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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from marella
Review:
I just started the story, but I find Buffy extremely out of character here. Not that she is traveling with a vampire-or even meeting other vampires and doing okay as long as they weren't killing. Buffy has grown in the area of greys. However, the fact that she can comment so casually after being told that Caroline is under Damon's thrall-she even calls her a toy-isn't in character at all. She should be all over that. A vampire taking away a human's will, and the will of a teenager at that-and using her for blood and sex? Would not be happening. Damon would be being swept up before he could blink. Even if it were only for the blood, she'd stake him. Buffy has grown in the area of greys and in seeing that not all demons of any type are evil, but Damon's acts with Caroline would definitely be evil to her.
Comments from author:
Buffy's not the same person she was in Sunnydale and she's not exactly canon Buffy. She doesn't age in this story. And that's affected her. She's a harder version and things that would've bothered Buffy from the show don't bother Buffy from my story as much. She's not going to walk into Lexi's friend's home and start laying down the law and killing his brother. Doesn't mean she won't keep an eye on Damon, but she's not going to kill him.
Review By [marella] • Date [16 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from burmafrdnow
Review:
dumb story.
Comments from author:
Bit rude, don't you think? It's called CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM. That was just a crappy comment.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [4 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from rafestark
Review:
I don't know anything about Vampire Diaries, but this story is great. You sell the transition in Buffy/Damon's relationship really well, although I still doubt I'd ever forgive him for killing Lexi - but then, Buffy tried to kill Anya (among other things) so has a bit of a grey area approach to death.

I can see it's been a while since the story's been updated, but i have a whole bunch of chapters left to read - maybe by the time I get to 76 you'll be inspired again!

Thanks for sharing the story
Comments from author:
To be honest, I completely forgot that I posted this here. Lol I've been updating on fanfiction.net. I'm up to chapter 100 over there
Review By [rafestark] • Date [10 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from MistofRainbows
Review:
Awww... totally not fair for Lexi still dying... maybe Willow can bring her back... (after asking her first) Totally worth it.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [19 Dec 12] • Not Rated
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