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Review of chapter "Little past and a morning ritual" from twlight
Review:
interesting, I look forward to more.
Review By [twlight] • Date [29 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Little past and a morning ritual" from Rod
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What little you've written is well done. It is very little, however; there is almost more author's note than story, and that's just wrong. It's a nice little scene, but nothing like a whole chapter.
Review By [Rod] • Date [2 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Little past and a morning ritual" from msdarque
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Still interesting chapter. :)
And everything seemed alright... and logical.
Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [2 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Looking Back and On My Way Out" from noirekitsune
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im really liking the intro to this!
i really hope there's more to it!
i really hate the cis that portray the women as perfect, i think its more real with the portrayl of their mistakes
i even cheer for serious bashing!LOL
i think ive just read so many where thye are all sweetness and light that i got sick of it- and im rambling!
hehe anyway cant wiat for more!
*runs away*

noirekitsune@yahoo.com
Review By [noirekitsune] • Date [22 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Looking Back and On My Way Out" from RyenSelenityCaliburn
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This is looking to be a really good and interesting fic! Looking forward to more!
Ryen
Review By [RyenSelenityCaliburn] • Date [24 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Looking Back and On My Way Out" from Faeri
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This chapter was aweosme, I cant wait for the next parts to come out! I hope you're able to update soon! ^_^
Review By [Faeri] • Date [9 Aug 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Looking Back and On My Way Out" from LordAtreyuEmyrs
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There goes a another possibly good story being screwed over by the Xander/Angel pairing.
Review By [LordAtreyuEmyrs] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Looking Back and On My Way Out" from RHatch
Review:
Intriguing..... update!!!!
Review By [RHatch] • Date [4 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Looking Back and On My Way Out" from msdarque
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Quite intriguing, different... I'd very much love to read more.
Congrats and kudos! :D
Review By [msdarque] • Date [18 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Looking Back and On My Way Out" from kayron
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A naturally born witch...headed to San Francisco to see his aunt...is this going to crossover with Charmed? Is Penny Halliwell (Grams) his aunt? Are the Charmed ones his cousins? Is Xander the same type of witch as them? They are powerful, but they do have certain limitations on what they are allowed to do. They have that personal gain clause. If they use their magic to do anything to help themselves (for their own benefit) it has a bad consequence. I never thought that was fair. Like the episode where some guy allowed his huge dog to crap in their yard all of the time and the sisters did some minor spell to stop it. The Elders (the PTB of Charmed) sent the girls to a possible future where witchcraft was outed and Phoebe got burned at the stake. I thought that that consequence was freaking gruesome and unfair! Not every magic practishoner is going to go off the deep end and control people's memories, make her will be done, or become a black magic addict like Willow. Wow, I'm getting way ahead of myself and the story! This is only the first chapter. (HAHA) I think that the story looks interesting and I will be following it to see how things develop.
Review By [kayron] • Date [17 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Looking Back and On My Way Out" from jormunguard
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You have an interesting idea, the problem is that truthfully you make Xander sound like an ass. He's a hereditary witch so he knows magic screws up around him and the hellmouth and it could corrupt him because of it. But yet he blackmailed Amy, another hereditary witch, into casting the love spell for him, really nice guy. Then the incident with Willow, must have been Willow casting a spell on him but yet she's the one that doesn't want anything to do with him afterwards, yep that makes sense.
I know that you're trying to give him a reason for why he didn't use his magic while in Sunnydale, but considering his actions in the series by either blackmailing others to do magic or at least not trying to warn others not to do magic really makes him look bad.
Review By [jormunguard] • Date [17 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Looking Back and On My Way Out" from evilredknight
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Really...? The world needed another Anti Buffy, Super Xander story?
Review By [evilredknight] • Date [17 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Looking Back and On My Way Out" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
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This isn't even a story. It's just rambling narration and author rant. Next.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [17 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Looking Back and On My Way Out" from LarryP
Review:
Nice start of your story. Looking forward to reading more of it
Review By [LarryP] • Date [17 Jun 11] • Not Rated
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