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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Current Donor)NekoHibiki
Review:
Very good story!^_^

Great idea here!^_^

I like it!^_^

But...

Um, well Saidar is the female half and Saidin is the male half for channeling.
Review By [(Current Donor)NekoHibiki] • Date [20 Dec 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Calison
Review:
Saidin is the Male hale of the power and Saidar is the female half
Review By [Calison] • Date [20 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Bobboky
Review:
Nice work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [20 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from djhardim
Review:
Good. It would have been nice if the sword stayed real.

EDIT: I was reading the wiki article on Asha'man. Despite the jewelry that Xander was wearing, would he be considered a Soldier?

http://wot.wikia.com/wiki/Asha%27man
Review By [djhardim] • Date [20 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from chronos
Review:
this is a very good story, saidin is the male half of the source while saidar is the female half.
Review By [chronos] • Date [20 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Physcochimp
Review:
I love the WoT crossover idea, but for future reference Saidar is the female half of the source. Saidin is the male half.
Review By [Physcochimp] • Date [20 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from cmdruhura
Review:
Well the Garryowen lyrics I found on line are as follows;

Let Bacchus' sons be not dismayed
But join with me each jovial blade
Come booze and sing and lend your aid
To help me with the chorus

Chorus:
Instead of spa we'll drink brown ale
And pay the reckoning on the nail
For debt no man shall go to gaol (jail)
From Garryowen in glory

We are the boys that take delight in
Smashing the Limerick lamps when lighting
Through the street like sportsters fighting
And tearing all before us

We'll break the windows, we'll break the doors
The watch knock down by threes and fours
Then let the doctors work their cures
And tinker up our bruised

We'll beat the bailiffs out of fun
We'll make the mayor and sheriffs run
We are the boys no man dares dun
If he regards a whole skin

Our hearts so stout have got us fame
For soon 'tis known from whence we came
Where'er we go they dread the name
Of Garryowen in glory

Johnny Connell's tall and straight
And in his limbs he is complete
He'll pitch a bar of any weight
From Garryowen to Thomondgate

Garryowen is gone to rack
Since Johnny Connell went to Cork
Though Darby O'Brien leapt over the dock
In spite of judge and jury



I always did like it when they sang it in "They Died With Their Boots On".
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [20 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from HieiUchiha
Review:
A promising start, but you definitely need an editor. You mentioned several times in the last chapter that Xander felt Saidar, when actually it is Saidin that is the male half of the one power, saidar is the female half.
Review By [HieiUchiha] • Date [20 Dec 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from grd
Review:
He is singing the Gary Owen! The 7th Cavalry's song. Enjoying this very much. I have not kept up with the series.
Review By [grd] • Date [20 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dunstan
Review:
Not that I wish Spike dead or anything, but... How is he still alive?

Exactly why would an Asha'man go out of their way to give him a chance to escape a fight he could otherwise end in an instant?
Review By [Dunstan] • Date [28 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from FinalGuardian
Review:
very nice fix, I look forward to more.
Review By [FinalGuardian] • Date [24 May 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
I do hope you plan to continue this. It is rather good.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [22 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Midnmax
Review:
Interesting start to a story.

Your choice of a lesser known character is interesting. Why would Xander choose him over Rand al'Thor?
Review By [Midnmax] • Date [21 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Bobboky
Review:
Nice work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [21 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AllenPitt
Review:
assuming Xander retains the ability to tap the Source. And practices diligently (along with the sword stuff). That could help. BUT... the source is tainted, right? Of the bad?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [21 May 14] • Not Rated
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