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The Secret Return of Alex Mack

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Review of chapter "Off Weeks" from Zeviz
Review:
"Okay, she just really hoped Hanna didn’t have a Terawatt t-shirt she wore on ops. That would be totally embarrassing for Alex."

I got the following mental image:
Alex enters a conference room at the main SRI base and sees Hanna and Grover both wearing Terawatt t-shirts. She begins to complain, but at this time the door opens and Jack and Willow enter the room, also wearing these shirts. Just as she starts to say something, the door opens again, and team one enters ... with all of them wearing Terawatt shirts. While Alex is speechless, the scientists enter the room, also wearing the same shirts. When team two joins in, it's not really a surprise. Alex leaves the room to regain her composure, but sees that every soldier in the hallway is wearing a Terawatt shirt. She runs outside, and sees the shirt worn by every person on the base.

The scene shifts to Maggie Walsh, working in her lab, cackling over some sinister concoction she is holding in a test tube. As she turns around, we see that under her lab coat, she is also wearing a Terawatt t-shirt. At this point, Alex wakes up. :P

PS Unless the next chapter will be called "Off Months", it looks like the quiet days are about to end. My guess is that there will be an attack at the Pulitzer ceremony, and possibly also at Alex' graduation (with the intention of getting Terawatt to fly in to the rescue).
Comments from author:
:D :D :D The dreaded Alex nightmare. It's even canon, with two episodes turning out to be dreams, and Alex getting what amounted to a prophetic dream in the series finale.

Alex is going to find some stuff to do. That's all I'm saying.
Review By [Zeviz] • Date [28 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off Weeks" from EdBecerra
Review:
The problem is, thanks to an old parody story a friend of mine did, instead of a Pulitzer Prize, I'm "hearing" people talking about the Putzpuler Prize for Journalism...

Which, sadly, is a rather accurate award for SOME reporters. :P
Comments from author:
On the Pulitzer Prize website, they point out that it is pronounced like 'pull it, sir' which sounds like the punchline to a bad joke.
Review By [EdBecerra] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off Weeks" from Zorgdub
Review:
~~[ Okay, she just really hoped Hanna didn’t have a Terawatt t-shirt she wore on ops. That would be totally embarrassing for Alex. Hanna probably wouldn’t be embarrassed at all. ]~~

This must happen. If nothing of the sort took place by the time the story is over, I will be very disappointed in you.
Comments from author:
:D :D Hanna wears military gear on ops. Where's a Terawatt t-shirt going to fit in there?
Review By [Zorgdub] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off Weeks" from Starfox
Review:
Good chapter, nice mix of serious and not so serious issues and tasks.
Comments from author:
Well, she's getting a little downtime. But stuff is about to happen.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off Weeks" from Amberdrake
Review:
Nice chapter. Once again showing that while the powers make her super, it's the person that makes her a hero.

On another note I was going to recommend a Whateley OC story I just found here only to see that you were the first to comment. :)
Comments from author:
I often notice Whateley material. :D
Review By [Amberdrake] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off Weeks" from RockyWilliams
Review:
Great story! Don't know why I haven't read it before now, but I just spent my free time during the last three days getting through it, and I enjoyed it all.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading, and thanks for reviewing and thanks for recommending it too. I think the problem is the vagueness of the 'multiple crossings' category, combined with the main character not being someone central to the site, like Buffy, Willow, Jack O'Neill, Batman, Hermione Granger, etc. (even if they are all there along with many others).
Review By [RockyWilliams] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off Weeks" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Enjoyed this overall. The part with Alex standing up for Kelly was also really special. Lupo going to be at or around the Pulitzer ceremony so they have an extra Terawatt, or on the other side of the country to show Terawatt somewhere else?
Comments from author:
Well, that might depend on whether a Code Terawatt turned up the day of the award ceremony.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off Weeks" from MarcusRowland
Review:
It's quiet... Too quiet...
Comments from author:
One of the things not to say, like "Well how could this get any worse?"

"What is it now?" (massive roaring noise is heard)
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [26 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off Weeks" from SilverWave
Review:
:-)

Heh if tera turned bad - think of the fun you could have :-)
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [26 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Off Weeks" from SilverWave
Review:
:-)

Heh if terra turned bad - think of the fun you could have :-)
Comments from author:
Yeah, an evil Terawatt. We call her 'Danielle'. :D
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [26 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Off Weeks" from HMaxMarius
Review:
Aaaaahh Graduation.

Kinda makes you nostalgic for Mayor's with dreams of snakehood.


Dunno, I kinda think that the policeman had the right idea. Tell the bad guy's they called in ultimate back-up and end things peacefully. Worst case, they do what you implied, but if they argue, they you really do call in a code TW. It kinda comes down to the whole 'Pursue or don't pursue' argument. Having family in law enforcement, I'd say that in the balance it would be more likely to save lives, thus take the risk.
Comments from author:
Maybe the policeman knew the sitch and knew it wasn't a serious risk. But hostage negotiations are a nightmare, and if your perps turn out to be psychopaths or spree killers, then the standard negotiation techniques can go drastically off the rails.
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [26 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off Weeks" from Grovtech
Review:
I finally not only caught up but registered as well. I really like this story. With as busy as Alex is going to be I don't think the odds are good at all that she'll get through it all without Wacky Maggie or another Orphan messing things up. While I don't think I can call Terawatt and her gang a 'dream' team, they are a great cast and loads of fun to read about.

Grover
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! (And I wouldn't mind a recommendation either. :D )
Review By [Grovtech] • Date [26 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off Weeks" from DieselDriver
Review:
OK, no squeezing of the heart but if you feel any palpations other places, it wasn't me. Two updates in two days... Sweet!

She is going to have so many complications in her life after Grad Night from all the entanglements that it's going to be a blessing not to have the additional hassles of being the top in her class to go with all the other stuff.

Smart girls are so hot!
Comments from author:
"Smart girls are so hot!"

Well, it took Xander long enough to figure that out...
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [26 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off Weeks" from Dragan
Review:
Hey! No fair! The Evil Empire (Guild on Everquest II) changed their name We are no Dances with Dragons!


Err Ahh, and we had nothing to do with Global Thermal Nuclear War Spammit! we wanted to play Tic Tac Toe!
Comments from author:
Tic tac toe isn't really much fun either. There are a limited number of ways to play, after adjusting for symmetries.
Review By [Dragan] • Date [26 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off Weeks" from Harry
Review:
Alex I KNOW you don't want to make a big deal out of being nominated for a Pulitzer, BUT IT IS! Its to literature what a Oscar is for the Movie community. Trust me, this is going to something that is going to cause you a lot of both happiness and headaches. Happiness because this will open a lot of opportunities for you. Headaches, because its going to mean a lot of press and people looking after you, which is going to cause problems for Terawatt.
Comments from author:
Everything is a problem for Terawatt. I have no idea how Peter Parker got away with it for decades.
Review By [Harry] • Date [26 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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