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Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Omegaprime
Review:
I see Krillin is having some (evil) fun training Xander.

When Xander come back to life he will be wondering why they say no to a vacation to Mexico.

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [3 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from RHatch
Review:
LMAO!!!! A nice funny chapter
Review By [RHatch] • Date [2 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from CageFire
Review:
Nice to see a new chapter after so long. I'll be looking forward to reading more. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [2 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from CastorandPollux
Review:
Excellent...
Review By [CastorandPollux] • Date [2 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Rob
Review:
Fun chapter!
Review By [Rob] • Date [2 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Oxnate
Review:
Not liking my reading options tends to be the impetus for much of my own writing too.

-"...Guess what you're going to learn?"

"How to win friends and influence people?" said captain smart-ass. -- Ha!
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [2 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from TDMaster
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Babidi did not create Majin Buu; his father Bibidi created Majin Buu. Babidi merely revived Majin Buu.

Other than that, good stuff.
Review By [TDMaster] • Date [7 May 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from eternalfox
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Actually, it was Bibidi, Babidi's father, whom created the "Pink Demon of Chaos and Destruction" known as Majin Buu. Bibidi only worked to release him, then was killed by "Fat" Majin Buu (what resulted when the "Original" or "Kid" Majin Buu absorbed the Supreme Kai of the South and the Grand Supreme Kai) when Goku asked why Buu even listened to Babidi since he was vastly stronger than the diminutive wizard. In Hell, while publicly boasting his "responsibility" for training Buu to the other deceased villains and King Yama's ogres; inwardly, he was livid and cursed Buu and cheered on Goku in defeating and destroying his father's creation.
Comments from author:
I very much appreciate this feedback and an edit will follow accordingly. I'm still using Babidi, but admittedly it's been years since I watched the full series. Easy mistake. Thanks.
Review By [eternalfox] • Date [1 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Oxnate
Review:
Well, I'm glad you updated so I could find this. I have to say, that first paragraph in Chapter 1 is the best paragraph of fanfiction I have ever read. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Omegaprime
Review:
It has been 50,000 years since the DBZ gang died out?

Wow, now that is interesting.

But where is the tech that existed during that time and will it return?

So Babadi was responsible for screwing Earth up and he might help a certain heartless creature (no not ADAM)?

Uh oh.

Now I see him flying around throw balls of energy everywhere.

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [25 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :) It's nice to see a new chapter, it's been a while.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [24 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from LFW
Review:
Glad to read more of this fic
Is Xander going to be meeting any other DBZ characters? Or any other dead people? Piccalo and Jessie are a couple that spring to mind, but hey Abraham Lincoln vampire hunter is good too
Thanks
Hoping for more
Review By [LFW] • Date [29 Oct 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from CageFire
Review:
Great to see a new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [29 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Narf
Review:
Nice update keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Review By [Narf] • Date [29 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Omegaprime
Review:
So Giles is going to find his very first Dragon Ball and Xander had his first taste of a fruit that is only found in HFIL/Hell.

Interesting, I wonder what deals Krillan made to get those fruit?

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [29 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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