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Review of chapter "Reaper What You Saw" from (Current Donor)Vipomus
Review:
Insane ... funny and Insane (bears repeating).
Had me rolling on the floor.

Thanks for writting... got tears my eyes from laughing...
Review By [(Current Donor)Vipomus] • Date [27 Oct 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reaper What You Saw" from wood
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I have read this story (again) just now and it's still one of the best I've ever read!
Say is there a chance of adding a ME3 compliant chapter?
I would LOVE to see one.
Pretty please?
Review By [wood] • Date [27 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reaper What You Saw" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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Add enough time to an 'interesting' life, and no further excuses are needed!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reaper What You Saw" from deamon
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ok you gotta do mass effect 3 lol. maybe finally explain his actual relationships
Comments from author:
ME3 - played partway, and after ME1 and ME2, well, lets just say some bits are a little... game-breaking. and other bits that were a little, from the previous games, more so.
Review By [deamon] • Date [10 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reaper What You Saw" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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looks like Xander had fun :)

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fun again, but a bit more detail would have been awesome.
Comments from author:
yeah it was more rush job, than full story. one shot thing :P
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [18 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reaper What You Saw" from eriktheviking
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Great fun with Xander getting to show the universe some of his dreams.
Comments from author:
Yeah. Explosions and fortunate accidents :D
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reaper What You Saw" from wood
Review:
That WAS Be----UUUU-ti-FULL!!!
I nearly cried in absolute joy when I read this just now.
Question though: Now that the third game is out is there a chance for a chapter 3?
Comments from author:
sorry. Not played that far into. My Xbox wont read discs, and my pc mysteriously resets within 5 minutes of playing it. ... I have it on both PC and XBox, and can't play either. GRR.
Review By [wood] • Date [4 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reaper What You Saw" from EroSlackerMicha
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again an awesome fic. now you need the trifecta with ME3.

this rocks and kudos for the Shlock adding. Faith as Jack, I can see that.
Gotta say this might be short, but I like it. Zeppo Effect is a good inspiration glad another person reads it.
keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
was beta'ing it for a bit, but I couldn't get into the swing. Dont think I even read up to where he included my 'gattling sniper cannon' idea somewhere somehow someform.
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [3 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reaper What You Saw" from deamon
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well for me i think i like the tali pairing the most is cuz i like smart girl. and very few options are smarter than tali. plus you have the mystery with her mask so its almost like a grab bag on what she looks like lol.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I find smart girls hot too.

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Review By [deamon] • Date [1 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reaper What You Saw" from deamon
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i wouldnt mind a xander/kisumi one. but neber a xander/kelly cuz the way she talks she kinda seems like a closet slut lol. how she "loves" al alien races lol. i also dont like liara either maybe cuz i never saw her in mass effect one
Comments from author:
in ME2, did you catch Mordins' comment about how scale-itch, an STD, got on the ship (when it's only carried by Varren)...


As he says... Implications, unpleasant.


Popular fan theory: Kelly.

in the first game, Liara's shy and stuff. Her mom turned out to be an evil woman, but turned out to be good inside, just brainwashed into being evil. watched her die, if you take her with you on that mission. she's been through "Thick and thin" with you, and has feelings for you, unrequited if you dont follow the romance option. In the second game, the backstory of Shepard being recovered by Cerberus isn't actually cerberus doing that. but Liara, and then seeing Cerberus can protect her body, so Liara handed her over. (Which just makes TIM an asshole when, in the 'build a squad/I had a squad/theyre busy' scene after freedom's progress, he says that Liara is rumoured to be working for the Shadow Broker. Nope, she worked with CERBERUS to keep shepard's body away from the Shadow Broker, who was going to sell her body to the Collectors. TIM's an even bigger asshole, as he didn't know that Archangel was Garrus, and there's hints that he wouldn't have wanted Garrus on the squad. Tali is, tolerable, as her engineering expertise and her 'political' position as the daughter of one of the admirals meant he saw her on the crew worth the 'risk'.)


Liara's good in the first game, Meek and shy, but levelling her up is pretty much a game mechanic metaphor for Shepard working with her to improve Liara's skills.

