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Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from tosca
Review:
Excellent story! I really enjoyed the different POVs on the situation.
Comments from author:
Yes, I like stories where a reasonable interpretation of the available evidence leads to equally reasonable, but completely wrong conclusions. ;-)
Review By [tosca] • Date [14 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from AnimeRonin
Review:
A little bit of Mama Bear, a little bit of Papa Wolf (Hyena?) and... poof, case over. Nice.
Comments from author:
Yeah, you really don't want to mess with the Overprotective Parents (tm), if you don't have to. ;-)
Review By [AnimeRonin] • Date [12 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
fine addition to the series, thank you. thrilled to read that an update is coming for the first part. thanks in advance.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing and letting me know you enjoyed the story. ;-)

And I hope the next chapter shows up soon, but it's up to my muse's whims to complete it. ;-(
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [10 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Stationary
Review:
nice. i like how you ended it like any other episode of NCIS.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I couldn't do it any other way, with Gibbs involved. ;-)
Review By [Stationary] • Date [9 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great wrap up.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I though that was the most likely way to have Gibbs back off.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [9 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from LordCorwin
Review:
Very good ending ... :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. I figured that sort of thing was about the only way Gibbs wild be persuaded to not continuing any sort of investigation of Dawn and the others.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [9 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from LordSia
Review:
I like it, even if it's just a one-shot cameo appearance (or whatever the proper term is).
Comments from author:
Thanks. And I'm quite sure what the exact difference is between a crossover and a cameo. Amount of actual screen time, maybe?

Anyway, thanks for reviewing. ;-)
Review By [LordSia] • Date [3 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from burmafrdnow
Review:
UGH

B/X

really hate that pairing.
Comments from author:
Everyone is entitled to their own preferences. I feel the same way about Bangel and Spuffy.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [1 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Typhonis
Review:
Gibbs is going to pull a fast one that will bite him, and his team, in the ass later. My prediction is they hand everything over ...... save they copy it first. After all orders said nitrating about copying the data then handing it over.


Gibbs going after Dawn......well he may spread word around to keep an eye out unofficially , after all she is a person of interest .
Comments from author:
Gibbs and the rest of the team will be discovering a reason they don't want to follow this case up, in the next chapter.
Review By [Typhonis] • Date [1 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Oh that's just gonna make Gibbs look harder.
Great chapter!

Tom.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it.

And Gibbs is gonna have to learn when to back off, or he'll get his nose (and probably the rest of his head) cut off, as a lesson about following orders.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [1 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from MrPowell
Review:
Hmmm... And we all know how well Gibbs and his team lets cases go... Good work, as always
Comments from author:
Thanks. Gibbs will be given some incentive to not follow this up in the next chapter.
Review By [MrPowell] • Date [1 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from cmdruhura
Review:
So there's no direct evidence that Abby or McGee are the hackers but given their reputations they will be subject to an intense grilling should Gibbs continue to push like he is most apt to.
Comments from author:
Well, that's what Mac was told.

And how far will Gibbs go, if it puts his team at risk? Remember, I pointed out in the first chapter that Abby hacked several databases she wasn't cleared to access - that was part of the reason they had to ask the L.A. office to check out things for them.

All of the team routinely ignores any number of laws in their typical investigation. Abby and Tim could easily be charged with a laundry list of cyber crimes, alone.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [1 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from shinysolace
Review:
NCIS, NUMB3RS & JAG, all in one fic?? Oh my god, thanks so much. Really looking forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)

The concluding chapter should be posted shortly.
Review By [shinysolace] • Date [1 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Recent Donor)DonSample
Review:
Fun fact: Sarah MacKenzie knows Gibbs, and much of his team. NCIS started out as a spinoff from JAG. (A two parter that had Gibbs investigating the death of a former JAG officer, and having Harmon Rabb as his prime suspect (he was framed by the guy who really did it). Gibbs, Tony, Abby and Ducky all appeared in it.)

If you keep with the series timeline, Sarah should be at least a full Colonel by now (she got her promotion in the final JAG episode) and Chegwidden in no longer with JAG. Marine MGen Cresswell took over the post after Chegwidden retired, in the final JAG season.
Comments from author:
Yes,Mac does know Gibbs, which is one reason she's being so specific about the orders she's been given, and as far as far as her rank is concerned, this is obviously in some AU version of both JAG and NCIS.

All of these universes exist within the context of my mind and my muses' inspirations, so any discrepancies between the TV shows and my stories mean that the shows' producers got things wrong, obviously. ;-)
Review By [(Recent Donor)DonSample] • Date [1 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from AllenPitt
Review:
Interesting story idea, but of course as in this chapter, higher ups would shut down the investigation, hard. So... since it likely doesn't end here, something else must be about to happen. I'm finding it hard to picture Buffy/Xander, but I suppose anything is possible.
As was pointed out in earlier reviews, Dawn and Connor have a lot in common (magic alters records and memories to create a false ID). Any chance of bringing him into the story somehow? (I wonder if Willow ever realized her memories had been altered to erase him from them?)
Comments from author:
Yeah, Gibbs doesn't like any interference with his investigations, and he's generally not inclined to stop, just because some bigwig says to do so.

Of course, he hasn't met any of the people involved in this particular situation, either.

And as far as the Buffy/Xander ship is concerned, you should read 'Forever And A Day' tro see how and why it developed.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [1 Aug 13] • Not Rated
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