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Zeppo Effect: Fight for the Lost

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Review of chapter "Interlude: Dark Horizon" from Addlcove
Review:
Up until this point I have Loved what you did with my challenge! Unfortunately I dislike "the first" so much I simply cannot bear to read stories with it in them, sorry.
Comments from author:
Im guessing you just read the bit withitse ... that's not The First

But I'll leave it to you to decide if that's worth going further to find out what I did
Review By [Addlcove] • Date [16 Sep 14] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dossier: Justicar(3)" from Gonadius
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Just finally got around to reading this series (And incidentally awakened my urges to replay the first two games and finally get around to playing the third... CURSE YOU!!!)... I didn't read it because I was fed up with unfinished tales and now..... GYARGHHH!!! And you haven't got anywhere near my favourite character yet... - Wrex

... That said, can you either add in, or edit your first story in the series to remove the reference to the Green Lantern Ring... It's been bugging me since just before the end of TZE: FFTL...
Comments from author:
Or I could just continue the storyline revealing the reason why I put it in there in the first place.

that said I haven't discontinued this project as much as I've been working on a sequel to the Bayonetta thing. The E3 preview got the plot bunnies nibbling. I've got something cooking and it's almost ready.
Review By [Gonadius] • Date [27 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dossier: Justicar(3)" from Traveler
Review:
Just found this series and have spend the last couple of days catching up. I found them to be a good read and thank you for sharing these stories with us.
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you're enjoying the story
Work on the series is ongoing but I've been distracted of late with my Buffy Lollipop Chainsaw project (blatant plug)
Review By [Traveler] • Date [1 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of story "Zeppo Effect: Fight for the Lost" from Omegaprime
Review:
Short but it has some interesting info inside.

Is it just the planet that is causing the bad dreams or is Jack's fear of the planet causing her Biotics to go haywire and give everyone nightmares?

Can't wait to find out.

Keep up the interesting work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [22 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of chapter "Omega (1)" from calliopesol
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Okay, I just found this series a couple days ago (guess what I've spent my free time doing) and this chap?

Darkwing Duck?

Yeah, totally made it for me.

A little surprised that he didn't try to get people to call him "Nighthawk", if only ironically.
Comments from author:
I figured in the dark of space on the otherside of the galaxy Xander of all people would stick with what he knows
Review By [calliopesol] • Date [20 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Awakening (1)" from AlexanderMcpherson
Review:
Decided to revisit this story... and just had an odd idea after the mention of saren.


A whole load of Sarens...

http://www.sarens.com/media/242235/imgp6485.jpg

;)
Comments from author:
In the vein of adding a more Joss feel to the Mass Effect storyline I've been toying woth the idea of bringing Saren back cause if Papa Joss taught us anything it's that the only better then a good villain is a good villain who NEVER dies. ..but if he does die he comes back...then falls in love with one of the main heroes. ... then dies again...then evolves some weird codependent relationship. ..etc.
Review By [AlexanderMcpherson] • Date [11 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dossier:Assassin(3)" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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good Shepard saw her girl again :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [7 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dossier: Justicar(3)" from banditdoz
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Fantastic I love the interaction between Dawn and Jack thanks for writing
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [17 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dossier: Justicar(3)" from (Past Donor)Jewel
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Fantastic as always - enjoyed the meeting between Morinth and Samara - been waiting to see you handle that for a long while :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [13 Oct 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dossier: Justicar(3)" from Morgomir
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Great chapters. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [8 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Redemption (2)" from MultiverseBeliever
Review:
why was xander captured by aria? surely he wouldnt let himself in that situation
Comments from author:
You'll eventually learn Xander is the victim of yet another Scooby plan gone sideways. .. hope you enjoy
Review By [MultiverseBeliever] • Date [6 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dossier: Justicar(3)" from Omegaprime
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Now things are getting interesting with these two chapters.

Now this is going to get very weird if mommy Justicar and daughter AY reconsolidate their differences and make up.

But did I see Thane just make a first step into a relationship with the Justicar or is it just me?

Willow is doing interesting things but she is still kinda giving out the control b**ch vibes, at least that's what I thought, but she just might be overprotective.

I see that Xander and Jack have made the first steps towards their relationship.

Hmmm, a pregnant Jack? Now THAT'S one scary momma bear... and one scary baby.

Can't wait to see where the ship of the screwed up, the damned and really crazy goes next.

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [27 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dossier: Justicar(3)" from TheForgotten
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Another two awesome chapters.
Review By [TheForgotten] • Date [27 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dossier: Justicar(2)" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Jennifer Calendar? So, is she a reincarnation of Jenny/Janna or last surviving heir to the Kalderash?
Comments from author:
Jack isnt the Last of the Kalderash, but she might be the most powerful
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [26 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dossier: Justicar(1)" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapters. Sorry for the late review. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [16 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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