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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from BuffyKaibaHunt
Neat so far. :) I like it. Very awesome, as well as very well-written, too.

And I can’t wait to see how Larry takes to seeing Xander in action as a Whitelighter and how he reacts when Xander tells him about being possessed by a hyena (which was what Xander really meant in the Season 2 episode Phases when he told Larry that he knew what it felt like to have animalistic urges, while Larry mistakenly thought that Xander, like himself, was gay, not knowing that Xander liked girls), as well as Amy’s reaction when Larry plucks up the courage to tell her that he’s gay and that he’s thinking about asking someone else to the Prom (meaning another guy) instead of her, too. That would be quite something to see, of course… ;)

Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and beautifully creative writing! :)
Review By [BuffyKaibaHunt] • Date [13 Dec 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from CageFire
Nice story. I've seen a few Whitelighter Xander fics before but this is a little different. I assume that when they get to the part about accidentally staking the deputy mayor they'll call Xander and save him. At least I hope so. Keep up the good work, although considering it hasn't been updated in like what 10 months or so it might be a while if it does get updated. You probably have other fics though.
Comments from author:
Glad that you like it.

It will get updated eventually. I'm hoping to get an update done soon - depends if the muse cooperates as right now I've got a bit of writers block with this fic.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from DieselDriver
It's ok, people can appear calm because they're in shock. Good story, I hope you continue it.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [19 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from DieselDriver
Hey, It's not really his fault he's a prat. He does grow up eventually right? There's a good reason that a stupid fall in a comedy is known as a "prat fall".
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from DieselDriver
And the trunk of a car is the boot and the bonnet is the hood. And the British drive on the wrong side of the road. And petrol is gas although to be sure, I don't know what a British person refers to when a person has gas and breaks wind (those are farts... LOL). Z is just Zee not Zed.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from DieselDriver
I've never understood the Britishism of using "to" as a comparison instead of the American "from". British say "Buffy is different to Willow". Americans say "Buffy is different from Willow". The word "to" to me means or implies closeness or getting closer. "Buffy is moving to be with Willow". The word "from" means away or different. "Buffy is moving away from Willow." But at least I know where the author is from or is it to? Anyway, Brittan is different from America.

(I hope you found that amusing.)
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Kindleflame
Are you still alive?
Review By [Kindleflame] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from twlight
This is wonderful so far. As for the girls taking things so calmly um.... yeah that would happen when first being told about something big then when it sinks in so to speak then the panic happens. ^_^ I love that Xander is helping Faith in finder her a real place to live in via Giles. I also love the changes that are happening because of Xander's Whitelighter status. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment to this wonderful story as soon as you are able.
Review By [twlight] • Date [30 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from cyberfish
I love this and hope your going to post more chapters soon.Also I think part of Amys calmness might be to to the shock of her being restored to human > I`ve seen and read of times when shock was masking as calm
Review By [cyberfish] • Date [31 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from banditdoz
LOVE IT ;D I think you have a really good story here and Im looking forward to more ;D
Comments from author:
Thanks I'm glad that you like it.
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [1 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from tavinseven
I see a lot of possibilities for this story. First you have already started to change things so that Faith stays with the group and could easily stop her from killing Finch by her automatically calling for Xander. Even if its just on accident. Xander could heal Finch and then they could get all of the info on the mayor earlier than in cannon.

You also just possible added to the scoobies by bringing Amy back and If Xander gets assigned as her Whitelighter then their is less of a chance of her turning dark and corrupting Willow.

You've also expanded the range of different demons you could have the Scoobies face by bringing in some of the Charmed demons.

I also liked the political side of the Higher Planes. The power plays between the PTB and the Elders will be amusing to read. One issue I have is that it seems like Xander is exposing himself a little to much and its likely to come back and bite him.

All in all I love your story and can't wait until the next update.
Comments from author:

He has been a bit but remember the Elders were well aware when they made him a whitelighter that hiding it from the Slayer and by extension the rest of the Scoobies wasn't going to be possible for long. Slayers are just too in tune with magical forces.

I'm glad you like the political side of the Higher Planes. As can be seen while they're supposed to be on the same side the Elders and the Powers That Be don't exactly get along - especially given the Powers obsession with creating and enforcing a balance between good and evil, a balance the Elders believe to be completely artificial and impossible to maintain in the long run. They also have issues about the Powers habit of involuntarily drafting other beings into there often overly complex and convoluted plans for the balance.
Review By [tavinseven] • Date [25 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Cool chapter, though I suspect Xander may get a bit of a dressing down for how much he is reveling to others. He is being a bit free with the "I'm a Whitelighter" bit.

Comments from author:
Maybe to a point though the Elders were aware from the start that keeping what Xander was from the Slayer and by extension the other Scoobies wasn't really going to be possible. Slayers are just too in tune with mystical forces to miss something like that especially how the aura of a whitelighter makes the violence of the Slayer Spirit calm.

As for Amy finding out that was always a plan of mine. We have seen whitelighters undo magic before - Leo did it at least once for the Charmed Ones - and the magic that was holding Amy in rat form was glaringly obvious to Xander's senses as being the result of an incorrectly cast transformation spell. The Elders won't fault him for breaking the incorrectly cast spell returning Amy to humanity especially as it gives them an opportunity to salvage the magical bloodline Amy comes from for the light after Catherine's misuse of magic for selfish and self-serving purposes pushed it well into the grey.

No the reason the Elders have summoned Xander is very different. You'll find out why in the next chapter.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [25 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from brokenangel
Good to see a continuation of this story. Thanks for the update!
Comments from author:
Thanks I'm glad you liked the update.
Review By [brokenangel] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Methinks they are gonna have to up his training quick! He now has 4 charges as Amy is a born witch and she is living on the Hellmouth so there aren't any real options short of her moving.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [23 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Amberdrake
Just found this and for once I'm not gonna go back and red the first story first. This was a good first chapter but I have a nit to pick. Why does Giles need to direct any od the gang to the lounge or the bathroom? They've certainly been there before and know their way around his place. Anyways good job as I've said and on to chapter 2.
Review By [Amberdrake] • Date [23 Nov 13] • Not Rated
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