Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Rules for Challenges

Detective al Ghul

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "The Daughter's Farewell" from Oddshot
Review:
Detective al Ghul by MarcusSLazarus : I truly am enjoy this interesting Crossover between Castle & Batman , Now if i may suggest - Kate Beckett aka Talia al Ghul believes she is Ra's al Ghuls only child but what if the Talia with Bane in Dark Knight Rises , was Ra's al Ghuls Grand daughter who’s mother died in prison as told in her and Banes Dark Knight Rises back story remember in your story Ra's al Ghul did say to Kate/Talia that "I have lost much over the course of my long life, daughter," he also said "I have endured that pain before, and giving in to it just led to even greater harm; I must maintain my distance-" this could mean that Kate/Talia’s mother was not the only wife he had lost to death .

Just a thought , & I do hope your muse will make you update & continue to develop this story some more .
Comments from author:
I'm exploring that issue in the sequels; hope they meet with your approval.
Review By [Oddshot] • Date [4 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Daughter's Farewell" from AwesomeGeek
Review:
Wow! If you come up with all of this from one piece of art then just... Wow. I know I am late in reviewing and I feel terrible about it. I'm now off to read the rest and I know I'm going to love it just as much as I love this. You should feel very proud.
Review By [AwesomeGeek] • Date [2 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Daughter's Farewell" from eriktheviking
Review:
An intriguing insight into the conflicted daughter.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [4 Jul 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Daughter's Farewell" from Barona
Review:
Nice interesting little fic. Well done!
Review By [Barona] • Date [3 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Daughter's Farewell" from alynambered
Review:
Very interesting continuation of this introduction to Kate and Bruce's interactions as a result of Ra's machinations. I don't go to the movies, so I'll have to decide whether to wait to read your next installment until after I buy 'Dark Knight Rises'??

And here again are my nitpicks:

Chapter 4:
"Mr Wayne?" a voice said, a slightly Russian tilt to its accent. - "lilt"
he thought about calling her back and offering him his own contact number, - "her his"

Chapter 5:
knew that she was legally entitled to report Bruce Wayne's activities - "legally required"
Review By [alynambered] • Date [3 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Daughter's Farewell" from Orion
Review:
Great! Thanks for updating.
Review By [Orion] • Date [2 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Silent Attack" from Barona
Review:
I love where this is going. Bit heavy on the "angst", but that is probably just personal preference.

But the thought of Bruce Wayne and Richard Castle eventually meeting... WONDERFUL!

Then again, knowing those two, they probably would have met lots before Castle and Beckett partner up...
Review By [Barona] • Date [12 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Silent Attack" from LadyHealer
Review:
Very interesting!
Review By [LadyHealer] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Silent Attack" from alynambered
Review:
I really am enjoying this mix of Kate and Batman.

Nitpick: When Kate was waiting for her father, did he enter from the back or wasn't she watching the door? (if so, not very detective-y)
Review By [alynambered] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Silent Attack" from (Current Donor)Sithspit
Review:
What started as mildly interesting has just crossed over into "eye-brow raising" and intriguing.

Looking FOURward to the next chapter... ^_^
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Silent Attack" from TheLaughingMan
Review:
Nice story, but Ra's needs more appropriate dialogue. It might work with the comics, but in BB and TDK not so much.
Review By [TheLaughingMan] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Silent Attack" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great look into Beckett's early days at the precinct and how she still regards her past.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Silent Attack" from Orion
Review:
So far so good. I look forward to seeing what you do with this. Thanks for writing.
Review By [Orion] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Silent Attack" from Ghostrider
Review:
The more I read of this story, the more I like it. Structure, background and dialogue is perfect. The characters, as we've seen them so far, are compelling. I'm looking forward to further chapters.
Comments from author:
Not much more planned for this story, but let's just say I'm thinking of doing something involving 'Dark Knight Rises' once I know how that film will turn out...
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Mother's Loss" from Orion
Review:
Interesting start. I look forward to seeing where you take this.
Review By [Orion] • Date [23 May 12] • Not Rated
Page: 1 of 2 next end
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking