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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
Nicely done.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [26 Jul 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from tomfo
Review:
Great story, also like everyone is saying needs a sequel, plus interesting timelines in this fic. I personally would like to see a post-chosen Buffy taking time away from the council and catching up with her friend Jack who about that time would've been promoted to general and given command of the SGC.
Review By [tomfo] • Date [18 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from serenityselena
Review:
great story :)
Comments from author:
Thanks!

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Review By [serenityselena] • Date [17 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from nightshadowlife
Review:
awesome short!!!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks!

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Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [12 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bradsan
Review:
Yeah sequel please and make it one where Jack is taking Riley down. He did hurt Buffy after all and you know Jack. Nobody hurts somebody he cares about and certainly not Buffy. Revenge can be so sweet and being military he can do anything to our dear Riley. He wants to use Buffy to build his carrier well Jack can do it. Jacks way that is.

so please a sequel.
Comments from author:
Haha! I would love to see Jack put Riley down like the dog he is. Sorry. Decidedly *NOT* a Riley fan. Jack definitely wouldn't let anyone use his friend as a career ladder. But he also knows she's got to see things for herself. Conundrum, that.

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Review By [bradsan] • Date [11 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from slatergirl
Review:
Ooh sequel please
Comments from author:
Hah! Thanks for the review. A sequel *IS* being considered, but not sure if it'll happen.

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Review By [slatergirl] • Date [8 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
This was great! Will there be a sequel?
Comments from author:
Thanks! And possibly.

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Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
lol! Buffy is better at this military stuff than she realised! I hope Jack didn't see any video of the bit where her eyes glowed. That would worry him, at least until she explained what was going on :)
Comments from author:
Too true. The go'auld (goa'uld?) connection *would* bother him a bit, wouldn't it! Thanks for the review!

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Review By [Gideon] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Oh, yes! More, please? Pretty please?
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it!

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Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kiwi
Review:
more please! :)
Comments from author:
Perhaps. Thanks!

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Review By [kiwi] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
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