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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Delkatar
Review:
Good chapter! It will be interesting to see how the Scoobies react to the new Xander! :D
Review By [Delkatar] • Date [9 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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Who-ah my brothers! It's time to party like its 23449! An experieced commando trained in CQC and ALL sorts of Gun-Fu! Gonna be fun to see if he can maintain his weapons and what other technical expertise he might have! Id his armor the prototype powered stuff?
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [4 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from wonderbee
Review:
Interesting to see the difference Xander made there, as well as his getting back home, though looks to still have a bit of a journey yet, though nowhere near the massive one he had before.
Review By [wonderbee] • Date [4 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [3 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Chan
Review:
Huh not sure them powers will like Harris being back on the radar again, but they'll have a harder time getting rid of him with the memories of a commando in residence.
Review By [Chan] • Date [2 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from LordCorwin
Review:
Ok, things to consider - what knowledge does Xander retain? Is the equipment he retains, still "real"? How the hell is he going to get from New Orleans to Sunnydale ??? Good to see an update. Look forward to more.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [2 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Nice to see Xander back "home". I wonder how his return will be handled by the rest of the PTB?
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [2 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from raxadian
Review:
I would have preferred for Xander to become a Bounty hunter, but is your story, not mine.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [2 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from raxadian
Review:
So if you plan Xander to return, what will be the skills he have back in Sunnyhell? The tech is too primitive for his standards, I don't think the force works in the Buffyverse and as a tropper is not like he will know enough to build things from scratch.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [2 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from raxadian
Review:
I guess that at some point, Zan will quit his Trooper job?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [2 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from raxadian
Review:
Ah, so Xander is not a clone? Then why he wasn't arrested or something?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [2 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from raxadian
Review:
Okay, without Xander around, things might go very wrong...
Review By [raxadian] • Date [2 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from AlecMcDowell
Review:
Very nice Xander should cause some waves pretty soon here. I am a bit disappointed that his team isn't coming along for the ride, though
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [2 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Mordare
Review:
I really like this one. I hope you continue it.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [2 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Omegaprime
Review:
Well even a small rock can make ripples in a pond the size of Star Wars and (Z)Xander made some small changes in that universe that made a huge difference there.

Man, I hope the PTB's get a good smack for trying to pull a fast one, good thing one of them was truly a good guy.

Now Xander is back in his home universe, Sunnydale is going to have some interesting times soon.

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [2 Jul 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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