Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Absence
Very well done, I'm impressed and at the same time horrified. Congratulations on a well written piece.
Review By [Absence
] • Date [31 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TaraLi
I could definitely do with more of this. As others have said, for a non-native writer, your command of English is excellent. It's certainly better than some 90% of the native English fan fiction writers.
You capture the feel of the unusual and mystical characters, showing very wonderfully how they experience things, and make us realise that we don't truly understand it.
Review By [TaraLi
] • Date [29 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Your English is very good for a non native speaker. I quite like this story too, one quiet moment in his life where Xander can speak freely. At least he knows that he will have more than one chance to speak to her, before the end.
PS. I think you might have to mention Sandman in your disclaimer too.
Review By [Gideon
] • Date [29 Jan 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LFW
Very interesting and a very scary idea for Xander's life
Review By [LFW
] • Date [29 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]