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Review of chapter "What Doesn't Kill You..." from XxxbladeangelxxX
Review:
Lovely story,
All of your characters are engaging and well written. And allot of the details, such as Cordelia's belief that she no longer has her soul and that it is safe with the others, brings their inherent vulnerability to the fore. It also highlights the trust that the four Scoobies have built up over their years (don't know which season this is set in) as Demon Hunters/Apocalypse Stoppers. which I think is a great addition to the story, since it provides a great lead in for the four of them to team up against the organizations that have ruined their lives.

Overall I like the tone of the story though personally I feel that having an age difference between Cordelia and Xander messes up the dynamics of their relationship since a majority of their banter and interactions are based on the fact that even though the two of them are supposedly on the same wave length (read 'teenagers') they both hail from completely different sides of the spectrum. And placing them in different age groups takes away from the experience of their banter and Ironic parallels. All in all I'll be keeping an ear to the ground for the next update.

PS: I'm curious about the vengeance demon that granted The Wish, was it Anya or Halfrek(?) who did. Oh and will Buffy get her comeuppance for the shit she pulled?
PPS: I hope you will soon update The X Factor and this story I'm interested in where you're taking the plot in these two stories.
PPPS: sorry for the long winded review this is my first one on this site.
Review By [XxxbladeangelxxX] • Date [2 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What Doesn't Kill You..." from jgoodman
Review:
Love this story and can't wait to read more
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [28 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What Doesn't Kill You..." from TrustNoOne
Review:
This is one of my favorite fics. I love the way you've transformed the characters, especially Xander. Plus, Xan with the Winter Soldier is kinda, totally hot. I'm guessing you'll put WS back into stasis at some point to reduce the age gap, but I really cant wait to see them together. Plus, the sheer mockery that Cordy could throw at Xan for his feelings would be epic. Please, update soon.
Review By [TrustNoOne] • Date [22 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Doesn't Kill You..." from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [13 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mind Over Matter" from MistofRainbows
Review:
Considering what else Xander lived through and the fact that he wasn't a child... going ... I call bullshit. You should probably toss up some rape warnings and slash warnings...

huh apparently there is a slash warning on this... never mind...
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [28 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Doesn't Kill You..." from banditdoz
Review:
Hey great chapter I thought you caught Cordelias persona perfectly :-)
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [27 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What Doesn't Kill You..." from lilykep
Review:
I love this story. I get excited every time I see a post. :)
Review By [lilykep] • Date [27 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mind Over Matter" from shakeval
Review:
i'm surprised Xander didn't try to kill those 'owners' at any point once he had decent control of his powers, even before he could fly, which would easily give him an out.
Review By [shakeval] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mind Over Matter" from AlecMcDowell
Review:
Great start to this one. I love the characters chosen for the four Scoobies and even though you've used Hellion and X23 before these are good twists on the characters. I especially like seeing the way this Julian is growing up; should make any future interactions with the X-Men interesting. That is if he even ends up joining them at all. He seems to have a bit of a crush on Bucky after all. I'm looking forward to hearing more about the wider Marvel universe you are using here; if it's close to a comic verse or the movie verse or one of your own styling. Hope to see more soon.
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [25 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mind Over Matter" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Well. Xander certainly ended up in hell. If he ever gets near Buffy again and he remembers what was done to him there will be hell to pay. From Cordelia too based on what I know of X-23.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [23 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mind Over Matter" from Oakheart
Review:
It was clear that Xander et al had the memories of their 18+ year-old selves. So how was he not able to affect his situation? It seems to lack a degree of purpose, to write the story with certain characters, yet strip them of their (perceived) defining personalities.

Then again, we're only in chapter two. I'm probably jumping the gun with this lineof questioning. Looking forward to more.

SD
Review By [Oakheart] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mind Over Matter" from lilykep
Review:
Poor Xander. I can't wait for Cordy's story. I hope they all get back together soon.
Review By [lilykep] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mind Over Matter" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I'm actually quite curious that they didn't combine Xander's physical training and use of telekensis when they started the physical training. Also, very surprised that Xander didn't keep in mind a media reference to another "Six" which he might have used to keep some additional "intellectual" awareness going on.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mind Over Matter" from snakeyes
Review:
While I Look forward to where your going with this story you have kinda gotten rid of Xander, I cant imagine Xander at any form from the Buffy universe just rolling over and accepting this and not even trying to destroy these people now it seems he is just an obedient little destructive dog.
Review By [snakeyes] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mind Over Matter" from leonamasha
Review:
Wow. That was just wow. It was poignant and yet still gave me hope there in the end. Definitely looking forward to what happened to the others. Thanks for writing this. It's great so far.
Review By [leonamasha] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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