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Review of chapter "ASSULT THE HUB" from DarthTenebrus
Yeah, caught that myself. Poor Natalya Romanova, getting her Avengers identity confused with Colonel Rosenberg's Sith alter ego. ..bad form all around IMO...

Oh crap! What if Thanaton sensed her presence?! He'd sense her familiarity with the Dark Side! I don't know if it's true, but I've heard that temptation's stronger the second time around...

Suddenly I'm tempted to write a jailbreak scene; two words: Willow tempted. Will she give in or will the Slayers and the Jedi keep her from turning evil? Might have to consult with Max on that one...
Comments from author:
its is black widow not black willow. No Sith Wiccan here. The error has been corrected.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ASSULT THE HUB" from TroyGuffey
Why does everyone always forget the Olympians (TL13 high-tech/bio/magic/psi society, not the actual gods.) I admit I'm a slow mediocre writer, but you got a small show of what they're capable of. We're also not stingy in sharing tech.
Give Hayes a ride through a chrysalis machine, he's fully recovered in less than 24 hours.

However, the chapter and those before it were well written and entertaining.
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ASSULT THE HUB" from djhardim
Not bad. One question -

You refer to Black Willow in this chapter.

Shouldn't that be Black Widow?
Comments from author:
Thank you for catching that and it has been corrected
Review By [djhardim] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ASSULT THE HUB" from Harry
Glad to see Sarah Rabb taking care of administering the Oath of Office in such a situation. Now, we need not only to take care of taking out the bank accounts of Vamps, but also, now that the Raabs are going to be on the ground for a while, get working on a story that has been bugging me for a while: Jeanette meets Harm and gets a idea of what its like to be both a lawyer and a pilot!
Comments from author:
The reason that Santos was sworn in by Sarah as in the compaticty of a military judge. currently they are still in orbit but that may change
Review By [Harry] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ASSULT THE HUB" from DarthTenebrus
Yeah, shoot to thrill, play to kill...nice quick action scene there, good detail, and the thing about presidential succession with the 25th Amendment was a nice touch, too.

So is Veers still wearing his Imperial officer's uniform or did he switch allegiance and join the RSS? Oh, the 501st Legion. ..are they still stormtroopers?
Comments from author:
Veers was cashered and is RSS. The 501st is a Marine regiment of the RSS but still wears the stormtropper armor since it can stop the bullets. New gear is being developed, but the stormtrooper armor will still be used for dress in the future
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "MONEY, MONEY, MONEY…MONEY" from djhardim
....And in the small community of Goodhaven, a fireworks display is set off, for the first time in nearly fifty years, summoning the newest generation of the Mighty Heroes....
Review By [djhardim] • Date [18 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "MONEY, MONEY, MONEY…MONEY" from DofEire
"segue", not "Segway"...silly predictive text tool. ;) Good chapter! Wrapped up a couple dangling bits from last chapter very neatly.
Review By [DofEire] • Date [18 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "MONEY, MONEY, MONEY…MONEY" from fanreaderonetwo

"Hermione responded “Torpedo 8 is returning to base with Air Force One eta in 15.” One of the decisions the group had made was not to call the teams, team 1, team 2, and team three, but to mask the transmissions to confuse the enemy. Fleur had commented that Starfleet regulation 47a said in conditions where comms were possibly compromised, no uncoded traffic was allowed. Harry had taken that to heart and Hermione decided to call the groups from the aircraft carrier Enterprise during the WWII battle of Midway."

Torpedo 8 (Torpedo Squadron 8 VT-8)operated off the USS Hornet (CV-8) at the Battle of Midway, not the Enterprise.
"Torpedo Squadron 8 (VT-8) was a United States Navy squadron of World War II torpedo bombers. VT-8 was assigned initially to the Air Group of the aircraft carrier USS Hornet, joining Hornet shortly after her commissioning in October 1941."

At that time the US Navy combat squadron ID #s were the same as the hull #s of their "home" aircraft carrier, tho that system was abandoned as _many_ more squadrons were formed during WW2.
Thus at Midway the USS Enterprise (CV-6) carried squadrons with the numeral _6_.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the critique. Ship changed to USS Hornet.
Review By [fanreaderonetwo] • Date [18 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "MONEY, MONEY, MONEY…MONEY" from Harry
*Snaps Fingers* Darn! I was hoping to see the Animated version of Thunderbirds from back in the 80's in action. But, any extra help in taking out HYDRA and her allies will be welcome. Now, I need to see the Captain America movie so I can get to work getting The Lady AND the Pack into action!
Comments from author:
Harry I chose the Movieverse as this transitions from their last scene and all the primary roles are on the Island. The wacky thing is the actor Bill Paxton who is the clarvoiant in agents of Shield played Jeff Tracy in the Movie
Review By [Harry] • Date [18 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "SINK THE BISMARCK!!!" from Harry
SITH SCUM! AIM is not messing around. If ONLY they knew what the real reason for all of this was, they would back out in a HEARTBEAT! And B: Airwolf is inbound toward Hogwarts. If needed, she and the Wolfpack CAN assist in this mission! NO ONE harms those that are allies of the Slayer! And if you need info on what the Pack can do, just contact the Jedi or Faith. They can fill you in very easily on what both The Lady and the Wolfpack can do!

Ragnarok 6, Airwolf acknowledges. Going Suborbital and heading toward New York. Upon arrival, will have weapon system hot and ready. The teeth WiLL be out and ready to teach those that threaten this world that NO ONE messes with our allies! Airwolf clear and heading toward New York.
Comments from author:
Airwolf this is Rangarok 6 Actual.

Adjust course to NYC and be in position to support operations in area for retrieval of assets and support in area. Information being sent by sub file on sub channel. Any Id'ed as hostile you are authorized to go weapons free. Communicate with Avengers Tower and forces inbound under General Summers or Admiral Kirk. 25th Marine Air Cav (SA-43's) Inbound to supply fighter support. Elements from JFB Langley are not available at this time.

Rangarok 6 Actual clear
Review By [Harry] • Date [15 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "SINK THE BISMARCK!!!" from DarthTenebrus
Hey, nice. Love the coordination between assets, but a bit more detail could be put into this.

This could have been a much longer chapter and a bit more adrenaline pumping for the extra effort.
Comments from author:
The reason for the lack of what you call adrenaline action is that in a future chapter the after action reports will be discussed and from that revelations will be had. Remember about the potential German breach. It could be HYDRA testing their tech. Several Shield locations are under siege or have been taken over. This will make the slayers very angry and a certainly Dr. Banner with his Anger Management issues. But more info coming in the future chapters.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [9 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "His body and his limbs were brazen" from markuop
Ragnarok 6 Actual to Olympian 6 Actual
please report position to coordinate with other forces on ground. Attempting to prevent blue vs blue
please advise
Ragnarok 6 Actual clear
Comments from author:
From General Alexander, Commander Elysian forces, to Ragnarok 6

Delivered this day by the Hand of Hermes, Lord of messengers, and through the grace of Athena, goddess of War and Wisdom.

Note - Elysian and Olympian deployment is as follows:

Under my command - Forces entrenched along the Southern Lake shore (Highway 6 to I90) from Lorain to Lakewood. Steel Mills at Lorain are secured and deploying additional forces for transport and ground support.
Western line of defense being established South of Lorain to Elyria. Amazon and centaur forces running incursions into North Ridgeville.
Apache attack force, call sign 'Shedu' is deployed to provide air support to my overall command. The AH-Aqulia is being used for scouting and oversight, and has provided medical evacuation where required.
Specialist Units, including Slayers, the Templars, the Argonauts, and the Warrior Princesses, are conducting scouting expeditions into enemy held territories, South and East of established defence lines. Please ensure that Hermes, or one of the lesser Olympians are dispatched to provide warning for these groups if attack is imminent in their locations. Hercules has the Furies with him, and it would be unwise to antagonise them with friendly fire.

Under command of the Lord Zeus, supporting armies of Odin and Valhalla, phalanxes of Elysian troops are deployed on the Eastern side of the city, along I90.

Under Command of Odysseus, the Black Fleet has secured the main body of the Lake, where it is supporting evacuation efforts and protecting transport corridors from Northern shore.

Under command of Lord Hades and Lord Ares, the main body of Elysian forces are advancing on the plains of Hell, sealing incursion portals and supporting Bolo attack on commanders of hellside forces.

Under command of Talos and his brothers, the warforged are assembling and a number of Trojan Horses are standing by to take them into battle. Please advise allied forces not to fire on any figure over 50ft tall if it is wearing bronze armor, as they are on our side, and may be the best defense against some of the larger demonic entities invulnerable to normal weapons.

The unredeemed dead are wandering around somewhere in the middle, causing trouble for demon and undead forces alike. This group will not be troubled by allied attack, as they are only present in ghostly form and cannot be killed again. If disrupted, they will reassemble at the side of the Styx, where Charon will either ferry them to their reward, or bring them back for another go at redemption.

We hold, and will hold, but are ready to advance. We await further instructions.
Review By [markuop] • Date [6 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "His body and his limbs were brazen" from DarthTenebrus
Hooah! Once again you demonstrate your excellent grasp of the third person narrative, as well as the beauty of mythological literature.

Having mentioned the collaboration of Hephaestus and the Dwarves, of course, alludes to the well-known cooperation of the Greek and Norse deities in this heroic epic. So it begs the question: where is Thor in all this? Where is Baldur? The Lady Sif would also, of course, wish to meet the enemy in glorious battle alongside her Greek compatriots such as Diana the Wonder Woman and the princess Xena.

Xena, Diana, Sif, would the story go were they to meet on the field of battle against the demonic hordes and the foul denizens of Musspelheim? Let's see...what to call them...there are the Four Horsemen of Christian mythology, but these four are heroic women, goddesses and demigoddesses, not harbingers of cataclysm.

And who would weave the skeanes of their respective destinies? The Fates? The Norns? Or both?

Food for thought here....ya hungry?
Comments from author:
You know - if I was going to bring Death into this (in person *g* ) it would probably be Death of the Endless, rather than the figure on a pale horse ...

It is more than likely that Thor, Sif, and Freya are fighting out in the field, and now that Odin and Zeus have teamed up, their children may well find themselves fighting side by side. The final push is coming, so who knows? :-)
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [5 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "His body and his limbs were brazen" from Harry
Its good to see Hephaestus and company again. I was wondering when we would see his great statues come forth again, and now we have. Time to get things ready for the battle to close the Cleveland Hellmouth, with these Phalanxes being part of the battle.
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "AN ACT OF TREASON AND SEDITION" from (Recent Donor)Manchester
Oh, please, if you're really arguing that military success can be inherited as presented by your descendants of WWII commanders, the latest Montgomery is NOT someone I'd like to serve under during Code Ragnarok if he's anything like the original. Should we expect an overweening ego while using armies previously built up for success by his predecessors, an insistence on fifteen to one odds despite the time necessary for this will also allow the demons to increase their own ranks (repeat to infinity while never deciding to attack), and a total inability to give credit to his allies?

If you want to effectively mirror the next generation of British generals in the Buffyverse in terms of between 1939-1945, then use the best of them all: William Slim.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Manchester] • Date [4 Apr 14] • Not Rated
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