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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Vickzie
Review:
That's brilliant!
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [5 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dreameralways
Review:
Cute. Thanks for writing.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [1 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LeaFairy
Review:
Oops, yesterday when I reviewed I forgot to add that I found a small mistake, I could be wrong though...

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"Nurses station down the hall," Callie told him, Derek right beside her as they followed their friend. Well her friend, Derek was still on and off about it. When they got there ("Derek") was on his back on the floor, Faith was leaning over him with her mouth open and no words coming out and Arizona was standing beside them looking at a loss. Christina was laughing hysterically while Meredith simply stared on, bemused. The guys all seemed to be a bit shocked.
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I'm pretty sure the third Derek you meant Mark right?
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [1 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LeaFairy
Review:
This was a simply fantastic fic! I love stories where Faith has/or finds a family that actually gives a damn about her and this one really good. Also having Faith and Mark being siblings is one of the bestest things ever! They're seriously a perfect sibling match - It's almost scary how alike they are in some ways :)

Your portrayal of Faith was really well done as well. Very much spot on with her character and I loved the background history between Faith and Mark and why they haven't seen each other in 15years. Makes sense in how they got separated and why Faith stayed away for so long. Good to know that Mark still looked for her though.

I loved the little bits of Faith/Dawn friendship in this and I think it's great that they both moved to Seattle together. Love Dawnie as Faith's "watcher". Cute too that Dawn has basically adopted Mark as her older brother and him adopting Dawn as a second younger sister =)

Anyway, this was really amazing story and I just loved the cross with Grey's Anatomy (there aren't many out there). Thanks for writing!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [31 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RachelleRyan
Review:
Interesting. It feels a little bit rushed and you might want to work on your phrasing "Her father was married to her brothers mother" is a strange way of putting it. I had to reread it before I could make sense of it. Maybe it should have been "Her father hadn't married her mother. Because he was already married to her brother's. Not that he would have. 'Her own mother, the junky, was one of those mistakes men don't like to admit to.'"

However, my small criticisms aside I definitely could feel the similarities between Sloane and Faith in both coping mechanisms and attitude. They make remarkably good siblings. Kudos on your coming up with that connection, it is definitely one I haven't come across before and wasn't as far fetched as some people try and make. I also enjoyed you're raising the Scoobies to Demigod status. It was very poignant and rang true.
Review By [RachelleRyan] • Date [31 May 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mendenbar
Review:
Either you are missing bits and pieces of things here and there, or I am simply not familiar enough with the Seattle Grace scenario (is that Grey's Anatomy?) to get the jokes.

Nevertheless, fine, fine fic. I particularly liked the way everyone accepted Faith (and Dawn). Faith needs this and really Dawn does too.

How did Buffy, Willow and Xander become demi-gods, or is that just how the young slayers look at them?

Where is Angel these days? He always had a better relationship with Faith than he ever did with Buffy.
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [31 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from moonstarsfu
Review:
This is so awesome!! I never thought of Faith and Mark as siblings before but it totally works. I would love to see more from this verse or just a longer fic set in Grey's, no pressure though *grins* Now I'm going to go re-read your song fics about Dawn in Primeval and in The Fast and The Furious, I love them and re-read them every couple of months.
Review By [moonstarsfu] • Date [31 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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