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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from JinaSolo
Review:
More please!

This is a very good story so far!
Review By [JinaSolo] • Date [11 Aug 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Blackguard
Review:
Interesting so far, looking forward to more.
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [28 Jul 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AlecMcDowell
Review:
Just re-read this and I was thinking the same as another reviewer- this could easily be adjusted a bit into being a good Ship of the Line story. Just add in a few more Normandy characters like EDI, Joker and Vega and you'd have a big enough crew to man it in the short term. Though I'm not sure what crossover would work- I'd like to think the Thanix cannon could take out the Aphosis' model of ha'tak's if you chose SG but outside that and without the relay network the Normandy wouldn't be getting anywhere in the galaxy too fast.

Back onto the story itself- love seeing Kaidan and Miranda show up they are two of my favorites and it should be fun for the aftermath that all three are strong biotics. I also like how your Willow and Angel seem to be a bit more on the ball than we usually see in YAHF fics where they spend half an hour trying to convince the other characters to stop playing around.
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from djhardim
Review:
How about Harmony as EDI?
Review By [djhardim] • Date [15 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from djhardim
Review:
It occurs to me that this could be turned into a "A Ship of the Line" story.

Are you planning on just leaving Xander and the others with what they have?
Comments from author:
Believe it or not I am tempted to rewrite this as a Ship of the Line story. Will require some small adjustments to include the appearance of the Normandy - and someone would have to dress up as EDI - and maybe one or two other characters but its certainly something I am seriously looking at doing.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [13 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Orchamus
Review:
This is pretty good, average start for a Halloween story, but that's not a bad thing, and it looks like the future of it has some promise. I'm willing to beta if you'd like, shoot me a message, might take a day to read it but I'm in college so it happens.
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [21 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from DigiSim
Review:
What'll happen if somebody dressed as Ashley? Or Tali? Or Liara? Or FemShep?
Review By [DigiSim] • Date [13 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Oh very nice, the fact that more people dressed in Mass Effect costumes is going to throw some interesting twists in if you keep up with this story!
I love what you are doing with this so far, thanks!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Narf
Review:
Dam fine story you have got here. It might just be the best Mass Effect cross over i've read. Keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Review By [Narf] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Very nicely handled. There's obvious questions for if this goes all the way of course:

1) Will Xander retain his "Shepard" cybernetics, including the amp? Plus side, it'd guarantee he will have biotics and probably his Omni-tool, the down side being maintenance issues and/or having to eat a lot of mineral supplements.

2) Will Kaidan and Miri be retained in part or whole by their costumers? Plus is a strong team for the Xan-man, the puzzling with a side of wonky would be "Miri"'s costumer deciding to pursue the love of one Xander Harris, much to Willow's annoyance until Oz comes into the picture..
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from CPTSkip
Review:
I like and am enjoying your story. I also like the way you've added Jono and Cordy to the transformations. I do wonder where you will go with your story after they break the Janis statue. But I am looking forward to reading your story so please update soon.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [11 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from EroSlackerMicha
Review:
too much to ask for someone to shoot Angel...or biotic throw him...

ah well, keep up the good work
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [11 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Good story. Looks like you have a plan for where this is going and how to get there. Looking forward to your next update.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [11 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Rorschach
Review:
would shepard be an adept
Review By [Rorschach] • Date [11 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from RoyalTwinFangs
Review:
Not so bad.
Review By [RoyalTwinFangs] • Date [11 Oct 12] • Not Rated
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