Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Rules for Challenges

Rise of the Ultimate Peasant

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "Chapter Three – Source of Magic" from Lydia
Review:
Now this story was good and interesting, its just a shame the author seem to have gone AWOL and hasn't continued its story with the next 'book' that was promised at the end, its very sad, it would have been a great story to see being continued, somebody should consider taking over and continuing it since wraithrune didn't.
Review By [Lydia] • Date [19 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three – Source of Magic" from Muffie
Review:
A nicely written and interesting story. I particularly liked how Super!Xander didn't turn out to be a Mary Sue. He remained interesting throughout.
Review By [Muffie] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three – Source of Magic" from uochou
Review:
Interesting story, I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing!
Review By [uochou] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three – Source of Magic" from uochou
Review:
Interesting story, I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing!
Review By [uochou] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three – Source of Magic" from uochou
Review:
Interesting story, I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing!
Review By [uochou] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three – Source of Magic" from brnmac
Review:
I can't wait for you to start Book 2! Please Start Soon!!!
Review By [brnmac] • Date [22 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three – Source of Magic" from ambe
Review:
Crazy, and quite a lot of fun. I enjoyed this story very much.
Review By [ambe] • Date [18 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three – Source of Magic" from tavinseven
Review:
This is a really great story. I love what you did with Xanders powers and while I think you rushed through the last chapter it was a good wrap up. I do hope you write a sequel because this idea has so much potential. I can see a lot of people will want to use Xander for their own personal gain. The Goa'uld will want him and the world governments will want his powers and Senator Kinsey (is that right) will want to control him. I wonder if you're ever going to have Xander construct a new tree of wonder? Oh, and a suggestion for Dawn have Xander deconstruct her and the construct her again. If Xander is the source of all magic it stands to reason that anything he makes will be able to produce its own magic so Dawn wouldn't need to use the moon wells constantly.
Review By [tavinseven] • Date [25 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three – Source of Magic" from Bill
Review:
Very well done!
Review By [Bill] • Date [9 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three – Source of Magic" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Sad, you never got around to the sequel. It is fun rereading this, but I still long for more. Thanx for what you did put out!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [28 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three – Source of Magic" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Joyce for 60 gold? I can see his powers are a great temptation!

What happens if you bless a water elemental and then have it
attack vampires?


-That I will do all I can to save, to nurture, and to lend a hand
to any living creature in need of help.

Hitler could have used a hand in his final days. That's just one
of the many examples for how that vow just screwed everything over.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [2 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two – Preparations" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
The soul is not guilty of the vampire's crimes, they are two different people.
Why are people being punished for the actions of demons using their body
after they were dead and gone? Du went after her soul, which really is
probably a greater sin than murder. Xander has deliberately yanked William's
soul out of the afterlife to make it suffer for crimes a demon committed with
his body after he was gone. So much for power not corrupting him.


Multiple rings of Amarra? There should have only been one and he was forced
to make the others.


-“Come on, what do you think will give a man a single moment of happiness? It's
sex of course.”

I still say that was just because of how shallow Angel is.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [2 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Birth of the Ultimate Peasant" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Cordelia shouldn't be involved. She's still a popularity obsessed biatch with a thing for Angel at this point. Angel was just coming around himself. Willow had a thing for Xander the size of the hellmouth... The characters hadn't come into their full character growth and are vastly different than the later season versions.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [2 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three – Source of Magic" from malchance
Review:
This is a wonderful story. I never could have come up with the ideas you incorporated. Well done. I can't wait to read the sequel.

As far as ideas go for the sequel, I only have one. Since Dawn is the Key and under Xan's protection, I would love for him to train her and end up with them traveling through the multi-verse going from one fandom 'verse to another.
Review By [malchance] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three – Source of Magic" from ivanjedi
Review:
After reading so many of your stories, it gets amusing rather than irritating that you manage to seriously overpower the good guys in almost no time (At least in most of your Buffy crossovers; 'Phantom Brave' and 'Technological Ninja Naruto Uzumaki' at least seem tame in that regard, and 'Master of forbidden Seals' would have been tame too if it weren't for the sheer number of characters involved)
In this one, you really outdid yourself in the overpowering department, that's for certain. Seriously, you would unleash in the Stargate Universe someone who can disassemble and then make unlimited number of copies of Atlantis, or Lantean Battlecruisers if he gets to the Orion and the s, and on top of that can make items that increase people's intelligence so humans would be able to figure out the Ancient Tech easily? where would be the fun of that? Exactly what could you possibly come up with to give the Gang a challenge?
Now, with a risk to irritate you by nagging, as I wrote to you on the matter on the FF.net's Personal message system, and then in a review for 'Apprentice to a Hero', I'd like to ask you for permission to use one of your setups to write a story of my own. I'm interested in the 'Apprentice', as I have never written a Naruto story before, 'Master of Orion' and 'Arm Commander, Alexander' (judging from what I found uploaded, those two stories have never really started in the first place, despite the high possibilities the setup offers)
Review By [ivanjedi] • Date [20 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Page: 1 of 4 next end
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking