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Review of chapter "War of the Twinkies" from Vornae
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Great story so far, I am glad i found it. PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!
Review By [Vornae] • Date [23 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "War of the Twinkies" from LostDragon
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Hey, UPDATE!!!!!

Please.
Review By [LostDragon] • Date [27 Sep 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "War of the Twinkies" from sprig
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oh boy... the clash of the agencies. lol!!! this is gonna be fun to watch Gibbs headbutt his way into the SCG. i could just see him pissing Buffy and Giles off over the fact of how young their "agents" are. lmao!! and Vance won't be any better as well. hope they find Xander soon. can't wait to see who wants to mate or kill him this time.
Review By [sprig] • Date [24 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "War of the Twinkies" from Eureka
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"So? What do you think? I would like to hear what were your favorite parts... What made you laugh? I wanna know, I wanna know :P
Next chapter on its way. Should be posted very soonish. I hope.
Elza. C. Boe"

So where is more? That was in Aug, this is Nov.... :'(

This is a very good story considering that Xander has been kidnapped and everything, it would be nice to be able to read a new chapter...

(Forgot to rate...)
Comments from author:
yeah, sorry about that.... it's not going as fast as I was hoping.... my Muse isn't cooperating.... I promise to do whatever I need to get her to work... :P
Review By [Eureka] • Date [8 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "War of the Twinkies" from Netchka
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More please, more please! Wanna read more please! Can't wait for more chapters to be posted. Need more Xander stories! :)
Review By [Netchka] • Date [1 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "War of the Twinkies" from Franka
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I re-read the whole story before Chapter 6 and I'm wondering if Xander still has only one eye or is it somehow fixed. In an earlier chapter Tony says that Xander was once hospitalized for losing his eye but it must be a mistake since he still has two...

Besides that, I like this story and I'm happy you continue it!
Review By [Franka] • Date [28 Aug 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "War of the Twinkies" from AnimeRonin
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Twinkie theft, a crime punishable by tickling until the offender pees themselves (if female). A serious matter.
Review By [AnimeRonin] • Date [28 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "War of the Twinkies" from Harry
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Somebody snatched Xander? Why do I see World War Slayer about to happen in DC? Because when you snatch one of the founding members of the Scooby Gang, you either return them unharmed and in one piece, or prepare to see the city that you are based in turned into a war zone! And you do NOT want that!
Comments from author:
oh I love it... WWS..... might use it in the upcoming chapters...... yeah... bad things are about to happan to even bad-er people :P
Review By [Harry] • Date [28 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "War of the Twinkies" from slmncpm
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i loved that buffy hates twinkies but ate them anyway and that they rub gibbs the wrong way. *laughs* don't get me wrong, i love gibbs, but riling him up makes me laugh. i love this, thank you for writing this chapter, can't wait to see more soon! *hands you scones*
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [28 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Chopped Liver and The Bimbo That Wasn't" from Harry
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Dawn coming in from England and Buffy working undercover as a hooker? What has the new Council become? And how will Gibbs and his team react to being second string on this investigation? Questions that you, as the author are the only one who can answer.
Review By [Harry] • Date [8 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Who the hell is Xander Harris ?" from Harry
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There are those in DC who know what Xander fights against and to a lesser extent why. Even some of the demons know better than to mess with Xander and he has earned their respect. Now, its a time to start making calls and find out who snatched him before the Slayers come a calling!
Review By [Harry] • Date [8 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mystery upon mystery" from Harry
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I think that the team is going to be shocked by what they find. And that flashing light: Its either a emergency beacon, or its Buffy and the gang trying to reach him.
Review By [Harry] • Date [8 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Could be worse, right?" from Harry
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When you earn the respect of this NCIS team, look out. They will not rest till Xander is found. And if he is dead or hurt, RUN! Do not walk, do not be Tawdry. For if you are like that, they will find you. And they will make you wish that you were DEAD!
Review By [Harry] • Date [8 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shadow, six o'clock" from Harry
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I like the reason that Xander went to work for NCIS. It makes sense. Now, lets see who put the kibosh on Xander and why.
Review By [Harry] • Date [8 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Chopped Liver and The Bimbo That Wasn't" from bradsan
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I know it's Xander centered but I love the way you let Dawn and Buffy take over the investigation and how they can't do nothing about it. I always love it when Gibbs get mad and now it will be even more frustrating for him. Those "kids" thinking they can do better then him, they are just kids. I can see him thinking that part. the funny thing is, they can. Do better I mean.

Can't what will come next.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [10 Jun 13] • Not Rated
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