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Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from bradsan
Review:
Will you please update all you good stories who aren't finished yet. Your stories are good and very important easy to read.

So please try to Finish you unfinished stories.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [24 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from breve
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gotta love a buffy/sg-1 crossover.
hilariously funny story.
fingers crossed for an update.
Review By [breve] • Date [17 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Addlcove
Review:
Awesome, more please.
Review By [Addlcove] • Date [18 Jul 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from lastjuan
Review:
This is one of the funniest stories that I have read on this site and definitely the funniest iteration between BTVS and the SGC universes. I hope that you find the time and the inspiration to carry on with this story.
Review By [lastjuan] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Oohhh, more, please, good author!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [17 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from MBB
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I guess you are right about the word frack, as Buffy might adapt her cursing to her surrounding of the SGC.

It's been real fun to read.
From your comments I seem to understand you want to leave it with Buffy uncaught, and we've reached the end for now? I like the idea, but the story does not say it is complete.

Also, Buffy kind of left a big trail by using her (cell)phone; since they are within a mountain the only way to have reception is if the SGC has their own cell tower/ So all Carter has to do is check the logs for who was using an un-certified device that that time and trace it back.

There was one mistake: "Okay, so maybe she was having too much fun [at] this. " (missing ' at')
(just a FYI, as i make more mistakes in one little review)
Review By [MBB] • Date [10 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from (Current Donor)vidicon
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She is going to be in such trouble once Giles finds out the truth... I wonder if the SGC has any access to Initiative records.

Thanks for writing
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [24 May 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Oxnate
Review:
Ch5: She kept Teal’c in her sites as the stoic man watched the scene carefully. (sights)

Ch6: “You have the worst time Danny-boy,” (Timing?)

Very funny story. Please continue soon.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [24 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Thedruid
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Nice to see an update. Tech note here, isn't there a camera in Jackson's office? Just in case some alien dihicky starts doing strange things?
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [24 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from RevDorothyL
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Hee! Why do I think that Jack's next birthday gift may be a t-shirt with the slogan, "I ate Jell-O with an alien", courtesy of Carter!? :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [24 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from AllenPitt
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The after action report Jack writes will probably not reflect actual events 100%. Hm, after all that activity, I'll bet Buffy left behind some fingerprints in some places. AND... hers are on file --when she briefly joined the Initiative and got a security card etc in s4, I bet those went into a file somewhere. (Not sure if they'd be in a public/accessible to SGC file, though).
But they can probably trace her movements to local hotel, to an air flight, etc, if they try hard enough. Breaching security like that is serious enough, but invisible on top of that? Got to be an alien. Foothold situation!
Poor Giles.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [24 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Gideon
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How dare Giles have such low expectations! I guess he does know Buffy very well after all :) I hope he assigns her a position liaising with a certain Governmental deep space radar team - that would take some fast talking on her part!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [24 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from slatergirl
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"I ate jell-o with an alien." hehe made my day, really glad to see an update, I find this story hilarious.
Review By [slatergirl] • Date [24 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from BrownFinderth
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thegirlinquestion has written a very funny story and I'm eager to read the rest of it, once the author has posted it, of course!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [3 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Past Donor)improvedpeanut
Review:
This story is hilariously awesome.... Shazam!
Review By [(Past Donor)improvedpeanut] • Date [21 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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