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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
I can see why the slayers offworld don't last long if they feel the need to action as strongly as this one. I wish her wise council but I fear she cannot succeed alone against the Goauld.
Comments from author:
Probably not, In fact, the reason this isn't longer is that I kept killing her. It may be an honourable thing, but perhaps not the brightest.

Thank you for the read and the review!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [18 Jun 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Well done. I like your Slayer. I look forward to reading more stories set in your crossover universe.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I expect to have the next up shortly, she being called after the 2003 Sunnydale debacle.

Thank you for the read and the review!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [27 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)WildMartin
Review:
Good Start. The daughter of Thanos threw me for a bit, I guess I was thinking of Thanos from Marvel Comics, but as I read on that cleared up. So a slayer has been called on another world...I bet those silly Watchers back on Earth don't have a clue as to why the new Slayer doesn't appear.
Comments from author:
I just went with various random Greek names, honestly. It was a part of the immersion I never got around to attempting. (That is, I had meant to change the names meaningfully, but I found myself liking the sounds of the previously chosen ones.)

As for the Watchers...they are rather thick, and have no clue of the Stargate it's fair to assume. Poor council.

Thank you for the read and the review!
Review By [(Current Donor)WildMartin] • Date [26 May 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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