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The Oncoming Storm

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Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Harry
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Sounds like the Illusive Man has his own agenda, similar to the Cigarette Smoking Man from the X-Files. And if that is the case, then prepare for A LOT of problems!
Review By [Harry] • Date [22 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Harry
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These creatures that are preying on the dead remind me of either carrion eaters or vampires. Either way, they are going to be TERMINATED! Now, its time to get the people that they can from Mars, and then start the Rally to save the Alliance from these monsters!
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Harry
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Things are starting to hit the fan, and faster than anyone expected. Its like the X-Files: Mulder and his battle against the Consortium and the Grays. And the Illusive Man reminds me of the CSM, who was Mulder's nemesis.
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Narf
Review:
Nice update keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Review By [Narf] • Date [6 Jul 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Raider
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as always, quite well done sir.
Review By [Raider] • Date [11 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Selias
Review:
So, is this just a novelization of the the third game and time skip between the second and third, or are things going to start changing?
Comments from author:
Things have already happened differently than they did in the game and I intend for the changes to grow as I go, some of what happens will follow the cannon events but enough will change to make this story unique I hope. (razial)
Review By [Selias] • Date [10 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Narf
Review:
A great start I look forward to seeing what you do with The Mass Effect story. THanks and bye.
Review By [Narf] • Date [5 Jun 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Raider
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as always, well done.
Review By [Raider] • Date [3 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Muadzin
Review:
Am I the only one who thought that with a title called 'The Oncoming Storm' this could only possibly ever be a Doctor Who crossover? ;)
Review By [Muadzin] • Date [3 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Harry
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I know what Shepard and his friends are saying. Too often we have ignored problems coming up on the horizon, only to realize too late that its hit us full on. I just hope that he and his allies can pull things together to stop this invasion.
Review By [Harry] • Date [3 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Narf
Review:
A dam fine start keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Review By [Narf] • Date [6 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Raider
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very well done sir, I look forwards to seeing where this goes.
Review By [Raider] • Date [3 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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