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Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great chapters.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [12 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [30 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Genuka
Review:
Nice solution for Ryoga's lostness. *snicker*
Review By [Genuka] • Date [27 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from banditdoz
Review:
fantastic new chapter thank you :D
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [27 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. I swear I'm not sure of the timeline, but when GPS is invented ryoga /really/ needs to get one. Although then there's the problem of keeping it charged. Also, he needs to be able to follow the directions.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [27 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [27 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from CageFire
Review:
Good new chapter. Keep up the good work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [20 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Vianca
Review:
I would suggest that they get them self a Oni Exit gate, so Xander can eat it.
Also, is the boosted flight FTL or STL?
Anyway, having it around might prove usefull.

As for looks, how much of a fan is Xan-oki of Marcoss/Robotech and other such Sci-Fi´s?
http://www.macross2.net/m3/macrossdyrl/alienstarshipone-dyrl/alienstarshipone-dyrl-dorsal.gif
http://www.macross2.net/m3/macrossdyrl/alienstarshipone-dyrl.htm
http://www.steelfalcon.com/Macross/ass1.shtml
Or would he try to bring another name into live with good holoprojectors?
http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m8aivgwTFC1ruox2ao1_1280.jpg

Yeah, I can see Xander wanting to get a good main gun.
Heck that is a place were that Oni Exit gate could also find a place.
So the quistion becomes, can a Cabbit alter his/her ship form to his/her wants of external looks?
If so, I can see a shopping-spree happening.

Say, were is Tsunami?
I´m talking about the tree-ship here
Anyway, till the next time and watch it, this muse (of yours) is trying to escape with a stardrive if your not carefull.

Edit:
Oke, in that case Xander might want to use a whole lotta of those Oni Exit gates, that would reduce the stress placed on one and if you ad in multi-vectored thrusters, course changes are still possible.
Compare it to a powerboat, you can only stear those boats with their proppeller. for anything else they go to fast.
Even if they ain't using a Ori Exit gate, having one is still handy, you might have to run from some explosive situation with all possible speed, in a corridor of space that has been jammed against FTL travel.
Might also work great in a energy weapon, would probably last longer then when using them on the STL engines.

Xander would also need a Oni Entrance gate in order to get full potential from the Ori gate tech.
Would really speed-up all kinda systems on-board.
Comments from author:
Its boosted normal flight. Not ftl.

And the looks yea Xander can twitch and change adapt how he looks he tend to be stuck in black and red. Normal default look is the crab like form he uses.

And yes Xander have updated his weapons. :D
A reflex cannon from macros would be SOO cool. sadly he don't have that one.

But don't worry with Ranko in the ship how long can it go before Space battle martial art is invented.
Review By [Vianca] • Date [20 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Raider
Review:
as always, excellent work.
Review By [Raider] • Date [20 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Genuka
Review:
Yeah! One king sized bed for all!

I liked the side story. It also made sense of many aspects of the Tenchi universe that aren't always clear, regardless of if they are cannon or not. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. i taken some asspects of Tenchi universe and made my own change in to it.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [20 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [19 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from banditdoz
Review:
A great new chapter thank you
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [19 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Selias
Review:
I'm pretty sure that Washu created the Cabbits. I suppose I might be wrong about that, though. I DO know that she created Ryo-Ohki, though.
Comments from author:
Nope you correct. In the cannon normal universe its washu that created Ryo-Ohki and the other cabbits.

In this Xander just told you the creator myth thats reville the base facts on where and what they are.
Still i belive that Ryo-Ohki was created by washu. She just made her OWN special version of a cabbit so that her daughter would have the perfect cabbit. mixing DNA.
Review By [Selias] • Date [19 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [13 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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