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Getting to Know You AKA Jack O’Neill Finds His Son

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Review of chapter "How It Didn't Happen" from DieselDriver
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Yeah, I can see how that one didn't happen. The previous 5 chapters are certainly worth continuing. I hope you find it in yourself to do so. I like the writing style and I like the "Xander/Jack" "son/father" stories and this one started out very well... Then stopped. Darn!
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [1 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "How It Didn't Happen" from BillPh
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The problem with this and several other real family stories is that it is impossible to look at 2 peoples' DNA and conclude that one is the parent of the other.

As a person's DNA is half from each parent, all that such a check can say is that there is a 50% match, and there will be lots of them with unrelated individuals. Paternity testing works because the mother is known, so any part of the DNA that does not match the mother's must be from the father, if that matched 100% there is a good probability that the father has been identified. However, most legal systems require other evidence.
Review By [BillPh] • Date [15 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Red Pill, Blue Pill" from DragonBard
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Was this prior to them finding out Anya's Scandinavian? Norse actually, but close enough.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [25 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fly Me To The Moon" from RevDorothyL
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that "Pinky and the Brain" bit was priceless! I love the idea of comparing the oh-so-serious and self-satisfied Adam to a genetically enhanced mouse with perpetually thwarted ambitions to take over the world!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [22 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "How It Didn't Happen" from Neverwillmini
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Chapters 1 through 5 were the start of a pretty good story line, but Chapter 6 sounds more like Andrew than Xander - unless of course it's a Xander-bot, then that could explain it. (What if Jack comes to town while Xander is two people because of Toth?) Hope you do more on the Xander/Jack story line. I'd love to see Hammond having a ball over all the hair-pulling stress Xander causes Jack (what goes around, comes around).
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [21 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "How It Didn't Happen" from (Current Donor)jcon
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That was disturbing, in a good way. Many evil thoughts came to the forefront just reading this. Thankyou for that.
Review By [(Current Donor)jcon] • Date [21 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "How It Didn't Happen" from kayron
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I liked the way chapter five ended.
Review By [kayron] • Date [21 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "How It Didn't Happen" from VillageOrchid
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Totally crack-tastic. Maybe if Jack used the "w" word after chapter 5. Thanks for sharing!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [21 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Red Pill, Blue Pill" from VillageOrchid
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Enjoyed the adult/grown-up dialogs between Jack and Xander and between Xander and Buffy. Too little of that shown on the show between the quippage. Not that I don't enjoy quippage, but character moments in dialog are also of the good.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [21 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fly Me To The Moon" from VillageOrchid
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Not really sure if I understand what Xander meant here:

‘Pinky and the Brain.’ As you do. So we stopped him. As you do.

I can understand him maybe saying "As you do" for "so we stopped them" but didn't quite understand the first one. Although I do know what Pinky and the Brain is.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [21 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hey, Kid, I'm Your Dad" from VillageOrchid
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Good playing out of a what if in character. After all Anya's first language is an old form of Scandivavian... other languages probably learned via magic.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [21 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "How It Didn't Happen" from BillieBog
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Was really liking this until the change in the last chapter
Review By [BillieBog] • Date [21 Mar 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "How It Didn't Happen" from LNR
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I could do without the last chapter and with a new update Please.

It was funny, yes, but you have the makings of a good story there.
Review By [LNR] • Date [21 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "How It Didn't Happen" from Myauzo
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I love the ending but I wouldn't mind if you wanted to continue the other chapters. :)
Review By [Myauzo] • Date [21 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "How It Didn't Happen" from Thewander
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while the last part was funny. I am soooo glade the the whole story wasnt like that. I get tired of those really fast.
Review By [Thewander] • Date [21 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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