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Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Spica
Review:
Pretty good story, more please?
Comments from author:
Thanks, and trying to work on that. Next chapter is nearly finished, but I'm having problems with the final section.
Review By [Spica] • Date [13 Sep 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from CageFire
Review:
Interesting I suppose. It's been some time. I'll be looking forward to seeing more I guess.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [19 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from DragonBard
Review:
One mistake.

Venus is fluent in English, and lived in Britain for several years during the Sailor V storyline.
Comments from author:
Actually, that was only true in the anime, and I'm using manga continuity (mostly).
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [18 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Rich
Review:
I don't know the Sailor Moon universe at all, so I can't comment on that aspect of the story. But the Stagate characters sound right, and the basic plotline seems interesting. I'll read more of this.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Rich] • Date [17 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Gideon
Review:
I'm sure they will be useful allies for each other, if they can get some trust established.
Comments from author:
Of course, and the NID isn't going to make things easier.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [21 Apr 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from AllenPitt
Review:
One wonders what Teal'c makes of all this. The Tauri live on a very strange world.
Comments from author:
Indeed
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [19 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Letomo
Review:
Looks like an interesting and unique crossover. Can't wait to read more!
Review By [Letomo] • Date [16 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from JimmX
Review:
Nifty idea. And the writing of the text itself is decent so far.

But the misspelling of mistery for mystery in the summary nearly made me pass it by. Plus "Chapter One" followed by "Chapter 1" for the two chapter titles doesn't inspire confidence. :-)
Comments from author:
D'oh!

I'll correct it ASAP.

And thanks.
Review By [JimmX] • Date [9 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from FanFictionDreamer
Review:
interesting. and, as a previous reviewer pointed out, certainly unique. looking forward to see how it turns out. but so far, I love reading it!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [FanFictionDreamer] • Date [1 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Genuka
Review:
Wonderful opening. I look forward to seeing what you do with it.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Moderator)acs
Review:
A great start. Unique. More please.
Comments from author:
Thank you, and working on it. If there are no problems, I should have chapter 1 by the weekend.
Review By [(Moderator)acs] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Not Rated
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