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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from JediKnight
Review:
Hoping for more soon.
Comments from author:
I'm point this one out to my muse, and she how she feels about it.

Thanks for reminding me about this story.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [21 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from twlight
Review:
You stopped the chapter at the start of an attack and haven't updated it in a while? Oh you are mean. I am looking forward to more one of the reasons is because I don't recognize what the crossover is yet I want to read more of this so far wonderful story.
Comments from author:
Well, the initial crossover is with 'The Eternal Warrior' comic series, and the second crossover is with the TV show 'Heroes'. ;-)
Review By [twlight] • Date [30 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from leb
Review:
this is an interesting story so far, I hope to read more soon. when you next post could you please give a listing for the xovers it has in it so they can be looked up
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story.

And the first cross is with Eternal Warrior, a comic book character you can learn more about here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eternal_Warrior.

The next cross is with 'Heroes', so you can read up here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Heroes_%28TV_series%29.
Review By [leb] • Date [27 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Interesting story so far.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Much more to come, and it will appear as my muse decrees. ;-)
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [28 May 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from loretta
Review:
this is interesting, i cant wait to see what will happen next. could you please include a list of the xovers and the characters from them so we can look up the ones we dont know
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing and commenting.

Gil's background can be found here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eternal_Warrior.

Angela and Niki and Micah Sanders are from the TV series 'Heroes."
Review By [loretta] • Date [10 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from OlBear
Review:
Another excellent chapter. Looking forward to the next update.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Waiting on my muse to tell me the order of what comes next, since I have a general idea of what's going on, but not the specifics. ;-)
Review By [OlBear] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Comments from author:
Thanks. I appreciate your reviewing. ;-)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from dorkmoon
Review:
Lorne the Host can survive decapitation and dismemberment, so it wouldn’t be farfetched for Lorne to survive Sylar’s cranial vivisection the same way Claire Bennet did.

Perhaps Lorne’s precognitive visions could let him know Sylar “hungers for understanding” and allow Sylar to copy his song-based powers so that Sylar would have control over his hunger (like in episode "I Am Become Death"), freeing him from the Power That Be's manipulations as he wouldn't feel compelled to kill every superpowered person he encounters.

Sylar having Lorne’s song-based aura reading, empathy, and precognition would parallel Isaac Mendez’ precognition (“O.O7%”), Sue Lander’s lie detection (“Our Father”), and Bridget Bailey’s Psychometry (“One of Us, One of Them”).

Personally, I hated how the "Villains" arc retconned Sylar and claimed he had Empathic Mimicry like Peter Petrelli all along.
Comments from author:
A interesting take on how things might develop, although Sylar would most definitely want to analyze and 'understand' the girls' Slayer abilities, since they're much more - useful.

Although I think he'd probably immediately rise to the top of the Scoobies' shit lists, if he did that to any of their Slayers.
Review By [dorkmoon] • Date [9 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Chikageko
Review:
mixing in heroes huh?
Comments from author:
Yep, you can never have too many heroes (or 'Heroes') available to help out with the bad guys. ;-)
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [9 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good abbreviated exposition. Still trying to pin together the literary reference and author. Sounds a lot like a Farmer character might be.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing and commenting.

Gil is a character from the old Valiant Comics line. You can find out more about him here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eternal_Warrior
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [8 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice work on the story so far, I hope to read more soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks. More chapters will appear as my muse commands. ;-)
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [8 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Stormrider
Review:
It makes an interesting type of sense that Xander would be Gilad's son. I love to see what happens next. Niki and Micah showing up? Whoa. First Gilad and now Niki. I wonder if Peter, Hiro and the rest will show up. Not to mention Ivar or Aram. Things are beginning to heat up.

Have you checked out the new Valiant relaunch? There's a new Harbinger, Bloodshot, Archer and Armstrong, and X-O series out. They just started on the Harbinger Wars miniseries. and in the Archer and Armstrong series. Gilad makes an appearance. I love to see how Xander, the Scoobies and everybody else get involved in this. Great start keep it up.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story. ;-)

No, I haven't checked out the new relaunch, since I pretty much gave up on comics for a variety of reasons a couple years back.

And this universe I'm describing isn't like any other one out there, since I'm combining elements from a number of different series. ;-)
Review By [Stormrider] • Date [8 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Netchka
Review:
Cool start to the story. Hoping more comes along at some point. It's a good story.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the story.

I'm waiting on my muse to tell me what happens next. ;-)
Review By [Netchka] • Date [16 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Elleria
Review:
Looking forward to the next bit.
Comments from author:
Working on that, as my muse allows. ;-)
Review By [Elleria] • Date [30 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Terrific start to your new story. The last line of the second update was a mind-blower, too. I really look forward to more of your story, which looks like it will explain so much about Xander's weirdness.
Comments from author:
EVERYONE in Sunnydale who survived was weird to a greater or lesser extent, so there has to be some reason to explain it all. ;-)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [29 Sep 11] • Not Rated
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