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Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from DieselDriver
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My favorite Kurt Vonnegut story is "Report on the Barnhouse Effect". Is that the one you were thinking of? I love that story. It's full text is available online in Word format.
Comments from author:
Oooh! I haven't read that one. I'll have to read it. Thank you! I was thinking of "Cat's Cradle", which is an amazing book. I really like Kurt Vonnegut. I tried to shove in a reference to Kilgore Trout into one of my future stories -- we'll see if that scene makes it past the cutting room floor.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [31 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from misterwhy
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Thank you for a great story. In some ways it reminded me of the start of Richard III of Shakespeare. I hope to read more of your work in the near future.

Yagya Dollie
Benoni
Republic of South Africa
Review By [misterwhy] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from misterwhy
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Queen Jadis has always been something of a tragic figure to me, a bit like Macbeth. She knows her own future and has already planted the seeds of her own destruction. The more she seeks to destroy her enemies the faster she rushes towards her own annihilation.
Unfortunately, she loves her pride more than her own life and is quite willing to blind herself to truths her, quite high, intelligence should be warning her against. Like the wizards of Unseen University, her intelligence is likened to the power of a steam locomotive; very powerful but once set on tracks it is very hard to get off the path. Single-mindedness can be quite bad when the rider in a cart with horse at full gallop cannot see the precipice.
As far as I know she has never known the love of a true relationship and is clearly psychopathic. Her vastly superior strength and magic makes reasoning with her quite difficult as she sees almost no reason to bend to the opinions or wishes of anyone else. As many a dictator has said :"Only my own power makes sense, all else is madness"
Review By [misterwhy] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Past Donor)James
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More soon please.

James
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [1 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Cutiepie
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A fun new story in the series, even though Buffy isn't involved.

Noted something in the first part: "The fauna certainly looked Earth-based--" Fauna is animal life. You/he meant flora, plant life.

Also I wonder why the Doctor said, "Good kitty; good kitty," to the wolves a bit later in the chapter. Wolves are lupine, not feline. Even canine ("good dog" or "good puppy") would have been closer, so it didn't make any sense to me.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [31 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from misterwhy
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Very few writers delve into Jadis' mind. It would be great to see that there is more to her than a textbook villain stroking a cat.
Review By [misterwhy] • Date [31 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from ShalaDakiri
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That was Aslan he was hearing, wasn't it? It does, after all, fit with Aslan singing Narnia into existance.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SnakeFox
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Will this be changed at all from the version posted on your Teaspoon account? I read the bit in Seventh Segment where you said it was something you'd posted somewhere else before, got impatient when I finished the first chapter here and a spot of mild googling later, I'd finished the story. Just curious if I should still have this version Tracked or not.

EDIT: Oh yeah yeah, it was good. Definitely worth reading, I'm glad you decided to add it here :)
Comments from author:
Nope, this is exactly the same as the one on other sites. I just posted it here because people showed an interest in it.

The only difference would be in the interpretation, not the text. The last chapter was foreshadowing something I wound up taking in a different direction. Now, I think it's foreshadowing "Don't Be."

Text is the same.

Hope you liked it!
Review By [SnakeFox] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)James
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Lovely start. More soon please.

James
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [29 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from aussiemel
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This is great. I love Narnia, it was one of my favorite series as a child and I still love it. I love how the doctor interacts with the white Witch, I can't wait for the nest installment. As always your writting is fantastic. I love the fact that all your stories relate in someway, its great. Keep up the great work.
Review By [aussiemel] • Date [29 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from misterwhy
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I've always liked Empress Jadis of Charn. More please:-)
Review By [misterwhy] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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