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Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from grd
Review:
Thank you for another chapter to this excellent tale. My fav is that Xan changed some things in the verse by his presence. Hope he can someday see his brothers or Massana again. Glad he spared Anakin the title of childslayer. I hated that, and how do we sympathize with him years later when he seeks Luke after butchering other kids? Especially when he was hoing to be a parent too. Obiwan had the right idea to stop the monster he had become. Xan's change seems to make Ani more redeemable.
Review By [grd] • Date [21 Dec 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from djhardim
Review:
Very good.

Yet another OlBear story in one month! I think you're going to spoil us.

Events in Sunnydale were already different, but now they've taken a sideways turn into weird. I think the PTB are going to be very ticked.

EDIT: I hope you'll be explaining how Xander financed his trip back to Sunnydale.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [21 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from IronDruid
Review:
This is awesome and I can't wait to see what you do next.
Review By [IronDruid] • Date [21 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from kffs
Review:
Glad to see this continue!
Wonder how long Xander's tech will continue working for...
Review By [kffs] • Date [21 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from raxadian
Review:
Well, if any of his Star Wars tech breaks Xander has no way to repair it.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [21 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from sdavidm
Review:
Intriguing start. Please continue!
Review By [sdavidm] • Date [21 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Greywizard
Review:
Hey, man, it's great to see another chapter of this show up!

Looking forward to seeing more of this, and the reactions of the arrogant Pricks That be to the reappearance of the troublemaker they thought that they'd disposed of. ;-)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [3 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [3 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from djhardim
Review:
Good to see more of this (and hopefully your other stories).

Is Xander still a baseline human, or was he enhanced in any way?
Comments from author:
Xander is still a baseline human but one who is enhanced by three years of intense training and conditioning followed by two and a half years hard fighting. Thanks for the review.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [3 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Omegaprime
Review:
Things are changing in Sunnydale; Joyce will learn of the town's nightlife sooner than later and Sunday has been taken out before she had the chance to tango with Buffy.

The higher ups don't know that Xander is back? Man will they ever be surprised when he strikes and upsets "the game."

Keep up the interesting work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [3 Aug 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from raxadian
Review:
With the demon gone the symbol can removed, right?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [3 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Delkatar
Review:
Good chapter! It will be interesting to see how the Scoobies react to the new Xander! :D
Review By [Delkatar] • Date [9 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Who-ah my brothers! It's time to party like its 23449! An experieced commando trained in CQC and ALL sorts of Gun-Fu! Gonna be fun to see if he can maintain his weapons and what other technical expertise he might have! Id his armor the prototype powered stuff?
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [4 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from wonderbee
Review:
Interesting to see the difference Xander made there, as well as his getting back home, though looks to still have a bit of a journey yet, though nowhere near the massive one he had before.
Review By [wonderbee] • Date [4 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [3 Jul 14] • Not Rated
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