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Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from bobc
Review:
I love this story but you are going a bit to for with him getting a job with mayor it is hard to believe now if he had kill Angel or he could prove to kill a enemy of his then okay. Please come back it hard to find a good Xander/Faith story
Review By [bobc] • Date [18 Oct 14] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from leonamasha
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I read this awhile back and then recently got stuck in a phase reading any Bleach crossover worth its salt.
Glad to see that this one is still up!
Thanks for what's been posted.
Review By [leonamasha] • Date [13 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4 - An impossible Choice, and all too familair." from agnar
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Well this was pretty good until you had Xander go bonehead and do Gin's 'undercover' bullshit routine by getting a job with the Mayor.

The Mayor isn't fucking invulnerable yet, not for months yet. Xander could frigging shoot to kill him with Shinso from a long distance, game over.

You're trying too hard to turn Xander into Gin, rather than keeping him a blend of the 2, and that's annoying. It fucks up the fic. Ah well, guess it doesn't matter anyway since it's not been updated in ages.

But I hate this turn/twist, you might as well just call him Gin, drop the fa├žade of Xander.
Review By [agnar] • Date [25 Jan 14] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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Love the story with all the tie ins. Looking forward to more when the muse comes off strike.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [27 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from trongod
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Saw a recommendation for this, and a lament that it hasn't been added to in so long, so I had to see what the story was...

This is /excellent/; even not being up on Bleach I can follow easily and the characters are well written. Now all we have to do is coerce you and the Muses to returning to this, and millions upon millions will be happy!!!
Review By [trongod] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from SnowyMountain
Review:
A very interesting Halloween story. I do like the interaction between Xander and Faith, slowly turning them from associates into a very believable friendship (and I suspect something more).

Gin is a very interesting and underused character for Xander to crossover with, I applaud your creativity in choosing him. Usually, most authors favor the main characters so it's nice to see someone not do that.

Looking forward to the next chapter!
Review By [SnowyMountain] • Date [2 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
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Now this is a very cool fic. I like Xander and his powers, I am not familiar with the cross but I may have to look it up. I like the developing relationship between Xander and Faith a lot. I like the interaction between Snyder and Xander, it is interesting to see Snyder as something other than a pure troll.

What would be really great is if you could continue this!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [3 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from eriktheviking
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A great fun developing relationship.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [27 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from sjyu
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This is a very interesting story. I'm not familiar with the fandom, I'll check it out too. Looking forward to your next installment.
Review By [sjyu] • Date [27 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from Fayari
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Awesome! More! Drama, hotness, Ichimaru Xander! Everything!
Review By [Fayari] • Date [7 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from JonnyNapalm
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Okay... I love this story. Not the standard Bleach affair, and I love the choice of Gin as the character that bonded with Xander. You've got a really solid feel for the voice of Faith as well. Hope to see some more of this up on Twisting the Hellmouth.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [7 Jan 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from IrFane
Review:
Just started reading this, and found it quite interesting. Curious as to why he doesn't just kill the mayor from a mile or so away, and why he trains in his real body (when Gin should have the skills to exit it) but meh.
Review By [IrFane] • Date [24 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from Orchamus
Review:
Well, the only problem I have with it is the lack of Gin's accent being noticeable. He's got much of his personality, a great deal of power that he's worked hard for, and someone to protect just like Gin. Hell, he's even getting an in with the Big Bad just like Gin, so 2 thumbs up, all the way. If you're still looking for a beta, let me know in a reply back. I really hope to see more soon, this is far too good to let sit.
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [24 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from Loatroll
Review:
Good stuff. Looking forward to more. Thanks for the read.
Review By [Loatroll] • Date [4 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from Acheloo
Review:
Amazing story so far!! You are doing great!! Can't wait for your next update!!
Review By [Acheloo] • Date [26 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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