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Review of chapter "SG-1 and a Brit" from Letomo
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Diane wrote:

They may have had Carter for a while before Buffy turned up. Or maybe they're choosing based on knowledge that they'll be able to steal.



Or, Carter has a potent reputation among the Goa'uld, and Lizzie is a newby to them, a redshirt. The Goa'uld that wears Carter will not only get a huge rep boost, but a potential brain boost as well!
Comments from author:
Hey, Carter is so smart she probably counts as a hak'taur already.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [15 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part X" from DieselDriver
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Dang Woman! Out of one cliff hanger and rightintothenextone. Not fair. Darn short chapters.

By the way, there were 4 updates to stories I'm following this morning and this is the ...
Comments from author:
Well, all the Cross Purposes chapters are this length. It just seems short.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [14 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part X" from JediKnight
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Nice work on the fight.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I actually try to map them out.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [14 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part X" from Traszgo
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Comments from author: Thanks. I've been taking lessons on Evil Authorship.

ITYM "giving lessons". HTH. HAND.
Comments from author:
:D :D

But I don't have my Evil Teaching Certificate yet! :D
Review By [Traszgo] • Date [13 Oct 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part X" from burmafrdnow
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this one is starting to drag a bit; need to wrap it up.
Comments from author:
Sorry, but there are still some more twists and turns.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [13 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part X" from hamishog
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We've already established that Liz is totally bad and Giles could use a moral make-over and that Carter looks really hot dressed like Barbara Eden so tell me - what else do we need to know (except for this nagging feeling that I've got that Liz is totally into old dudes). Step one - get captured - has been accomplished. Followed by step two - escape. Followed by fleeing madly or step three. And then step four, the cliff-hanger. They used to show stuff like this on Saturday mornings.
Comments from author:
Step 3: Profit! :D

Oh I have a few more steps planned along the way.
Review By [hamishog] • Date [13 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part X" from Starfox
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Ah, another evil cliffhanger! Good chapter, loved the snark - but picking Carter over Buffy? Those guys must be discriminating against short people!
Comments from author:
They may have had Carter for a while before Buffy turned up. Or maybe they're choosing based on knowledge that they'll be able to steal.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [13 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part X" from Zorgdub
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~~[ Liz felt an unbearable pain in her side as the ball o’ fiery death hit her in the shortribs, and then everything went black. She didn’t even get time for the quippage, which was totally not fai- ]~~

Been a while since one of your cliffhanger really got to me. Good job.


Also, I liked the escape, especially how Liz did it and the way Giles behaved.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I've been taking lessons on Evil Authorship.
Review By [Zorgdub] • Date [13 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part X" from Rich
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I hate when that hap....
Comments from author:
:D :D Look on the good side: she's the narrator. That's automatic plot armor.
Review By [Rich] • Date [13 Oct 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part X" from MarcusRowland
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Not good - hopefully it was set to stun, not kill.
Comments from author:
The staff weapon - or Ma'Tok if you're speaking Goua'uld - is always set on 'charcoal broil'. :D
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [13 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part X" from VillageOrchid
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Short but good. And good luck again with your eyes getting better.
Comments from author:
I've got my fingers crossed about my eye. But that makes it much harder to type. :D
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part X" from Zeviz
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Poor Liz... Easily taking out all NID hitmen just to be hit by a lucky shot from the guys with legendarily bad aim. Good thing SGverse has plenty of healing and regeneration technologies.

And Buffy's PoV is always amusing to read in any of your worlds.
Comments from author:
Some days, nothing goes right. I mean, when was the last time anyone really guarded any of those rooms?
Review By [Zeviz] • Date [13 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part X" from AntonioCC
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I hope that there is a sarcophage nearby. Liz is probably one of the best "powerless" Buffys that I have seen.
Comments from author:
Well, she's the narrator, so I can't kill her. Right?
Review By [AntonioCC] • Date [13 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part X" from RevDorothyL
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No time for quippage?! We knew the Goa'uld were evil, but THIS evil? Harumph!
Comments from author:
There should always be time for quippage! Wait, you mean that talking is NOT a free action?
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [13 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part X" from Harry
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Sounds like the O'Neill plan just hit a big roadblock! And just when things were starting to work out. Now, how about finding someone to do some artwork for these stories of yours? I would KILL to see Sam in that Arabian Nights outfit!!!!
Comments from author:
That outfit is definitely X-rated. Someone would have to do it over on DeviantArt or something. And not tell Amanda Tapping. :D
Review By [Harry] • Date [13 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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