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Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from AlphaBeta
Review:
Do you play Palladium Role Playing games? Because you seem to be using a lot of terms from them.

Nice to see another Palladium player writting a story useing that matterial. Not a lot stories in that area.
Comments from author:
This story, along with it's predecessors are set in a version of my personal superhero world. A world stemming from a 10 year long Heroes Unlimited campaign. Cold Snap/Ice Lady in fact is a member of the settings premier superhero team, the Freedom Society and has been since the early 1990's
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [22 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Difdi
Review:
You have posted three chapters of one story, three chapters of what is supposedly a third story, with no second story at all. As a result, the third story makes almost no sense, because of all the characters that you theoretically introduced in a chapter you have not posted yet of an entirely separate story.

The story itself seems to be good, but it's like picking up book eight of The Wheel of Time without even seeing the covers of the previous seven books. As a result, the story is all but incoherent.
Comments from author:
The entire series (other then latest chapter of Wings of Destiny) is also on Fanfiction dot net under the pen name of FaerieKnight197. However since the first two stories don't involve Buffy the Vampire Slayer at all, TTH rules say I have to maintain at least a 50% ratio for crossover stories with buffy. As such when I finish a new chapter of Wings of Destiny I can update Wings of Paradise with an installment of chapters equaling the WoD story's chapter in word length.

Wings of Paradise and Wings of Recursion, the first two stories in the series are already complete. I just can't post them all yet. I have a few other Buffy crossover stories I'm working on too, but nothing ready for posting yet. One of them I'm actually thinking of rewriting a bit since I'm not entirely happy with that story so far.
Review By [Difdi] • Date [7 Mar 13] • Rating [2 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from djhardim
Review:
What happened to the first two stories?
Comments from author:
The first two stories in the series don't involve Buffy at all. As such I had to post some stuff that does cross over with Buffy first before I can upload them.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [26 Nov 12] • Not Rated
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