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Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part XI" from Gideon
Review:
So that's how it happens in this universe! I hope Sydney soon finds an appreciation for Liz's humour or she might be driven insane!
Comments from author:
Poor Sidney. She doesn't even get to keep her own name.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [28 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part XI" from DieselDriver
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I went back from the part about "alleged" grammar several times but could not find anywhere "Sidney" (I had a female Chow Chow named Sidney, sniff sniff) said any such thing. Did she make it up?

What is a "BANF"? I sort of assume it has something to do with teleportation from the context but don't recall ever hearing the term before.

Just thought of a question from reading the other reviews. What happens if they try to put a Goa'uld into a body with a Tok'ra in it?
Comments from author:
[1] Liz didn't make up the 'alleged' part. But it happened inside her head while she was talknig with Jack, so it didn't show up in the spoken part of the scene. I just thought it was funnier to have Liz react without the reader hearing exactly what Sidney said.

[2] And I was going with 'Bamf!' because that was always the sound that Nightcrawler made when he teleported in the old X-Men comics. Jack and Liz share a vast heap of pop culture refs because Jack is older, and Liz spent too much time around Willow and Xander.

[3] I think it has never been answered. I would assume the Goua'uld 'extract' or murder the Tok'ra symbiote before shoving the new Goua'uld symbiote into the host. After all, what's the fun of it if it doesn't hurt them a ton in the process?
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [28 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part XI" from JediKnight
Review:
Love the update.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I figured the StargateVerse Summers chick deserved an upgrade too, which is why her snake has a name so close to Sineya.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [28 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part XI" from Starfox
Review:
Great chapter! Poor Sidney, trapped in Liz' body -torture for anyone used to proper grammar...
Comments from author:
Thanks. I think some more Tok'ra deserve something like that.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [28 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part XI" from (Past Donor)Glendon
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That poor Tok'Ra. What goes on in the minds of Lizzie's isn't suitable for public consumption apparently. Loved it.
Comments from author:
Some of those Tok'ra deserve a little taunting. Anise, I'm lookin' at you!
Review By [(Past Donor)Glendon] • Date [28 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part XI" from hamishog
Review:
What is it with Liz and Pokemon? Sidney, I choose you. But if all she was going to do was die in space it shouldn't be taking so many chapters so I've got to hold out some hope.
And she's right - family in Sunnydale sucked.
Comments from author:
I blame an ancient spell from the mayor. Otherwise, parents would do something when one of their kids got eaten or drained.
Review By [hamishog] • Date [27 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part XI" from RevDorothyL
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Liz and 'Sidney' seem to be a very promising (and entertaining) team, no matter how short or long their association may turn out to be! :)
Comments from author:
It's 'The Odd Couple'.

Oh rats, now I've got that theme music running through my head.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [27 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part XI" from Dragan
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Electross is a Pure Electric type hehee and with Levitation usually my favorite Electric type alongside Jolteon.
Comments from author:
Poor Sidney. The indignity of being Pokemonized by Liz!
Review By [Dragan] • Date [27 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part XI" from ShalaDakiri
Review:
TBH, I kind of saw that coming. I liked the Si'ney/Sidney link... and the name is pretty close to Sineya, too.

Hopefully, the bluff doesn't turn into friendly-fire, since I rather doubt Buffy wants to see how many new holes she can pick up.
Comments from author:
Yeah, Liz has kind of a large injury that is more of a crater than a little hole.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [27 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part XI" from Harry
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Well, this symbiote is working well for Liz. But there is still the matter of getting out of this place before it self destructs. And that is not going to be easy! Time to do what Liz did not want to do, but Jack has suggested: Use one member of SG1 to play "prisoner" and get into a place to have Thor teleport them off this ship.
Comments from author:
Yeah, so far this symbiote is working better for Liz than that one that got into Sam. Or the one that got into Jack.
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part XI" from Zeviz
Review:
Poor Tok'ra that has to share Liz' head. :D
Comments from author:
Liz: "Hey! That is so not of the fairness!"
Review By [Zeviz] • Date [27 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part XI" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good chapter!
Comments from author:
Thanks. I was setting this up the whole way.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and a Brit" from Letomo
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Diane wrote:

They may have had Carter for a while before Buffy turned up. Or maybe they're choosing based on knowledge that they'll be able to steal.



Or, Carter has a potent reputation among the Goa'uld, and Lizzie is a newby to them, a redshirt. The Goa'uld that wears Carter will not only get a huge rep boost, but a potential brain boost as well!
Comments from author:
Hey, Carter is so smart she probably counts as a hak'taur already.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [15 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part X" from DieselDriver
Review:
Dang Woman! Out of one cliff hanger and rightintothenextone. Not fair. Darn short chapters.

By the way, there were 4 updates to stories I'm following this morning and this is the ...
Comments from author:
Well, all the Cross Purposes chapters are this length. It just seems short.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [14 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part X" from JediKnight
Review:
Nice work on the fight.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I actually try to map them out.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [14 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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