Review of chapter "Sparring Verbally" from Harry
Buffy, some friendly advice: LISTEN TO SETO! He's had his share of problems over the years with Mokaba, but has worked them out fairly well. Now, stop being so over protective of Dawn, give her a chance to spread her wings, and ease up on her and The Scooby Gang. Otherwise, you'll loose BOTH of them!
Comments from author:
I cannot agree more there. :) And I also hope that Buffy will close her ears to words of evil and instead open them to faithful counsel, especially when it comes from Kaiba as well.
Thanks for the nice feedback, too. That means a lot to me, of course. :)
Review By [Harry
] • Date [11 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]