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Review of chapter "AND FOR SOMETHING COMPLETELY DIFFERENT" from DarthTenebrus
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Good job with the commentary, though I know next to nothing about cricket; being American (big shock, right?), I'd have to know what a crumpet is first, which I don't.

As for the teams, I've noticed that at least one player on each team is Force-sensitive. Two we know right off the bat; they're Slayers. So what of the other Jedi? Won't they get to play, as second stringers at least? I imagine putting Jedi in the starting teams would make it a bit unfair for the rest, yes?
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [22 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "AND FOR SOMETHING COMPLETELY DIFFERENT" from Harry
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As a History student, I RECOGNIZED that code phrase that Saul just got. That was the same message that the Japanese fleet got just before their attack on Pearl Harbor. Something tells me that there is going to be either a surgical or a sneak attack of some sort. I feel sorry for those that have gotten these orders issued to be used against them. Time to prepare for the strike!
Comments from author:
You are correct. I am not saying anything else yet.
Review By [Harry] • Date [22 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "COFFEE BLACK" from DarthTenebrus
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Did Vasiliy Borodin get resurrected the same way as Agent Coulson and Gunny Hartman? As I recall he had been shot dead aboard the Red October by that cook that was working as a spy for either the KGB or the GRU...

Btw what class of vessel is the Joyce Summers? She a tender, a frigate, or a Battlestar? And her CO? Last I saw from reading the novel by Clancy his rank in the Soviet Navy was Captain First Rank, as was Melekhin. As a submarine operations instructor his nickname was "Vilnius Nastavnik". And what role is VADM Janeway going to have in all this?

Edit/Reply 15JUL2014: Is there an image file for the Nadesico class heavy cruiser? Cuz I can't find one.
Comments from author:
The reason I said bookverse to start was that Borodin was not killed in the book, only in the movie. USS Joyce Summers was mentioned as a Nadesico class Heavy Cruiser with stealth. This is perfect for Marko. As for his rank. That is being discussed between the Russians, the Americans and the RSS high command. Most likely RADM. Also my Russian spelling is not good at all. Spoiler Expect Dr. Ronald Jones to Join the crew, not as a po2, but an officer.

As for Janeway, she is in the Science Branch, so the rifts will interest her. JFB Hogwarts is being used as an RSS fleet command. Therefore she would show up to get the information. But for her part, it was meant for comedy relief

Edit 07152014 you would have to watch the anime to see the ship, but I think there is a picture somewhere.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [15 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "DIPLOMACY IN SPACE" from (Past Donor)PzkwVIb
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By the way. The colonial equivalent fir a year is Jahren (pronounced yar - en) not yarn.
Review By [(Past Donor)PzkwVIb] • Date [15 Jul 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "DIPLOMACY IN SPACE" from DarthTenebrus
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Short and sweet. This is turning into a series of vignettes showing thw inevitable ramp up to Overlord-Erie. I still like it, though; your posted chapters convey a sense of atmosphere even though progression is somewhat slow.

So now Buffy is wearing at least three hats here. Head of ISWC Slayer Directorate, Jedi Knight, Combat Aviator.

And of course the Commonwealth and the British Empire have to give proper warning to the Cylon nation of the classic Battlestar series. Leave this system and don't come back, or watch your homeworld get reduced to rubble and ashes.
Comments from author:
As any Chess player would know, you have to place the pieces in place before you checkmate your rival. The pieces are being placed. As for the means of the destruction. Consider what The allies have in their inventory, and the fact for our purposes, the Cylon Homeword is Tectonically Unstable.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [15 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "DIPLOMACY IN SPACE" from Harry
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Well, Iblis and the Cylons have been warned. And they should heed that warning. Now, I need to get the team ready to be trained by the pack written and then, get The Lady ready for Overlord Eire. Code Ragnarok is coming to a head and its getting close to Balls to the Walls time. *Starts playing Airwolf Theme*
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "COFFEE BLACK" from FireWolfe
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I really liked this chapter and look forward to seeing the Joyce Summers in action. I loved red october it was one of clancy's finest works. I like Janeway as well. Just a slight point the last sentence has a typo. It says "here" instead of "her", Not a big deal but just thought I would mention it as those types of mistakes are missed by spell check and when rereading ones own work as well because its to close to the correct word to be caught. I have enjoyed this story despite the bsg 2003 inclusion. I am kind of glad other fandoms are showing up finally. That one was getting old. Anyway nicely done.
Comments from author:
The Vulcans have a saying. IDIC or Infinite Diversity in Infinite Combinations. Each group brings an asset to the table. The BSG 2003, brought the ships and the Commander of the space fleet. Others bring other assets into play. The Demons do not know what ton of bricks are about to hit them. Thank you for your comments.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [12 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "COFFEE BLACK" from Harry
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I can hear Janeway SCREAMING for her Coffee! Even in Voyager, Katherine Janeway was known for her love of coffee. And its a pleasure to see The Red October crew here. Great Book and a very well done movie. And as for the people on the train: I may have FINALLY gotten my new trainee's picked out!
Review By [Harry] • Date [12 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Quest...The End of the Trail ?" from Zeviz
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I liked the Quest (and the rest of the story). And it was overdue for somebody to tie in HP, although with Stargate, Buffyverse, and HP all in the same world, it's getting a little crowded even before all the visitors came. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you. And if you think it's crowded now, just keep reading.
Review By [Zeviz] • Date [11 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "THE BLACK FLAG AND AMOK TIME" from cwolf
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lol I love Bones contribution
Comments from author:
That is Bones for you. Any time he does not have to patch up Kirk, Spock, or telling them, "He or she is dead Jim" is a happy day for him
Review By [cwolf] • Date [9 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "THE BLACK FLAG AND AMOK TIME" from Harry
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I think that the demons in the Cleveland area just got a message that is going to resonate throughout their groups. It will help to get them to consider going BACK to where they came from! As for Spock, I see him and Fleur mating.
Comments from author:
Your are correct. But what will Spock's Father think (Spoilers for later chapters. The Vulcans are sending an ambassador, but from what reality, the 09 reality?) Who Knows, the blood fires are not selective.
Review By [Harry] • Date [9 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Operation Steel Valley....part 2..The Approach" from Zeviz
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In reply to your AN, I like this chapter, and think that the constant PoV switches kept things from getting too repetitive. And I'd put "long chapter" in the "good", rather than "bad" column. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. That was the first time I'd tried coordinating that many separate "elements", and it's nice to know that it worked.
Review By [Zeviz] • Date [8 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Beachhead in Hell Part 1" from sorawithans
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I thought the Bolos were going to help hold the line in Cleavland. Nope, just throw them directly into hell.
Can't think of a better place for them.
Review By [sorawithans] • Date [7 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ZADOK THE PRIEST" from Harry
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Its time. Now that the Magical Rulers have been notified and appointed, and APPROVED by her Majesty and the entire Magical Community, that area of the war has been taken care of. And I KNOW of Churchill's speech. Its one of the greatest speeches of WWII *Never Give up, NEVER SURRENDER!* And with the weapons that have been seen, its time to start to make the demons BURN! And the Lady WILL be happy to do her part! *BURN BABY BURN! DISCO INFERNO!*
Review By [Harry] • Date [4 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "THE ROYAL INSURANCE POLICY" from DarthTenebrus
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This got a 9 for some minor discrepancies with use of tense (shifting from present tense to past tense where tense should remain consistent throughout the work) plus one instance of a wrong word used early on (retaining should read "pertaining"). Otherwise, nice job.

Big news from Admiral Piett? An urgent developing situation? Sounds like ole Thanaton is up to mischief, methinks.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [30 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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