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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dunstan
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Not that I wish Spike dead or anything, but... How is he still alive?

Exactly why would an Asha'man go out of their way to give him a chance to escape a fight he could otherwise end in an instant?
Review By [Dunstan] • Date [28 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from FinalGuardian
Review:
very nice fix, I look forward to more.
Review By [FinalGuardian] • Date [24 May 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
I do hope you plan to continue this. It is rather good.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [22 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Midnmax
Review:
Interesting start to a story.

Your choice of a lesser known character is interesting. Why would Xander choose him over Rand al'Thor?
Review By [Midnmax] • Date [21 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Bobboky
Review:
Nice work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [21 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AllenPitt
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assuming Xander retains the ability to tap the Source. And practices diligently (along with the sword stuff). That could help. BUT... the source is tainted, right? Of the bad?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [21 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from agnar
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The only real disappointment is that spike survived. Seems like maybe only 1 yahf story out of 20 or 30 actually kill spike on Halloween. Most of them do annoying things like here, having the spell end just as he's about to die, and buffy always lets him escape.

And despite spike having some funny lines in the show, I hate him, angel too. But authors just never manage to kill either one like they deserve.

I was surprised though Xanders ashaman character only used his sword, we saw no channeling.
Review By [agnar] • Date [21 May 14] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Turak
Review:
Nice to see this updated, will we have to wait another 18 months for chapter 3? =p

Also, "Filled Saidin Joaquin said nothing, just stepped forward and grasped his sword." shouldn't this be "Saidin filled Joaquin said nothing, [...]"?
Review By [Turak] • Date [21 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Calison
Review:
Big fan of WOT I hope to see the changes soon
Review By [Calison] • Date [6 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Robby
Review:
Well, this is interesting.

I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Review By [Robby] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
I like the slightly tighter focus on Buffy and Willow before the spell takes effect. We don't usually see that. Will there be any longer term changes from Xander's choice though? He should be able to protect them during the night just as effectively but his memories would obviously be different.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [9 Sep 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AbscondingCascade
Review:
Interesting, very interesting. In thanks a song ~ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZULQ0cgtC84 ~ And a link to something insanity inducing one of my attempts at fanfiction ~ http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/magical-shatterpoint.233297/ ~ Caveat lector! (Let the reader beware!).
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [9 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [8 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Oh wow this could have some interesting ripple effects.
Great start!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [8 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JonnyNapalm
Review:
A Wheel of Time cross...Fun. Granted I'm still hoping to see some more chapters of some of your other material...I'm a big fan of the Threshkreen Harris concept. But in any case I'll be keeping an eye out for anything you put up. Fun start to a new concept.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [8 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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