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Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Whatever Happened to Prophesy Girl" from banner
Review:
I just found this story, and I'm delighted by it. I love the characterizations, and the whole, huge tapestry that you are weaving.
Review By [banner] • Date [15 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Whatever Happened to Prophesy Girl" from yuiop
Review:
Nice
Comments from author:
Thanks! :)
Review By [yuiop] • Date [23 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Whatever Happened to Prophesy Girl" from Innogen
Review:
Good chapter! Actually, great chapter! Substantial chapter that is actually a chapter and not simply three paragraphs an author calls a chapter to frustrate the reader!

Don't worry about updates. This time of year is stressful for everyone. Test Stress, Holidays, and everything else. We are all there!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I hate itty bitty chapters too, so I try not to do that. I still feel like it was disjointed (but still lengthy), but your review makes me feel a lot better about it. :)

Biggest issue with updating is, sadly, that our home Internet is off. It's not a writing issue (slight fib). But thank you again for leaving such a nice review. :)
Review By [Innogen] • Date [19 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Graceless Hangover" from Shayna
Review:
This is one really wierd story...
Comments from author:
I would definitely get bored with it otherwise. :)
Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Shayna] • Date [9 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Graceless Hangover" from yuiop
Review:
Awesome
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [yuiop] • Date [3 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Graceless Hangover" from (Past Donor)hellmouthprincess
Review:
Love this story, it's brilliantly written and I can't wait to read more.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much. I hope to have more up by next Saturday. :)
Review By [(Past Donor)hellmouthprincess] • Date [2 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Graceless Hangover" from thewrongalice
Review:
Thanks, I'm enjoying this - a little to my surprise actually because I'd mostly stopped watching Supernatural by the time Castiel was a regular and I don't normally enoy multiple crosses. However, your Castiel is so vividly drawn that it makes me want to go back and watch all the Supernatural I missed!
Comments from author:
Originally it had lost me mid season 2... I came back in season 4 especially for Cas... Misha Collins played the part so well that its no wonder he became a fan favorite (I stopped again at the end of season 5, because it was such a perfect ending...)

Anyway, thanks for letting me know how you felt about the story so far! If I continue at the same pace, next chapter should be up not this bit next Saturday. :)
Review By [thewrongalice] • Date [2 Nov 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: The Split" from EgSparks
Review:
Still verry good, just the part in hell was so amazingly wear that i was like wow... I like the knitting part lol. Just wondering trough crowley, is he the one we know from the futur vers... I know that now he wouldn't be king of hell or even of the crossroad... But is it him?? LOVE the fact that hand madevcas sick... Lol.
Comments from author:
Nope. It's a different Crowley (from Good Omens, which, if you haven't read, you really should). The other one will show up later. :) if I remember right, the SPN Crowley was a human soul.

Hell has to be one of my favorite places to write. I'm trying to think of a way to wiggle it into next chapter. :)

Thanks again for letting me know what you think!
Review By [EgSparks] • Date [24 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Strange Bedfellows" from yuiop
Review:
this is pretty cool! Can't wait to read more, have you posted anywhere else?
Comments from author:
This hasn't been posted anywhere else but I do have some (unfinished as well as some finished) stories on my livejournal account. :) I can't remember my LJ name at the moment though.

Thank you for reviewing. I saw this around midnight but was too unconscious to reply.
Review By [yuiop] • Date [14 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: The Road Less Traveled" from Towers
Review:
Great story! I'm really looking forward to seeing where you're going with this; you have a very good writing style, and you blend several series with the utmost ease - frankly, I'm jealous! (I mean that as a compliment!)

Love your inclusion of Gabriel; I might be biased, but he's my favorite SPN character. I hope we can see more of him down the line. And bad Cas - you need to get back to Jimmy before anything truely bad happens. Though it should be interesting to see how Cordy is incorpoated into this canon; perhaps as a spare vessel or something?

Castiel and Gabriel would so (unintentionally, on Cas's part; intentionally on Gabriel's part) troll the SGC team unmercifully.
Comments from author:
I do have a plan! I just need to get where I'm going. This universe is pretty well developed in my head, as for certain plot related events, and I know for the most part what I want to do with various characters, but as stated previously, I'm very open to suggestions. :)

Gabriel's also one of my favorites, and he'll be playing a much larger role once Cas gets the gumption to go and talk to him... Yes poor Jimmy. As Cas finds, he's not as helpless as he thinks he is. As for Cordelia... I have something much better planned for her. (Cue her unsubtle hitting on poor oblivious Jimmy.)

Gabriel... Well, once he starts bugging the SGC, he'll probably never stop. As for Cas... He doesn't really realize that he's doing it.

Anyhow, thank you for the lovely review. Really, any review is good, unless its a flame, but its very nice to see someone who actually brings up actual points of interest. I hope to see more of you when I next post. :)
Review By [Towers] • Date [8 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: The Road Less Traveled" from SAS
Review:
Great job! Post more soon!!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I hope to soon. The next bit has a bit of work needed, so it won't be up until at least tomorrow evening. Still not all that long, right? Lol

Glad you enjoyed.
Review By [SAS] • Date [8 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Commands of God" from EgSparks
Review:
I really love it!! It's tru that jack sound like dean and i love castiel, you had him perfectly!!
Comments from author:
If you're really patient, I'm cleaning up the next chapter right now, so it'll be up in the next hour, probably. Reviews always cheer me up, so thank you for bothering to leave one. :)
Review By [EgSparks] • Date [8 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Commands of God" from etrigan
Review:
great chapter. Would like to read more.
update soon.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing.
I have more written already (a full chapter and a half more), so pehaps it'll be up soon. :) It just needs a little eyeballing and polishing first.
Review By [etrigan] • Date [7 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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