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Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Oh Baby!" from Vorchan
Review:
Well, infants DO have the same overall personalities as they do when they grow up, so, Dawn as a toddler would have the same personality as she would as a teen, but less developed.
This had me laughing the whole time, congratulations on that!
I especially liked the part where Dawn is like "You think?!" (Very clear What she's trying to say!) Of course she's a little upset. (she actually said: "Ooh ink?")
This is VERY Different, and I do enjoy it immensely!
Spectacular Piece of art! Fun to read, and very enjoyable!
When I saw Dawn saying "Bubby!" I had to crack up, it was simply too spectacular to believe!
Well DONE!
Review By [Vorchan] • Date [15 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Him Revealed" from spk
Review:
Really wanting more of this. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [3 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Him Revealed" from divaslayer
Review:
Interesting story so far, I loved it. I can't wait to see where this goes.

Dani
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [15 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Haven't Met Him Yet" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
Aww shucks, I was so hoping that one of my votes would win. Oh well I like the Hotch anyway. Pic on the way. :)
Comments from author:
Hotch is definitely a challenge for me. Looking forward to the pic.
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [14 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Him Revealed" from clarityfades
Review:
Ooh, Hotch! So I'm guessing his ream will show up in a few hours since he didn't check in as scheduled. I like the idea of the protection spell for Dawn, maybe it'll prevent her from being kidnapped so much. & Willow is so busted. :)
Comments from author:
And there are more surprises yet to come!
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [13 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Him Revealed" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
I love the him revealed...now lets see Hotch smile. And I learned about a new cat....
Comments from author:
LOL, I was almost going to ask you what you were talking about with the cat before I remembered that I had that in the early version (and never took it out). I'm hoping to make the 'courtship' between them believable...so no expecting them to get married in the next couple days.
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [13 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Him Revealed" from Netchka
Review:
Cool story. Can't wait for the next chapters to be posted. :>
Comments from author:
I have plans for at least a couple surprises in Sunnydale, but I'm lost as to what should be going on with the BAU folks.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [13 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Him Revealed" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
It was a treat getting this chapter on my birthday. : ) yay thanks. It was great a little sad it wasn't someone else but I like Hotch. Also I am so excited for his group to get there and watch the vidieo from the store Rolls on floor laughing.
Comments from author:
Poor Hotch's rep would never recover. Happy belated b-day!!
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [12 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Haven't Met Him Yet" from AllegraCousland
Review:
I usually pass on fics that use polls or voting schemes, as it often seems that the 'winner' is tossed into the story instead of smoothly woven into it from the onset. Thankfully this is a lovely little tale; the characters are smoothly written and true to type and I'm very eager to see where this goes!

Cheers~
Comments from author:
Glad you like it so far. I've only just started watching CM, so I'm worried about my characterizations of that side.
Review By [AllegraCousland] • Date [12 May 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Him Revealed" from Flipside
Review:
Man, you had me laughing so hard, my head hurts right now. And its gonna be a thousand times worse when the team shows up to 'save' Hotch. Please update again soon. I really needed that humor.
Comments from author:
Glad it amused it. Trying to decide if there should be anyone on the team that knows about the supernatural already.
Review By [Flipside] • Date [11 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Him Revealed" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Much as I enjoyed the "Randy and Joan show" in the original episode, I found this version credible, and yes, I'm sure that Spike's just in for a good thrashing, since a pile of dust can't re-pay the loan shark for all the kittens he's borrowed. :)
Comments from author:
Yeah, I really didn't think that Spike's unlife was in any danger. Maybe a finger or two.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [11 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Him Revealed" from Toniboo
Review:
yay!!! i voted for him!!! i'm really enjoying this so far and am looking forward to more

toniboo
xox
Comments from author:
Thanks for the encouragement.
Review By [Toniboo] • Date [11 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Him Revealed" from bradsan
Review:
Darn I knew it. I didn't hope for it but in my heart I knew it would be Aaron. He is good looking for his age but he is old. I'm whining I know but he is old. Angel is older but he still looked very young.

A well it's your choice and can't change it even if you wanted it which you don't so I got to live with it.

Oh man Buffy is gone be so mad at Willow. I really hope that instead of Tara she will tell Willow to leave. I always thought it was dangerous to keep Willow around Dawn.

Oh and poor Spike can't wait how Buffy will react if she realize that she threw him out. "LOL"

Can't wait for the next update. Even with Aaron still a good update.
Comments from author:
Well, remember that this is an earlier season (Jack is only like 1 or so). I do like Hotch for the fact that he's stable and a leader...and he's attractive for his age.

Changes are coming for the Sunnydale crew...that's all I'm saying for now.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [11 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Him Revealed" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Been a while. Not sure where the baby fits in. I remember Dharma and Greg well, so Hotch being romantic and flustered is imaginable.
Comments from author:
I had two choices what to do with Dawn: de-age her or use her to cause trouble between Hotch and Buffy. Figured the de-aging would be a way to sidestep the 'bashing' issue that would probably come up with reviewers.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [11 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Him Revealed" from QueenCA
Review:
Aaron, huh? Wasn't expecting him...but I like it. ;) And you have Hayley alive and remarried? Nice one.

Love the interaction between Aaron and the team. And the interaction between Aaron and Buffy during the spell. And now they know what Willow did...

Guess next time we'll see the outcome...of a lot of things?

Loved the chapter! Keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
I need at least one of them to be semi-healthy in an emotional sense. Hotch is hurting, but he's still pretty good...something I can't claim for Buffy at this point.

Next chapter should be interesting when the Scoobies try to deal with Hotch.
Review By [QueenCA] • Date [11 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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