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Cousin Eli and the White Witch

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TheologyDiscography
Review:
Haha, I love that. Beautifully done, and I like how you wove Tara into the storyline.

I'd really love to see more of this, if you had any additional inspiration.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I adore Tara and Eliot together in any context, so I have every intention of writing more. I just have to figure out how it all fits together.
Review By [TheologyDiscography] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and intriguing opening.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from hand
Review:
Loved this! I'd like to see Tara interact with the whole crew and not tell them all about magic. Can't wait to see where you go with this. Let me know if you still need a beta.
Comments from author:
Yes! I want to keep the crew separate from the mystical side of things. It's just not an element that impacts them and they've got plenty of other things they do.
I do still need a beta, but I don't have very much else written for this yet, just a couple of later moments. I'd be happy to send you what I have (or if you see anything in this first chapter that needs fixing, that would be awesome) but I haven't made any progress on this for like three months :/ (I do have another Tara/Eliot story brewing that could use a bit of input, if that's something you're interested in.)
My email's xyl.weaver@gmail.com . Feel free to contact me!
Review By [hand] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from HarmMarie
Review:
Liked this.
Review By [HarmMarie] • Date [12 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)improvedpeanut
Review:
Such a neat mix, I love Tara and Eliot, and the two of them family and interacting is awesome! Can't wait to read more :)
Comments from author:
Thank you. I just want Tara&Eliot all the time, but no one else seems to be writing it.
Review By [(Past Donor)improvedpeanut] • Date [12 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PATM
Review:
An outline I would like to see fully clothed.
Review By [PATM] • Date [11 Jan 13] • Not Rated
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