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sorry I got a bit diverted there :P

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Ditto on Xander/Kelly. She seems like the "Shrink Industry"'s attempt to compete with Asari Psychology. The Consort on the Citadel: Practically a prostitute. She's an Asari of 'some influence', whom costs a year's salary at human alliance infantry levels, to even book the appointment with. Yet in the scene where she meets shepard in the first game, hints that it's more like the whole 'Companion' thing from Firefly/Serenity - high class prostitute, were sex isn't necessarily the point, not always but often the method to stress relief, counselling, that sort of thing. And their telepathic abilities presents certain boons to diagnosis and remedying mental problems. Hence what I see Kelly's profession: She's trying to compete with the Asari. Asari can 'mate' with any sentient organic race. (Its not even stated if they can or cannot mate with non-intelligent, which is why I say Sentient, which covers animals too)

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Review By [deamon] • Date [1 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reaper What You Saw" from deamon
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you know i would love to see a mass effect crossover with xander paired with either tali, miranda, or samsara. oh and does anyone actually knows what tali looks like under her mask? they ever show it?
Comments from author:
They haven't, but I'm really looking forward to ME3 since they might in that one. (I'm getting it on PC and Xbox - Xbox for the pure experience, PC to modify and do shit with, if anyone ever manages to do proper mods for it.)

as far a Xander/Tali, Xander/Miranda or Xander/Samara... the last one I can't see, the middle one I can only see if he's a hand in removing that stick from her ass and stuff but if not then only when she's less pro-cerberus (which is like the Mass Effect version of the Initiative, a Fused-universe type of crossover or two have used that were cerberus is simply what the initiative became over time, and others where the initiative was the inspiration for.)

I do however think the Xander/Tali is a nice idea.

But... Xander/Kasumi... hmm, nice.

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Review By [deamon] • Date [29 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reaper What You Saw" from Avaiaal
Review:
AAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

sorry, just been playing mass effect again for the last few hours and this struck me as utterly hilarious. :)
Comments from author:
Glad you like. Been playing Me2 again myself.

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Review By [Avaiaal] • Date [20 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bullets From Afar" from SimulatedSoul
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Premise shows promise, but the writing style is jarring imo. Short, spartanly described narratives do your premise a disservice. Also, Uber!Xander needs to be fleshed out, otherwise he seems OOC and kind of juvenile (and not in the endearing way he was portrayed in the show). Also, the whole duct taping 3 sniper rifles together and using one scope thing? Not plausible, and kind of a wtf moment. Just saying.
Comments from author:
The idea of those is that 'duct-tape' is both literal, in that duct tape is used, as well as figurative - two objects put together using easily-gained items.

The style is not one at all - I write as it comes and my muse hates it when I try to go back and rewrite it well or something.

Not Uber Xander - he's just a good soldier things to Soldierguy memories, and concentrated on being a Sniper... and Snipers can in fact make kills upto a mile, it's just not often. Given Mass Effect tech aka magnetic fields propelling a very light round, with VI assisted Aiming and Mass-effect assisted stability? yeah, 2 miles plus.

the three-barrel sniper rifle is that he's altered the triggers on two of them, tied them into the third gun, and specially sighted and aligned them for whatever distance he works at.
(and three rounds at once - sound-wise and that stuff, dunno what would be the case to someone close to the impact point, but that I put all on dramatic effect.)

Also, it IS snapshots, and it is easy to snapshot bits from the show that wont endear you to him. (Hyena Rape scene, Love spell, abandoning anya at the alter, to name the obvious.)

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Review By [SimulatedSoul] • Date [19 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reaper What You Saw" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great fun thanks.
Comments from author:
no probs...
*sniff*

grr I gotta go check I'm not burning my bacon....

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Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [19 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reaper What You Saw" from (Recent Donor)BHRamsay
Review:
Awesome story ....mind if I borrow the fusion core thing --- And Im totally giving you a shout out in the next chapter
Comments from author:
you can borrow it. Shame that I wont get that mech back in pristine condition... no, not a shame. :D

And thanks. I'm trying to slog through it but I hit bits like 'Illyria, really?' and then 'hint of other immortals?' the Buffy bit sent me a loop though.

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Review By [(Recent Donor)BHRamsay] • Date [19 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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