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Review of chapter "Vengeance" from Typhonis
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So mistakes are being made on both sides. the first mistake, where Xander and Giles, were apparently captured. The second is the Scoobies thinking that the SGC is allied with the snakes. Then again from a certain point of view they are...Tok'ra anyone?
Review By [Typhonis] • Date [12 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vengeance" from Callista
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Wow, nice and promising... I wonder what happened to Stargate Command and SG-1. Please write more!

Cally
Review By [Callista] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vengeance" from Teucrian
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I definitely would like to read more of this story. It was pretty evocative, really got the blood pumping.
Review By [Teucrian] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vengeance" from deamon
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is the SGC really in league with them or is it more of a misunderstanding?
Review By [deamon] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vengeance" from BrownFinderth
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Jedibuttercup has a great story here and oh I want to read more of it!!! What with Buffy and her grasp of tactics and putting together the teams (the more slayers, the merrier!)!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vengeance" from RevDorothyL
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Wow! Either this is an alternate universe version of the SGC (like the one 'our' Sam Carter ended up trapped in for a while in SG1 season 10, I think it was, where Hank Landry was President/Dictator, etc.), or something has gone terribly, horribly wrong to have the SGC apparently supporting the Goa'uld in the kidnapping and murder (or near-murder, in Giles' case) of the oldest male Scoobies.

Or has the SGC been framed or set-up by some of their enemies, in hopes that the Slayers will decimate the SGC and leave the Trust (for instance) a free hand in the future disposition of the Stargate, and they're not REALLY responsible for any of this torture and murder at all?
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [18 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vengeance" from djhardim
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Of course, this took place during the talks with the System Lords that Thor helped set up (Protected Planets Treaty).
Review By [djhardim] • Date [18 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vengeance" from Greywizard
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Nothing good is going to come from this.

Having said that, this was very well-written and I'm definitely looking forward to seeing the SGC POV on this Charlie-Foxtrot!

Please, don't make us wait too long.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [18 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vengeance" from (Current Donor)WildMartin
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Great chapter. I want to make sure I understand the back-story, some of the Scoobies broke into one of the most secure military installations on Earth and Xander was shot and killed? Why were they there? Personally, I expect to be met with lethal force if i were to attempt to break into the SGC and would consider myself lucky to be captured instead. Oh well, looks like this one is gonna be bloody; I'm looking forward to chapter 2.
Review By [(Current Donor)WildMartin] • Date [18 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vengeance" from theunixer
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Ok. but where in the Stargate timeline does this take place?

I don't see the SGC under Gen. Hammond making this mistake. How about it happening while it is under the command of Gen. Bauer (Season 2 I believe) when Gen. Hammond was pushed out by the NID? He was somewhat ok with 'anything goes' if it helped defend the country (and therefore Earth) and could conceivably be ruthless enough to make it plausible. SG1 could have been ordered elsewhere at the time the prequel occurred.

Or perhaps it wasn't the real SGC? It could have been the aliens who took control of the SGC using those holographic emitters that imitated the real personnel.
Comments from author:
You'll see a little more of what's going on in the next story, which will be told from the POV of Stargate Command, I promise!
Review By [theunixer] • Date [18 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vengeance" from Doodle
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Excellent chapter. 1,000/10


Are you going to put part two in an entirely new fic or continue it on this one(Since this one is marked "Complete" at the top)?
Comments from author:
Thank you!!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! The second part will be listed as a separate story, and I'll create a 'series' for it at that point. ^^
Review By [Doodle] • Date [18 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vengeance" from cmdruhura
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Definitely a bad day all around.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [18 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vengeance" from (Current Donor)mmooch
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Uh-oh...I feel a strong misunderstanding coming on. There will be more?
Comments from author:
Planning on it! Things are, uh. Not going to go well for all involved.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [18 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vengeance" from WolfWriter
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You know that you're going to HAVE to write a sequel to this, dealing with how Xander and Giles were captured in the first place, right? Right?

No fair leaving us in the dark as to how they got there, what happened to them, and what the repercussions will be.

Please write a sequel?
Comments from author:
It's planned!!! There will at least be one sequel to this, showing the POV of Stargate Command, and I'm hoping on also writing a prequel to show how they got here! :D
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [18 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vengeance" from Difdi
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And then, six months after their victory over the SGC, every man, woman and child on the planet dies in an orbital bombardment. If the Goa'uld didn't have protections against magic, they wouldn't have been able to conquer the Earth like they did.
Comments from author:
I'm just going to say that you're only seeing one part of this story, the POV of the Scoobies. Things are NOT what they appear to be.
Review By [Difdi] • Date [18 Aug 12] • Rating [4 out of 10]
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