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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)James
Would love to see a story of how Sky, Jason, and Sarah meet.

I didn't re-read the first story and it had been several years since I have seen the movie. So I was a little slow in the uptake that Jason was Lois and Clark's son.

Comments from author:
It was originally going to be something on those lines, wasted days trying to make it work, but it wasn't coming together so I went with an established friendship and got the story written in in one evening.
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [29 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JediKnight
Very nice job on the story, I hope to read more soon.

-Ever consider a "Supergirl"/"Ghostbusters" crossover?

-Edit: You gotta admit, it would have been interesting.

-Edit 2: What about a "Doctor Who"/"Batman"?

-Edit 3: What about Rachel's death in "The Dark Knight"?
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I've sort of established that New York is Hancock's territory in this series, and I think he's more likely to stick Venkman's head up his ass than work with him, and would not be keen on the others conducting experiments on him.

-edit - Well, I'm pretty sure that Supergirl wouldn't stick Venkman's head up his ass, but I think it would still be a bit of a train wreck in other respects.

-edit2 - I think that The Doctor would discover that the death of Bruce's parents and his subsequent vigilante roll were fixed events - there's a Stormwatch story where they discover that Batman exists in hundreds of parallel Gotham cities. And the Doctor really doesn't like fixed events, he steers clear of them as much as he can.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [13 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Morgomir
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
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Review By [Morgomir] • Date [4 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragonelf
I have just finished rereading this series and I am already looking forward to start reading anything new you might get inspired to add to this series.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Chocolate Apple Pie::

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Neither fire nor wind,
birth nor death can
erase our good deeds.
- Buddha
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Already thinking about the next one.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Really nicely done. The characters have enough to make them seem real to themselves, at least the ones I've actually watched in action. The extra bits and pieces fit together without seeming rushed or squished to hard.
Comments from author:
Thanks - this came together really well, I was quite pleased with it.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Lovely addition to a nifty series. You so seamlessly squish all the various universes together and also have an interesting plot, too. You are my hero, in a totally heterosexual way of course.

But I did feel just a little sorry for the cybernauts. Of course their deactivation was quick. One of the real problems with teleportation, no? Just how do you aim a teleporter?
Comments from author:
Thanks - I had a lot of fun with this one.

Cybernauts were never exactly bright - their typical program was "bash your way through any obstacles to kill the person carrying a homing beacon then destroy the beacon and return to base" - I don't think that anything running on the chips from a couple of BBC Micros will be very self-aware, so no need to worry.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Hah, take that Jack! Not often someone gets some retcon or similar over on him!
Nice to see Jason stepping into the family business just a little.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it - there's a nice Torchwood / Men in Black drabble I've seen somewhere on similar lines, also one where Willow uses the Tabula Rasa spell on them, can't remember who wrote either of them.

Jason would be 12 now if you take Superman Returns as being set in 2006, he should be be well on his way to the full Kryptonian set of powers (if he's going to have them at all). I may put him into another story eventually.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [2 Apr 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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