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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Genuka
Review:
*Snicker* Nice little tale.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from BarbarossaRotbart
Review:
That's all?
Comments from author:
Yes, that is all. For now at least. How much did you expect?
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from nodakskip
Review:
Interesting but short. Still got to explain why Cordy and Faith are chummy. Sounds like the fluke has happened. But one thing I am unsure on. I may be wrong here but I didn't think the SS rings worked on just "love" more like the spite of spurned love. And the Star Sapphire was a being that latched onto Carol taking her over. It used the hurt she had since her and Hal couldn't be together and turned her into a powerful GL villain. I have thought of using the SS as a device for Cordy post fluke as she would be perfect to be taken over by it. But after being semi freed of it Carol would kind of have some guilt from the years as SS.

Not to mention I think teaching Gym is way under Carols skill level. She has an IQ higher then Willows, is a combat pilot, and ran Farris Industries. Its like having Steve Jobs be the new lunch room cook.

Though interested to see more maybe showing Carol help Cordy through the post fluke to not turn out like Carol did in the comics.
Comments from author:
Fair enough. That said, Faith and Cordelia spent most of the night (after Carol had a "time-out") arguing, until deciding to a call a truce - whether or not it'll last long is another matter. Carol has no intention of just remaining a sub, but she needs to start somewhere, might as well start small. Also, speaking of Carol, I got a feeling that she's becoming a more ambiguous character in canon, even though Hal's rejection of her still hurts, but then again, unlike Andrew Wells, I'm not the biggest fan of comics, so I might be wrong. Either way, thank you for your review.
Review By [nodakskip] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part One" from BarbarossaRotbart
Review:
Let's hope she finds a way to recharge her ring.
Comments from author:
Don't count on it. And thanks for the review.
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart] • Date [21 Jun 12] • Not Rated
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