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Review of chapter "Grandfather's Visit" from Grovtech
Review:
Like others have said, a nice twist on the series. It also give a nice explanation of how Jack acquired his sense of humor.
Grover
Review By [Grovtech] • Date [8 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Grandfather's Visit" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Okay this adds a twist to the series, interesting thoughts, very interesting!
Comments from author:
Jon & Jack. I always thought they were remarkably similar in many ways.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [10 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Grandfather's Visit" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Was this meeting before coming face to face with Arlene?
Comments from author:
Yes it was. Jon was there for that.Thanks for reviewing
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [7 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Grandfather's Visit" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Great idea :)

Would dearly love to see this one extended... Pretty please with sugar on?
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing. I was originally planning to write a sequel, but extending it may work too...I'll think about it.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [26 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Grandfather's Visit" from djhardim
Review:
Very good. The only problem with this story is that it is a one shot.

I guess it was too much to hope for that Jack had pulled himself out of his self-destructive slump at the end of the movie. He has a long road ahead of him.

Is Jack related to Simon Meier?

Edit: Given the timing of "The Mummy" series, chances are that the Carnahans were familar with Professor Langford's work. Jack's relation to the Carnahans may have played a role in Jack's assignment to the original Stargate expedition.
Comments from author:
Thank you. It's actually not a one shot, just avery short introductory. I intend to show Jon and Jon visiting Old Blighty and some further adventures later on.

Taking into consderation that Sara dumped him just after he came back (Series canon) and that the boy he adopted to be his new son (Skaraa) was across the universe and unreachable, I thought it quite likely he needed a swift boot to certain parts of his anatomy to get him together again.

As far as I know Jack is not related to Simon. Even though his back story is ridiculously bare for a ten season series.

The Carnahans are indeed familiar with the work of Professor Langford. This will play a role later. And few people know of the truth of the Carnahan's adventures, but I may use that angle yes...but then he probably would have called upon them earlier.

Thanks for reading and reviewing
Review By [djhardim] • Date [26 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Grandfather's Visit" from eriktheviking
Review:
It's shocking to think Jack is the more restrained male in his family. Well done.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review. Upon watching the Mummy, it seemed to me that Jonathan and Jonathan had a lot in common really...it just grew from there.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [26 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Grandfather's Visit" from Garmorn
Review:
Please, Please let me know when you publish your first book. I am going to have to pre-order.

This was just so excellent.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'll certainly shout it off the rooftops. Glad you enjoyed it. I thought they'd make an interesting pairing.

Thanks for reading and reviewing
Review By [Garmorn] • Date [26 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Grandfather's Visit" from Blackett
Review:
Oh boy! we have Jack also....lovely!
Comments from author:
Ayup. Jack will appear in the Buffy verse later on... And much fun will be had by all...
Review By [Blackett] • Date [26 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Grandfather's Visit" from grd
Review:
You have a real talent for writing. Eager to read more.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I'll do my best to provide it.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [grd] • Date [26 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Grandfather's Visit" from FireWolfe
Review:
OK I so did not see this cross over come in. Jonathan as a good guy. Hum I like it. I sorry to see this appears to be a one shot. I hope there is more. It could be fun.
Comments from author:
Heh. It amazes me actually that there's not more Mummy/Stargate Crossovering. I never saw Jonathan as a bad guy...just a perenial child, much like Jack...hence the crossover. And nota onee shot, justa very short introduction. There will be more, and I hope it will be fun.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [26 Jun 11] • Not Rated
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