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How Annabeth Chase became Buffy Summers

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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen: Crossroads" from superbrutal
Review:
Hmmmm, I wonder what Hecate has planned for Anna/Buffy?

Looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks for your comment! Yes, I'm trying to make Hecate's plans interesting.
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [11 Jun 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen: Crossroads" from ThePureOne
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is Hecate going to teach her magiccc?
Comments from author:
Sorry, you'll have to wait and see!
Review By [ThePureOne] • Date [11 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve: Guidance" from KJA
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I had a thought when reading chapter twelve. Could Buffy being Annabeth in this timeline change Merrick's fate? I am liking how you portray him and his relationship with Buffy/Annabeth and I thought it would be interesting if Merrick survived to be Buffy's Watcher in Sunnydale. It would also be fun to see how he would interact with Giles.
Comments from author:
Can fate be changed? It is certainly an interesting thought but you will have to wait and see on this one I'm afraid.
Review By [KJA] • Date [26 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve: Guidance" from demonichellfire
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I know what you mean, but using Marvel Norse could work as well. Also Xander as Loki son would explain how chaos seems to follow him around. Also you don't need to go into depth about Norse mythology just use some basic facts you can find on Wikipedia.
Comments from author:
It is a good idea but I'm not going to use it; sorry, I already have plans for Xander. But, why don't you write it? It is certainly a good story idea and you seem to like it, why not give it a go?
Review By [demonichellfire] • Date [25 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve: Guidance" from AllenPitt
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Ok, so far the storyline is not AU at all, minus the whole intro for A. becoming Buffy. Will her different viewpoint cause any changes as we go forward? Looks like Hecate is keeping her on a tight rein, so probably not at first.
Hm, eventually will she have a blend of slayerness and demigoddess-ness? That would be strange. Oh! The "Glove of Mineyghon" in early S3 -- kind of reminds me of the Lightning Thief storyline. Maybe that was some kind of Olympic god artifact?
Comments from author:
It will become AU, though I can't say when because yes, Annabeth will change things. Things with Hecate will also develop in time. This story will only take her up to just before season 1 so season 3 won't be an issue for quite some time. I can't really say much more because, well, spoilers!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [24 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten: Merrick, Destiny and Slaying" from AllenPitt
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I can see Annabeth using Angel to learn whatever she can and helping her fight. People forget that the relationship in the show didn't start as a romance-he was this mysterious guy who showed up and gave info & help. It didn't really become more until later on.
I feel bad for Joyce & Hank in all this. But they just don't get happy story lines. Hm, presumably there's a reason for the demigods etc to not go to Sunnydale? Maybe it's off limits to them in general?
* Interesting now that I think on it--Amy & Willow call on "Hecate" amongst others when doing major spells. Food for thought in there...
Comments from author:
People do forget that a lot, I think it is because their love story was so strong but I think the teacher element is certainly an interesting one.
Yeah, Joyce and Hank are getting the short end of the stick at the moment but it's the way it has to be to get Annabeth to Sunnydale.
Thank you! I've been waiting for somebody to mention that! I was re-watching the third season and the invocation of Hecate, along with the second season invocation of Janus, was what gave me the idea for this story. There is definitely a mini-foundation for the Greek pantheon to live in the Buffy universe.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [22 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten: Merrick, Destiny and Slaying" from demonichellfire
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Given my idea any thought
Comments from author:
Yes, I have. It is a very good idea and it would fit into the Buffy universe quite well but I think I'm going to keep Xander human for several reasons. One being that I think part of his awesomeness is that he is an ordinary guy without any special powers who just stands up and does the right thing as much as he can; I don't want to mess with that too much. Also, I am far more comfortable with the Greek pantheon and my knowledge of the Norse pantheon is very limited. I don't want to use elements of a pantheon I know little about because I don't really want to get it wrong.
Review By [demonichellfire] • Date [22 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: The Council of Watchers" from Valkyrie
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Huh. Thing's're picking up now. Are you going to use the comic books to flesh this out, or just jump straight into the series after the time-skip?
Comments from author:
Yes I'm going to use the comic books, mainly because just jumping straight into the series would feel like...cheating to me.
Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [16 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight: Hero to Zero" from Bluejello
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Excellent update!
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [7 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven: Meet the Parents" from Haruchai
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Huh. Annabeth's new homelife leaves a lot to be desired though I'm sure she will pull through in the end. She's not the favorite daughter of Athena for nothing after all. I do hope she looses her current impulsive streak otherwise she might end up just like the original Buffy. One thing has been bothering me though. How do you plan to handle Angel? I could barely stand the original Buffy x Angel thing and it would be totally out of character for Annabeth to fall for Angel's type. Annabeth will probably more drawn to someone more similar to Percy in the end. I'm still personally rooting for a Percabeth no matter how impossible it seems right now though. LOL! I'm just a hopeless romantic and I always wish that the main couple have a chance for a happy ending. It's just very depressing to think of Percy as being dead. Though I suppose that is what has drawn me to this story in the first place. Learning how Annabeth faces a new destiny without Percy by her side, while secretly hoping that they can be together in the end. Wow. Typing that review made me depressed all over again. I'm really getting too attached to Percabeth these days. This is probably one of the best BtVS and PJatO crossover idea I've read and I hope you can shape it into a grand story.
Review By [Haruchai] • Date [10 Oct 12] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Meetings and Explanations" from Haruchai
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The chapter shed more light on the gods' side of things. Though they did hint of other gods and other pantheons. I'm very curios on how you will ultimately mix and match them in he future. Annabeth's transformation into the slayer is also finally complete and I'm now eager to know how she will be as the slayer. Buffy tended to act like a child of Ares at times and ends up being rather reckless I'm excited while thinking of how a more strategic or tactical slayer will affect the hellmouth. One thing is for sure, she will definitely not be a pushover.
Review By [Haruchai] • Date [10 Oct 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Fate" from Haruchai
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Well that answered one question that I had. I was not sure how the Greek gods can be prevented from interfering with Buffy. Though Hecate really has a weird way of showing gratitude. Still her interference is a great plot and was nicely done if a bit contrived. All magic is based on intent more than in just ritualistic symbolism, so Annabeth's knee wound should not really be enough to invoke a goddess by itself. Hecate does seem to have a vested interest with Annabeth so it's not really strange that she used loophole to interfere directly with her fate. Nonetheless the gods could always track the next slayer so they may be able to find Annabeth/Buffy sooner or later.
Review By [Haruchai] • Date [10 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Mother-Daughter Bonding" from Haruchai
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Heh. The title should have been "Like Mother, Like Daughter" as they are both equally stubborn. They never really did reconcile until the chapter ended though Athena should have been wiser and avoided spouting about fate and all that. Annabeth was really not in the right frame of mind to hear about more duties and such. This is of course a clear foreshadowing about Buffy/Annabeth future calling.
Review By [Haruchai] • Date [10 Oct 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Confrontations" from Haruchai
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I love the way you portrayed Clarisse in your story, I can actually picture Annabeth and Clarisse's relationship as similar to the one you used. I was a bit surprised by Mr. D's supportive stance, but he can't really be a total jerk all the time so it was not really that OOC. Another transitional chapter though events are already starting to form that will lead to the next story arc if I'm not mistaken.
Review By [Haruchai] • Date [10 Oct 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Disillusionment" from Haruchai
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The second chapter is really just a progression from the first one. Not a mile stone by itself but still important to bridge the story to the next set of events. The way you portray Annabeth's emotions at this period was very real and has really touched me and made me remember my lost loves over the years.
Review By [Haruchai] • Date [10 Oct 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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