugs* When the idea strikes for a good pairing, I'll go with it since I don't want Xander alone either.

Thanks for the review! :)
Review By [deamon] • Date [27 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RyenSelenityCaliburn
Review:
That was awesome! I loved it!
Ryen
Comments from author:
Wow, thanks for the compliment, I really appreciate it. :)
Review By [RyenSelenityCaliburn] • Date [27 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from silvergaurd
Review:
Love the new chapter. sooo cute!! would love to see xander raising his family!
Comments from author:
Thank you and I'm still writing, got another one in the works already. As long as the ideas keep coming, I'll keep writing them down. *g*
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [27 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Jaylynn
Review:
Yay! I luv this serious! *just figured you would want to know. XD*
Comments from author:
*chuckle* Yes, I did, thanks for telling me. *vbg*
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [26 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RafMereC
Review:
Cool.
Comments from author:
Thanks. *g*
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [26 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LFW
Review:
Fun read
Thanks
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked the review. You're welcome and thank you in return. :)
Review By [LFW] • Date [26 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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