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Review of chapter "5" from Ghostrider
Review:
The banter between Xander and Faith CAN be seen as them having problems by outsiders. Or it could be that they just say that because they DO have problems but neither wants to actually come out and acknowledge it.

It's good to see that Xander and Angel are still such vast and close friends. Positively heartwarming.

The attack on the caravan, while I'm not really happy with it, I can understand it. Needs must and all that. So, now that they're outfitted, have a caravan they can use as a disguise and know roughly where the nearest rebels are, they need to get moving. 200 Miles, while not much by today's standards of transportation, is a very long and arduous road on horseback and even longer if they use the caravan as a cover. At least a week of travel to get to the area. Think they can last that long without wanting to kill each other? After all, Spike already fell afoul of Blade....
Comments from author:
Yeah Angel and Xander still get on. But they are good friends, at least compared to Blade and Spike! :D

The caravan was owned by an imperial crony, so I don't much care about that. 200 miles? I would imagine it would take a week to ten days to get there, unless they pushed it.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [26 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4" from mendenbar
Review:
Not a lot of action, but definitely required exposition. The bartender's speech almost sounded like the beginning of a quest in D&D! But it was necessary, otherwise your heroes would be wandering around a long time just gathering that information. Well done.
Comments from author:
Yeah, exposition can be a pain in the ass.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [19 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from jhor
Review:
I like the set up, and it seems like a nicely thought out world. I hope to read more of this soon. Thank you.
Comments from author:
I hope you continue to enjoy it, thanks for the review.
Review By [jhor] • Date [31 Oct 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Interesting insight into the existing power structures of the world.
Comments from author:
Yeah, given the number of original characters in this world, I have to introduce them so people know whose who.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [30 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from JediKnight
Review:
Nice.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [18 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from darkcarnage
Review:
I like the selection of characters you picked out for this go around. I look forward to seeing where this go.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I thought a few of the choices were a little different from the usual SG-1 etc choices.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [darkcarnage] • Date [17 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2" from JonnyNapalm
Review:
Fun 'crew gathering'. Looking forward to seeing the variations on your character interactions in this story. Love your choices for the crew as well. Xander and Faith remain two of my favorites, but getting Duncan and Amanda in the mix, then bringing Jarod along for the ride? Can't wait to see the group dynamic that develops in the story you're crafting.
Comments from author:
Yeah, Highlander was a great show, I've never tried writing Jarod before, he was an odd duck, but I enjoyed Pretender too.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [16 Oct 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from SamTurner
Review:
Nice collection of folks.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [SamTurner] • Date [16 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Very interesting, I was thinking they would get dropped at random and have to meet up but this is better!
Good chapter!
Comments from author:
They're a formidable force but they're in a formidable world.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [16 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from mendenbar
Review:
Ms. Gard has several "other" attributes besides bodyguard if I recall correctly. Excellent gathering.
Comments from author:
Oh yeah, she's a Valkyrie.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [16 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SamTurner
Review:
Can't wait to see who you got coming to the party.About the only one I am sure of is a Highlander.
Comments from author:
Or even two. :D

Thanks for the review.
Review By [SamTurner] • Date [4 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from darkcarnage
Review:
Good start. It does read familiar to the other story, so I look forward to see how you change it.
Comments from author:
Yeah, it'll only really start changing direction in about the third and fourth chapters...
Review By [darkcarnage] • Date [2 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JonnyNapalm
Review:
Interesting beginning. Pulling your crossover characters to a world of your own invention should make for some interesting interactions, especially when they're trying to figure out WHERE they are and how to get home. Establishing that they're going to be fighting for their lives as soon as we seen them establishes some good points of conflict too, even if we don't know WHY they're being hunted. Looking forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Yes, they're not just in a different world, they're in a world of hurt too!

Thanks for the review.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [1 Oct 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Interesting setup, I will be looking forward to seeing where you go with this!
Comments from author:
Always wanted to do a heroic fantasy ala Conan, LOTR etc.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [1 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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