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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Stationary
Review:
Oooh, id love to see this turnes into a series!
Review By [Stationary] • Date [24 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Aista
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This made me laugh so hard. Fantastic.
Review By [Aista] • Date [30 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from deathgeonous
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Saw this on the front page, again. Decided that I had to reread it, again. It was great, again. Thanks for writing this and bye for now, again.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [28 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from deathgeonous
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I've always really enjoyed this fic, and so it's now going to be one of the very few oneshot's I've reced. I think that this'll be number two, and it'll be the shortest. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [24 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from deathgeonous
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Ah, I've always found this one fun and funny. Thanks for writing it, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [15 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Duquette
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This, is, awesome. More plz.
Review By [Duquette] • Date [25 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MarbleGlove
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Hah! This is awesome. I don't know how I didn't find it before, but I love Ms. B and her training the kids to "act appropriately." Hee!
Review By [MarbleGlove] • Date [16 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
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Loved the homework! I'm kinda disappointed Illyria didn't jump in after Zeeman and rip the snake apart from the inside though :( And I bet she will have trouble topping this as a field trip! Maybe she could get her class to follow Anita around, those that survive would find it interesting.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [11 Jan 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from NimbusBunny
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O.O I'm kind of glad schoolwork kept me from reading your WONDERFULLY written and well thought out stories; that way I get to read multiple new/updated stories at once! -And I will review them all soon. :)

You write well in the first-person! It's really hard to make a first-person narrative have enough detail to make a story interesting. But it worked here! Whichever way you choose to write, please continue this marvelous story.

I love your Illyria! She's just so amazingly powerful and sure of herself, without coming off as arrogant. I would love to have her as a teacher. :)
And Jean-Claude doesn't stand a chance. Haha, I can see him trying and failing to woo her to his side.

I do have a question though. Is this set in the same universe as Matchmaker Blues and/or Grey Eyed Athena? Although the later seems more likely, it would be cracktastic to have this story in the same verse as Matchmaker Blues. :D

Cas/Illyria, Casyria? for the win!

A possibly plausible reason for Castiel's presence would be...to meet his new step-son, Edward? Lol. Wouldn't it be fun to write??? ;)

Also, Castiel should totally smite the undead JC just for harboring lustful thoughts about Illyria.

Thank you for writing such superb stories.
Comments from author:
I'm happy you're happy. Oh dear... I imagine Cas wouldn't be happy to find out some vampire is sniffing around his girl... I just might have to write a crossover-crossover to see that scene play out. And how would Anita react to a real-live angel showing up in a rumpled suit and coat? Hope you got plenty of free time now that the school is on break... or getting close to it.
Review By [NimbusBunny] • Date [15 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from fanrei
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fun read. thank you for sharing.
Review By [fanrei] • Date [12 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from lmarie
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It is unbelievably hard to find a terrific Illyria story and here one is! I can't tell you how much I loved it and wish that it would be continued. It would be fun to see how you managed to put her into the Anita-verse and how she fits in after being discovered. And of course what the Mother's reaction would be to her and vise versa!!! Please please continue it :)
Review By [lmarie] • Date [12 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Miyu
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I love it and read it thrice. The part with the essay and the end with the applying for permission made me fall off the chair with laughter. Illyria meshes seamlessly in this storyline. Please continue!
Review By [Miyu] • Date [5 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mokahi
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Most excellent! I loved it. This was thoroughly enjoyable. I hope you are inspired to continue.
Review By [mokahi] • Date [2 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from goldengeisha
Review:
Cool.

This made me smile.
Comments from author:
This review made me smile. Glad you liked it.
Review By [goldengeisha] • Date [2 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from leelaa
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Fabulous. Like the first chapter of the GiantDawn arc, this one holds huge promise. The first-person POV is superbly done, but if you don't like writing that way, you could switch off from it for the next chapters. Just please please please add more chapters to this one. Pretty please?
Comments from author:
Thanks! As much as I love Illyria and her never-say-mercy attitude, trying to write three different stories at once is too much. You may, possibly, see one or two one-shots from this verse but I want to get the arch wrapped up for THC before I start any new major projects.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [2 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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