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Review of chapter "Chapter Eight: Ain't No Rest for the Wicked" from Raider
Review:
an interesting idea...I really like it. we get to see sparklings raised by a human.
Review By [Raider] • Date [5 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight: Ain't No Rest for the Wicked" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
Great chappie, So I am wondering what comes next.
Comments from author:
And I really hope that you don't guess! (It's a bit of an odd twist that's been in my brain since the inception of this story. *laughs*) Mikaela and her little brood still have some obstacles to overcome before they see the Autobots again someday. Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [23 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight: Ain't No Rest for the Wicked" from JamesBrown
Review:
really liking this story-good characterization,
fits well into the movies universe without any real AU
and a good read, just needs more frequent updates :)
although I don't believe for a minute that
Sam, bumblebee or Optimus bought it for a second
so I'll be expecting a rescue eventually.. Hopefully.
Comments from author:
I was trying to fit this story in a bit with the movies, wherein which she is simply gone - and they supposedly broke up while he was still at college or something, and nobody seems to be in contact with her after that. It's all pretty vague (and I admit I did not watch those later ones). I know that the reasoning has more to do with disputes behind the screen but I really hated the idea that Mikaela would just -leave-. I mean, even if she broke up with Sam, she still went through all of that shit with the Autobots, had those strong ties as well (especially to Bee).

So, yeah, sorry for the mini-rant (it's a bit late here and I might be over-tired *laughs) and you still have time to wait for that rescue. I have some more pot-holes in Mikaela's life still to come. Thanks for reviewing, JamesBrown!
Review By [JamesBrown] • Date [23 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven: Breakable" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
how sweet I am glad that they were able to help her and weren't so freaked out to not be able to do so. great chappy looking forward to more. : )
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing, FireDragon. And yes, after Mikaela calmed them a bit they were able to work together and help her quite well. :)
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [10 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven: Breakable" from (Current Donor)Sithspit
Review:
Great update after the long break. Thanks.
Comments from author:
*laughs* Yup, none of my stories are quite down for the count - they'll randomly pop back up with an update when you least expect it. This one, in fact, has a great deal of plot already written out.

Anyways, I'm happy you're enjoying Mikaela and the little bots bonding. *grin*
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [10 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Back In Your Head" from (Current Donor)liability
Review:
Just found this story, I think it's great, looking forward to an update
Comments from author:
And -I- just caught this review - so I am sorry about the lateness of my reply. It might be a bit before the next update is out, liability. If I am being honest, I have been caught up in an HP story where I have been posting a new chapter daily lately and this fic has been taking the backburner. Never fear though, the next chapter of it (as well as bit of a lot of the rest) are written - so, it is definitely no abandoned.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [(Current Donor)liability] • Date [31 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Back In Your Head" from RogueAngel
Review:
I really hope you come back and update this soon. I know you said that it would be awhile before she makes it back to Sam and the Autobots, I'm just hoping for now that she can get the sparklings and herself away from the people that are holding her. looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
I will be back to this story - I have loads of bits written for a little further on. I have just had a bit of shit luck lately when it comes to health and while down had all of these other stories crowd in my brain. I will be back to writing Mikaela soon!

Thanks for reviewing, RougeAngel.
Review By [RogueAngel] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Back In Your Head" from Markelo
Review:
Aww she named after Superman,Batman, and Woner Woman.
Comments from author:
That she did. I was going through a few different choices for the new little ones in my head but when I thought of those three I knew I wouldn't think of anything else that would delight me more (and perhaps that's not a responsible way to write but it does tend to be an enjoyable one *laughs*).

Thanks so much for the review!
Review By [Markelo] • Date [5 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Back In Your Head" from Mackon
Review:
Wow, I'm really enjoying this lots of questions about what/who/why is going on of course but its a great character piece and an intriguing plot. Would appreciate a bit better description of what Lovely Clark Bruce and Diana look like but that's the only thing missing.

Thanks for sharing and I hope for an update soon.
Review By [Mackon] • Date [14 Mar 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Back In Your Head" from HebiR
Review:
Oh, I loved every moment of this. I eagerly await more to love.
Review By [HebiR] • Date [9 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Back In Your Head" from SamTurner
Review:
Nice start.
Review By [SamTurner] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Back In Your Head" from (Current Donor)Sithspit
Review:
Clark, Bruce, and Diana...may they live up to their namesakes.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Back In Your Head" from RogueAngel
Review:
really enjoying this. I love how Lovely is taking note of mikaela's actings and reusing them. kinda like a human baby would but at a faster rate. just a question did you name the new sparklings after the main DC three hero's. If yea, then shouldn't diane be diana? sorry it's just i'm abit of a comic nut, so when i read clark and bruce I automatically thought Diana (Wonder woman)
Comments from author:
Oh, I knew I needed to double check on those names. I'm posting as soon as I finish chapters and -thought- it sounded right, I guess it was just one letter off. *laugh* I'll go change it now.

And I'm really glad you like how Lovely is reusing Mikaela's action's - I figure it's how human children learn so why not Cybertronian?

Thanks for taking the time to review - I'm really glad you caught that name for me early!
Review By [RogueAngel] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Back In Your Head" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
I am enjoying this. Is Sam and the Transformers going to come save her and the little ones? Or is she going to have to get out of it on her own? looking forward to more. and I like their names all names of superheros, except Lovely. (Which is a cute name) more please.
Comments from author:
Sam and the Transformers won't come back into this until quite a bit later - I feel hesitant to say more because I have a few weird twist along the way that I don't want to spoil. And I'm glad you like all the names I really like Lovely - and I felt she would always think herself special no matter how different her name was from the others. But I wanted the triplets (what I refer to them as later) to have something that grouped them together and went with the (Male-Male-Female) dynamic I also knew I wanted.

Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Breathe In" from ShalaDakiri
Review:
I'm liking the development in this. I liked Mikaela in the first two movies but never saw the third, so I didn't even know she wasn't there. (As much as I like Optimus Prime, I thought they cheapened the second movie by bringing him back to life).

Anyway, with the way Mikaela is bonding with the sparklings, those scientists might find themelves on the receiving end of a few pranks and a breakout once they've matured a little.

Edit: Well, part of my opinion about O.P. is from the original 80's animated movie. He died, and leadership passed to Hot Rod, who became Rodimus Prime.
Comments from author:
Thank ya. To be honest my watching of the movies is patchy as well - I know for certain I saw the first, I watched at least parts of the second and anything more than that I got from Wikipedia. *laughs* It's probably terrible to admit, but my actual love of the characters came from reading -way- to much fanfic.

As for Optimus coming back I feel rather odd about that because within that world (if only just the Movie-verse) death was set up as having actual permanence - such as Jazz's death in the first movie. It's not the Buffy-verse where dead things don't stay dead. So, the screen-writers should have either decided to kill him or not because if bringing a bot back to life was an option it should have been something on the table all along.

Anyways, thank you for taking the time to review - I appreciate the feedback and am truly delighted you're enjoying the bonding.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [25 Feb 13] • Not Rated
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